VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[shazba]

I agree with Shazba. It doesn't matter, but not because I don't like to criticize DPC and also not because of any NTR-related matter; it's so because: 1) I think it was a bad conception in the first place: Sage doesn't fit the dumb-blonde-bimbo stereotype, thus she and Chad doesn't fit together, and we're left with this "mystery"; 2) trying to solve it would in fact be a workaround... like a "patch", and it would have to be made in one of those expository pauses in the narrative, which are bad per se.

As we can learn from one of the best books in scriptwriting, Robert McKee's Story:


And exposition that doesn't blend into the action is bad because it's easy. It's way harder to be creative and show the information needed surreptitiously than to pause the story and do one of those prologues or interludes.

So, Sage & Chad relationship is bad because the audience can't reasonably and easily assume why it has happened. But trying to fix would be worst, because the missing fact doesn't cause confusion, and trying to fix it would make us endure another one of those bad expository pieces that aren't parsed out in the main plot action.

You totally dodged a bullet there. You may not know this, but if you agreed with felicemastronzo on this topic, you'd probably be banned!

But it's possible you did agree with felice, because the reason he's pushing his requirement for an explanation is because he believes their relationship doesn't make any sense. So you may not be out of the woods yet!

 

[myukimo]

Me making animations, gifs and translations and here people are killing each other day by day
Leave the NTR already that is a thing of the past, we are not in 2018 when it was fashionable
stealth bullet

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

College is boring!
after 8 episode I realized that there is no story in this game and it is like a college... a place where I don't want back
and there is not that much fucking...
I think in some college there is a lot of more fucking... and some suicide...
actually there is a lot of violence in some college...

This game is just a boring vanilla story... where only the MC is able to fuck the girls nd teachers... this is unrealistic on my opinion.
No drama no realistic story line

You wrote that there is no plot in this game, I'm already losing count of how many times you did it. But at the same time, you wrote yesterday that Chad as Columbiner (the school shooter) and MC saving the college from him would be a great script. Three conclusions:
1. You either didn't understand anything about the characters of this game and their motivation, and perhaps you have not even played it. Because Chad isn't even close to being a villain.
2. I won't elaborate on what you're wrong about, but... Please don't become a writer. You will save the world if you don't.
3. I feel sorry for you, that your college life was boring.
That's all for me.

 

[felicemastronzo]

I agree with Shazba. It doesn't matter, but not because I don't like to criticize DPC and also not because of any NTR-related matter; it's so because: 1) I think it was a bad conception in the first place: Sage doesn't fit the dumb-blonde-bimbo stereotype, thus she and Chad doesn't fit together, and we're left with this "mystery"; 2) trying to solve it would in fact be a workaround... like a "patch", and it would have to be made in one of those expository pauses in the narrative, which are bad per se.

As we can learn from one of the best books in scriptwriting, Robert McKee's Story:


And exposition that doesn't blend into the action is bad because it's easy. It's way harder to be creative and show the information needed surreptitiously than to pause the story and do one of those prologues or interludes.

So, Sage & Chad relationship is bad because the audience can't reasonably and easily assume why it has happened. But trying to fix would be worst, because the missing fact doesn't cause confusion, and trying to fix it would make us endure another one of those bad expository pieces that aren't parsed out in the main plot action.

Impossible to make matters worse for a sexually daring girl who waits for months if not years for a boy who is clearly not interested in her in any way. Who begs until the last moment for tenderness from him and remains heartbroken by the end of this sterile relationship, despite everything, despite an overt betrayal

Then I can agree that it is now too late, but the damage is there for all to see.

 

[Lovetities]

Impossible to make matters worse for a sexually daring girl who waits for months if not years for a boy who is clearly not interested in her in any way. Who begs until the last moment for tenderness from him and remains heartbroken by the end of this sterile relationship, despite everything, despite an overt betrayal

Then I can agree that it is now too late, but the damage is there for all to see.

I guess it was about the situation and people. Most people are afraid of Jocks so no way they are going to flirt or try to fuck sage. Pretty sure some of the diks tried but from the following flashback sage was bat shit crazy about chad and that one of the reason despite chad cheating she didn't left him. If chad someone become straight and return to her, I think she will definitely start dating him again. Also, Sage is tame if Mc is not on her route. (Probably a closet freak)

 

[shazba]

I'm stunned now... Well.. Maybe I agreed and disagreed with you both at the same time... With Felice, that the relationship doesn't make sense; and, with you, that it doesn't matter. But do you really think it makes sense? Life... On the surface, it does... President of the hot girls' sorority pairs with the President of the athletic jocks. Nothing surprising here... But do you think Sage, as she was developed, fits that role?

