VN Others Abandoned Bestial Breed Fair Maidens and Horny Monsters [v0.4] [Rastakax]

[Goblin Slayer]

Well I know your favorite Anime.

And I completely agree with your signature! I see you are a man of culture as well

 

[LewdTheLolis]

And I completely agree with your signature! I see you are a man of culture as well

kill the goblins, spare the lolis!

 

[Yandere Lover]

And I completely agree with your signature! I see you are a man of culture as well

That it is there is nothing better. Flat is Justice.

 

[LewdTheLolis]

That it is there is nothing better. Flat is Justice.

I mean we all need a little justice in our lives

 

[Ratselschwach]

That third sample with the tentacles reminds me of the Aeylid ruins from oblivion.

 

[Deleted member 247635]

That third sample with the tentacles reminds me of the Aeylid ruins from oblivion.

I was thinking that as well. haha!

 

[Valronn]

Looks pretty cool and the animations are coming along well, hope for an android port soon

 

[Yandere Lover]

Ok so I'm a bit confused. So what ever you do you automatically get Raped?

 

[SenPC]

Ok so I'm a bit confused. So what ever you do you automatically get Raped?

As it should be.

 

[Deleted member 900601]

did u even read the main post? English isn't his first language

I have, guess what? English isn't my first language either. The picture I posted? He could have literally pasted the words in the comment section of this very website and spellcheck would have solved it all.

Bad sentence structure is understandable if it isn't someone's first language.

Not being able to take 30 seconds to run the words through a spellcheck and using a dictionary is pure, unadulterated laziness.

 

[botc76]

this armor will protect ya from any harm, ANY! i'm almost sure of it!

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But it covers so much of their bodies!!!

 

[botc76]

I have, guess what? English isn't my first language either. The picture I posted? He could have literally pasted the words in the comment section of this very website and spellcheck would have solved it all.

Bad sentence structure is understandable if it isn't someone's first language.

Not being able to take 30 seconds to run the words through a spellcheck and using a dictionary is pure, unadulterated laziness.

I know, right?
It's not my first language either and it's really not usually the spelling of relatively simple words which poses a problem.

If you want to distribute your game in English a certain quality needs to be achieved.
Many people here are far too lenient with that.

 

[Blowfly]

But it covers so much of their bodies!!!

want hairy bottom and armpit hair and make bodies milf

 

[Rastakax]

I must say that I enjoyed your previous clips even tho' the animations could've been better.
On your blog I can only find two of the movies, I remember there were a few more?

Anyhow, about the game. I couldn't get farther than the pregnant lady outside of town before my brain refused to read more of the text.

I know you apologize for the possibly bad English but there are limits I'm afraid.
For your own success I suggest you to machine translate your transcript from your native language and replace the current text in the game with the output from that. By doing that your game would be no different to most others porn games.

I'm not going to rate the game in it's current state because the text would bring it to a 1/5 and I know that's not what your game deserves.

Thanks. I needed to know how bad English was. It has to be fixed.
I have three movies. The former was previously divided into three parts. They have now joined together for one now.
I will correct the worst linguistic errors. Soon I hope.

 

[Rastakax]

Looks interesting, but is it only Rape though?

So far only involuntary sex. But in the latter part, I intend to have consentual sex.

 

[Rastakax]

Well I know your favorite Anime.

Yes it is Goblin Slayer!

 

[Yandere Lover]

So far only involuntary sex. But in the latter part, I intend to have consentual sex.

Cool I was wondering. I went to do Goblin Cave Mission, and I didn't even get to fight
immediate Rape.

 

[Deleted member 247635]

The grammar and spelling needs to be worked on

 

[Rastakax]

Have to lose on purpose to get scenes, I presume?

Most of the sex scenes are automatic but some are avoidable. No combat system.

 

[Yandere Lover]

Most of the sex scenes are automatic but some are avoidable. No combat system.

Are you going to do a Battle System?