Now I've played 0.4, too. Better writing, but still a lot of typos. But as english isn't my first language, too, I don't care to much
Maybe I post, what I discovered when I play it again. Right now: The "In keeper" should be an "Innkeeper", in one of the books was a "deth" which shound be "death", somewhere was a "yung" instead of "young" ... more, well, when I have time to write it down.
But most important: I like it. I visited your blog and read the comic you made, so I think I know which direction this will take, and again: I like it.
Right now this is an Virtuel Novel, after the first tripp you can't decide anything. So I would like to know if you plan to make it more like a game with spreading parts?
I like the graphics. They are simple, but they do not look like any other Daz3D novel. Lina is cute, without looking too young. ... In her chain-bikini her breasts look too big compared to the pictures and animations when she is naked, but it's OK.
Keep on working on this, I want to see Lina getting pregnant, soon, and I hope she will have a lot of adventures even beeing a cute and eager monster whore