VN Others Abandoned Bestial Breed Fair Maidens and Horny Monsters [v0.4] [Rastakax]

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Overview:
In a magical realm far away, Lina is going for an adventure and to find lost treasures. The old ruins are crawling with monsters. After an ancient curse only male monsters can be born. But the monsters persist because they become able to breed with females of humans, elves and drows.

Thread Updated: 2019-10-08
Release Date: 2019-10-08
Developer: Rastakax
Censored: No
Version: 0.4
OS: Windows, Mac, Android
Language: English
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LewdTheLolis

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this looks interesting and it's a very well structured request, if i can make a suggestion though:

Your download links do not work because you put them all together
you should structure your download links a bit better so they can fit more inline with the other posts on the site, something like this

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also for the SPOILERS you are using you can remove the extra SPOILER in them just for aesthetic reasons

finally I see you are the developer of this game and I suggest you contact admin/staff and ask for a 'Game Developer' tag for your profile so that you can be easily identified as the developer.
Best of luck with your game

EDIT: also I see that you mention English is not your first language, there are many helpful people here that can help you proofread and re-write the script if need be, myself included. All you have to do is ask for help :)
 
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Rastakax

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this looks interesting and it's a very well written request, if i can make a suggestion though:

Your download links do not work because you put them all together
you should structure your download links a bit better so they can fit more inline with the other posts on the site, something like this

WIN: - -
MAC: - -

also for the SPOILERS you are using you can remove the extra SPOILER in them just for aesthetic reasons

finally I see you are the developer of this game and I suggest you contact admin/staff and ask for a 'Game Developer' tag for your profile so that you can be easily identified as the developer.
Best of luck with your game
Thanks. I don not know how to do that. Are there any instructions?
 

LewdTheLolis

Friendly Neighborhood Lolilewder
Oct 1, 2018
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Thanks. I don not know how to do that. Are there any instructions?
do which part exactly? edit your post? or contact admin/staff?

if it is editing your post there should be a button that says 'Edit' on the bottom left corner of your post right underneath your signature that allows you to edit your post

as to contacing the admins/staff here is a link that might be helpful for you
 

Rastakax

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Feb 13, 2019
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do which part exactly? edit your post? or contact admin/staff?

if it is editing your post there should be a button that says 'Edit' on the bottom left corner of your post right underneath your signature that allows you to edit your post

as to contacing the admins/staff here is a link that might be helpful for you
The problem is the links.

How do I get them working and in the standard form.

In that way LewdTheLolis suggested.
 

LewdTheLolis

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The problem is the links.

How do I get them working and in the standard form.

In that way LewdTheLolis suggested.
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MAC: - -

all you have to do is copy this and replace the links on your post

the way you have your links right now they don't work
 

Rastakax

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Feb 13, 2019
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WIN: - -
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all you have to do is copy this and replace the links on your post

the way you have your links right now they don't work
Billions of thanks. Some help later with the text would also be wonderful.
 

LewdTheLolis

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Billions of thanks. Some help later with the text would also be wonderful.
yeah no problem just let me know, I will download this and give it a go later and when I have time I will send you any suggestions I have

after all this is just all in a day's work for your Friendly Neighborhood Lolilewder
 

LewdTheLolis

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Given the nature of the game,
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hey hey I would not call a donkey a monster, I would call them a gentle lover with a horse sized dick. I mean have you never been to tijuana and seen the donkey show? the girls are mostly screaming from pleasure and mostly screaming because something that big shouldn't be going into that box but still…what was my point again?
 

t727

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I must say that I enjoyed your previous clips even tho' the animations could've been better.
On your blog I can only find two of the movies, I remember there were a few more?

Anyhow, about the game. I couldn't get farther than the pregnant lady outside of town before my brain refused to read more of the text.

I know you apologize for the possibly bad English but there are limits I'm afraid.
For your own success I suggest you to machine translate your transcript from your native language and replace the current text in the game with the output from that. By doing that your game would be no different to most others porn games.

I'm not going to rate the game in it's current state because the text would bring it to a 1/5 and I know that's not what your game deserves.
 
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