- Aug 4, 2020
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When the love of your life has gone and you're contemplating running away to be with them, you tend not to end up fucking other people in the short term... Maybe the mc of this story would, but most people would be focused on being with the person they love, and the logistics of finding them, not randomly fucking other people, no matter how they are consoling them:I wrote that she was comforted by someone and then it came to sex.
That's not a big deal. It is in play that the boy's parents filed or wanted to file charges against Neil and the MC. The MC then says himself that he doesn't know why it didn't happen. Ergo, a third party must have intervened on behalf of Neil and the MC.
That may be so, since the diary came from the grandparents. But they will have read it. Ergo, they know what's in it.
And I repeat myself again. If Lynette was Neil's oh-so-great love, he would have many more and more detailed memories than he has. You don't forget how you met your first great love, and Neil certainly wouldn't have told his son that just once. The only strange thing is that the MC learns all this from his mother's diary.
Don't tell me that Neil has Alzheimer's disease. Even then he would not have forgotten it, because people with Alzheimer's remember the past better than what they heard 5 minutes ago.
"Don't worry babe, there'll be other fish in the sea, he was no good anyway, not like me, um, you wanna suck my dick?"
I agree it's likely that Lynette's parents would have read the diary if they had it, but there's nothing in there that we know of yet that makes that a problem. If she ran off, it would be the first thing they would do I expect, to try to find her.
Neil has told the mc some things about Lynette, it's just that it's not vivid retelling, and not filled with the accuracies of writing it down the day it happens. Reading the mom's diary gives him her perception, not Neil's. Plus Neil is romanticising about how Lynette didn't want her father's money, she only wanted him. Neil isn't about to tell his son that Lynette initially thought he was a dickhead.
My parents were probably a little similar in this sense. My dad was a rebel and my mom was a "lady". Initially she thought he was an idiot. But guess who told me that version. Not my dad.