VN Ren'Py Between Salvation and Abyss [Ch.9 Part 2] [Ethan Krautz]

[lordfridge9]

"Pregnancy (oh yeah)"
OH YEAH

 

[leon02457]

Milf Milf milf

 

[Hysni]

Looks Good
Planed Tags assap just -Torture is kinda to much (waiting updates is torture)

 

[CamaroFan432]

Sacrificed myself for all who read first and download later:

Seems just to be a bug fix, even if I encounterd a new bug ('couldn't find screen.png' just before message from dev).
If you played the first version, skip this one, there is nothing new.

Looking forward to more, GL dev.

 

[Gleemer]

UPDATE 2021-04-18 Version: Prologue

Italian translation

 

[Efol]

I know the dev isn't a native English speaker so this game needs a proofreader.
Currently there are many uses of "it" when talking about people. Hopefully the dev will go though the script and change it before the next update.

FYI: He/Him - She/Her - They/Them are the correct terms Dev.

 

[EthanKrautz]

I know the dev isn't a native English speaker so this game needs a proofreader.
Currently there are many uses of "it" when talking about people. Hopefully the dev will go though the script and change it before the next update.

FYI: He/Him - She/Her - They/Them are the correct terms Dev.

Annotated

 

[EthanKrautz]

Looks Good
Planed Tags assap just -Torture is kinda to much (waiting updates is torture)

Dra... cough... ke

 

[tsunku]

I know the dev isn't a native English speaker so this game needs a proofreader.
Currently there are many uses of "it" when talking about people. Hopefully the dev will go though the script and change it before the next update.

FYI: He/Him - She/Her - They/Them are the correct terms Dev.

hmm serial killers often refer to ppl as it hehehe

 

[dacris69]

Nothing special about this so far, will wait for content with grandma.
And no idea what is wrong with the game but the gpu gets hotter by 10 degrees more while playing this

 

[Eidersson]

Enjoyed it so far.
Thanks dev, and good luck.

 

[KoGa3]

And no idea what is wrong with the game but the gpu gets hotter by 10 degrees more while playing this

Same here, after some time on my older PC it get's even unplayable for me. I don't know if it is a game setting or the Ren'Py version, but that's the first time I had to stop because of that. Strange.

 

[Mikey Mike]

Didn't we play this game weeks ago, so what's new?

 

[TommyTuba]

Didn't we play this game weeks ago, so what's new?

 

[Hermit76]

Promising story and appealing character design.
But in my opinion some girls have a bit too many freckles (which somehow reminds me to them having pox) and the mom's hips truely much too exaggerated. I don't mind at all them being wider than average, but I think this is too much. And I would not mind her being properly shaved.

 

[Shyguy1369]

This re-worked opening is definitely much better in my opinion.
Still a few spelling and grammar issues, though it is expected.
I definitely prefer this version more now, and may keep a more watchful eye on it.

 

[Valmora]

This needs a lot of work with the dialogue... Wrong actor indications throughout the entire thing... LOTS of wrong word usage, messed up grammar, wrong He, SHE, HIM, HER issues... lots of misspelled stuff...

 

[knave of orange]

Would you consider releasing a Mac build?

Maybe do as I do -- download the Mac version of the Ren'py app, download the game, and use Build Distributions in Ren'py to create a Mac version. It's quite easy, though it can take a bit of time if the game is big.

 

[Swizzstick]

Didn't we play this game weeks ago, so what's new?

yup it was already put out one time as prologue a couple weeks ago and i don't see any updated info on why its showing up now

 

[FreshRevenge]

The main character looks like he is like 18 but he was in a correctional facility because we need a reason for the character to be away from home for so long.