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The longer I play the game the more mistakes I see in a lot of scenes with spelling and grammar errors. Not to mention during the dialogue a lot of times it says "her" instead of "him" or vice versa. Or the MC's thoughts looking like regular dialogue in a conversation.
And with no background music or sounds during the sex scenes makes it pretty boring.
And with no background music or sounds during the sex scenes makes it pretty boring.
- Jul 16, 2020
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Homie, I not long started playing the game game has some serious spelling or sentencing issues, like it's clear enough for the to mostly understand what's happening most of the time but it definitely feels like it's written by someone who doesn't speak English as their primary language.
It just makes it a little difficult to read sometimes because I end up reading the dialogue again and my brain takes a moment to process what the Dev was meant to say, there are also occasional spelling errors, I don't stress to much about punctuation as I'm not an expert reader and most of my reading is through discord and social media.
I mostly just need the dev or a team member to go through the game especially early game and fix some of the spelling and grammar errors and try to make things make a little more sense.
There are a rare few cases so far where an NPC is talking but it's the MC's name or another NPC's name displayed instead.
As a side note for future games, try not to use Italics for thoughts and inner monologues, it's not as easy to notice from the regular plain texts compared to Text inside bracket or maybe have the Characters name to say (MC thinking) (Alysha thinking) (Mònica thinking)
It just makes it more obvious to see that dialogue is a characters inner thoughts without straining our eyes to notice text leaning 2° degrees to the side
For an example this text in the image below is
"Okay, Please put me down, I want to ask you for something"
It doesn't make a lot of sense but I get what the Dev meant to say, it should be something like
"Okay. Please put me down, I want to ask you something?
Or
"Okay. Please put me down, I want to ask something of you"
There are a lot of instances in the game where things are worded weirdly or just make way less sense because a word is like 2 or 3 words behind where it is meant to be
It just makes it a little difficult to read sometimes because I end up reading the dialogue again and my brain takes a moment to process what the Dev was meant to say, there are also occasional spelling errors, I don't stress to much about punctuation as I'm not an expert reader and most of my reading is through discord and social media.
I mostly just need the dev or a team member to go through the game especially early game and fix some of the spelling and grammar errors and try to make things make a little more sense.
There are a rare few cases so far where an NPC is talking but it's the MC's name or another NPC's name displayed instead.
As a side note for future games, try not to use Italics for thoughts and inner monologues, it's not as easy to notice from the regular plain texts compared to Text inside bracket or maybe have the Characters name to say (MC thinking) (Alysha thinking) (Mònica thinking)
It just makes it more obvious to see that dialogue is a characters inner thoughts without straining our eyes to notice text leaning 2° degrees to the side
For an example this text in the image below is
"Okay, Please put me down, I want to ask you for something"
It doesn't make a lot of sense but I get what the Dev meant to say, it should be something like
"Okay. Please put me down, I want to ask you something?
Or
"Okay. Please put me down, I want to ask something of you"
There are a lot of instances in the game where things are worded weirdly or just make way less sense because a word is like 2 or 3 words behind where it is meant to be
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Honestly the grammar doesn't get me. It's the near continuous changing of pronouns from one sentence to another. He/She, Him/Her, etc. Nothing quite like reading about "her cock" when someone is talking about the MC.
Is this MTL from another language? I don't see multiple language options in the menus, so it seems like it was written english first, but not by a native speaker.
Also, there are quite a few instances of incorrect character tags. At one point during a character monologue she switches from her name, to another name for two sentences, and then back again.
The MC & girls tend to swap lines mid-conversation.
Basically, an english-native proof reader would really help clean up the game and give it a polish.
Is this MTL from another language? I don't see multiple language options in the menus, so it seems like it was written english first, but not by a native speaker.
Also, there are quite a few instances of incorrect character tags. At one point during a character monologue she switches from her name, to another name for two sentences, and then back again.
The MC & girls tend to swap lines mid-conversation.
Basically, an english-native proof reader would really help clean up the game and give it a polish.
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If anyone made a prolapse free edit of this I would praise them as a hero and champion.
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Meaning that dev might be having a bit of trouble finding suitable daz location assets for a nursery or rather nurseries to render.
Multiple LIs are already pregnant, as in big round belly pregnant. As for the exact number, contact the dev.
I'm assuming majority of total LIs are going to be pregnant by the end of the story, if not all of them, that's the vibe i'm getting from the story anyhow, but like i said, it's just an assumption nothing more.
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There is only 1 download for all the chapters. It has not been split. :>)
- Dec 17, 2019
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jesus Christ, can we get a option to remove the amazon rain forest between MCs moms legs?
i feel like Chewbacca is about to pop up from her vags.
i feel like Chewbacca is about to pop up from her vags.
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- Sep 26, 2019
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I had the same issue. I tried old saves to see if it was unchanged and they're still mom instead of landlady so something is off on this update. It is distracting I agree. I do hope it gets fixed.
On another note it's so refreshing to see bushes thank you dev for that, I know some people don't like them but I sure as hell do, especially on the mom.
- Mar 17, 2019
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You have a lot of games with characters with a shaved pussy. If you dont like hairy pussys this is not your place, let us enjoy this and stfu.
When attempting to unarchive this on a mac, it says it cannot be unarchived. Should i use a specific one for this compression? I got it unarchived with another unarchiver but it then has an error when trying to open the game on my mac. Am I doing something wrong?
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Updated my android port.