Impossible to make matters worse for a sexually daring girl who waits for months if not years for a boy who is clearly not interested in her in any way. Who begs until the last moment for tenderness from him and remains heartbroken by the end of this sterile relationship, despite everything, despite an overt betrayal

Then I can agree that it is now too late, but the damage is there for all to see.

If you see Sage back in the flashback, a few years back, she comes across a lot more naïve, definitely the Sage we know now is more mature (in some ways).

But I believe she would have been a loyal girlfriend. She was not actually looking for a fuckbuddy, and only fell into the mc's arms after she was convinced of Chad's unfaithfulness and enough was enough. For how long she put up with Chad's BS we don't know, but she reached her breaking point at the time the mc came into her life.

I don't really see what's so hard to accept.

 

[blackwolf12]

College is boring!
after 8 episode I realized that there is no story in this game and it is like a college... a place where I don't want back
and there is not that much fucking...
I think in some college there is a lot of more fucking... and some suicide...
actually there is a lot of violence in some college...

This game is just a boring vanilla story... where only the MC is able to fuck the girls nd teachers... this is unrealistic on my opinion.
No drama no realistic story line

that is what happens in real life....chad gets all the girls.....sub 5 males masturbate to porn and simp for female streamers......its brutal but that is life for you buddy boyo....lol

 

[88stanford88]

1. You either didn't understand anything about the characters of this game and their motivation, and perhaps you have not even played it. Because Chad isn't even close to being a villain.
2. I won't elaborate on what you're wrong about, but... Please don't become a writer. You will save the world if you don't.
3. I feel sorry for you, that your college life was boring.
That's all for me.

I was taking about the game...
why you talk about me?

.its brutal but that is life for you buddy boyo....lol

are you talking about me too?

 

[gg i]

guys is this game female protagonist?

 

[ffive]

guys is this game female protagonist?

Only in the Interlude which is a side-piece centered on one of the girls from the main story. The "main" game only has male protagonist.

 

[magaclaawe]

College is boring!
after 8 episode I realized that there is no story in this game and it is like a college... a place where I don't want back
and there is not that much fucking...
I think in some college there is a lot of more fucking... and some suicide...
actually there is a lot of violence in some college...

This game is just a boring vanilla story... where only the MC is able to fuck the girls nd teachers... this is unrealistic on my opinion.
No drama no realistic story line

Many of us want MMF threesomes, NTR and gang bangs but that will probably never happen.

 

[Don Sucio]

Many of us want MMF threesomes, NTR and gang bangs but that will probably never happen.

The NTR seems essential to me to feel immersion in the story and notice that the characters are alive, although I understand perfectly that there are people who do not want to see the female characters who seek to have relationships with others

 

[myukimo]

Many of us want MMF threesomes, NTR and gang bangs but that will probably never happen.

In fan art they happen. And in the duplicate models where these characters appear in other games, you have the solution

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

How did Jill get the courage to appear in an erotic magazine? Everything is simple. She was told thats it her DESTINY.

 

[Don Sucio]

In fan art they happen. And in the duplicate models where these characters appear in other games, you have the solution

Those fan art where can you find them?

 

[myukimo]

Those fan art where can you find them?

That's another section. this is a post about games . Look at animations and loops. But don't bring that content here or you run the risk of a ban that's why it's another section

 

[FunFuntomes]

The NTR seems essential to me to feel immersion in the story and notice that the characters are alive, although I understand perfectly that there are people who do not want to see the female characters who seek to have relationships with others

Een Vieze Vent you read that?

 

[Don Sucio]

That's another section. this is a post about games . Look at animations and loops. But don't bring that content here or you run the risk of a ban that's why it's another section

Thanks for the warning, but what I was referring to is if those loops and animations are inside f95 or in external web

 

[Don Sucio]

Een Vieze Vent you read that?

Whats the problem?

 

[Een Vieze Vent]

Een Vieze Vent you read that?

I did now, I don't care what happens to this pile of shit, PinkCuck would prolly like the idea.