TonyMurray
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- Apr 8, 2024
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Just woke up and the thread has moved on... but only after a bunch more of the same... so I won't continue it. Instead, I will agree with you now.Except those counterpoints aren't great. If there are technical issues then those could still have been worked out for Episode 9 rather than an interlude. If the purpose of the Interlude was to flesh out Zoey as a character and allow you to shape her then why does DPC undercut all that by reducing her to a single variable come episode 9.
And sure you don't introduce all your characters at once but as I mentioned that was already done with Josy being properly brought in with episode 4. The issue with Zoey is that introducing her properly at Interlude/Episode 9 is that it's so late (halfway through the story essentially) that if they're meant to be a proper romantic spanner in the works then she's still at a standing start as a character while everyone else is essentially moving towards the finish line. And if DPC's intent was to have her be a spanner in the works romantically, again this is immediately undermined by the ability to go "nah, sorry" within minutes.
It just feels like there's a draft of this where DPC meant for her to be a "Main Girl" but got sidetracked by everyone else and it's too late to properly integrate her. And rather than go "that's a shame, but I have all these characters already" instead they tried to flesh her out with the Interlude but because none of the variables can be retroactively integrated back into the main narrative they don't actually exist to shape the character because, again, it just ends up kicking into Episode 9 with "is Zoey a DIK or CHICK".
You are 100% in the right here, because it's impossible to provide reasons to the contrary while simultaneously ignoring all the reasons to the contrary.