Okay where to start.
The animations and models look fantastic. That said, the femboy MC is kinda off-putting when its not a sissification game. It seems like a lot of options give Dom MC points and maybe with hitting the gym the MC can Chad-up. Would be cool for an optional sissy route too, but I don't think that's this game.
The translation is abysmal. I want to say its AI but its AI from like 10 years ago. The "roommate" "Brian" is even translated to Brain. Calling everyone "buddy" is weird. Mix it up, use "man", "dude", or hell, their actual names. Other than my dog I think I've called anyone "buddy" in over 25 years. There a few instances of the MC being called "she", (which isn't too far off) and Angela being called "he". This needs a lot of work. Hopefully your patreon does well enough you can actually hire a translator. I wanted to get into the game but halfway through I just couldn't anymore and just clicked through to see the scenes.
"Roommates" I'll probably get hate for this, but man this game needs an I-patch. This is some of the most awkward roommate situations/dialogue I've ever played. A lot of this may come back to the translation issues. But lets be real, we all know what this situation is supposed to be.
Overall I think there's some good bones here, hopefully these issues can get ironed out. Looking forward to see where this goes.