- Jun 5, 2017
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Yup, well made protagonist, you hate him right away. Eric is a fairly sizable guy, and scrawny little Max may have never been in a fight in his life, we do not know. Considering he needs kissing lessons, we can assume he led a fairly sheltered life. Not a lot of time in collage before getting the boot.
Regardless, the MC is put under strain from the get go, by design. I freely admit a "got you fucker" was said to my monitor when I called the "The mob" and got rid of him.
Thats the point I was making exactly. MC is completely beta. It doesnt matter how much bigger someone is, its about standing up for yourself like a man in that situation. That could be your first fight it doesnt matter, its about having courage and respect for yourself. If you cant defend your honor in your own home, your castle, then when and where will you and why should anyone respect you?
He is an adult now and there is a guy sizing him up in his own home when hes being nothing but supportive of the relationship (I hope you picked that).
I am not saying its not something someone in real life would do. There are plenty of betas in the world, and it makes some sense because MC had no male role model and was raised by women. Its just frustrating because you are forced into playing a beta in a choice based game... Shouldnt you have the option to be a beta or stand up for yourself?
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