Hello! I just became a Patron yesterday after playing the latest public version from F95zone.
I must say, you have done a fine job on that sex scene followed by an extended dialogue where the MC, with Jessy, were recalling the day he lost his virginity to a mysterious female. Same goes for that scene where Gina had a big fight with Scott which resulted in shattering of that mysterious crystal followed by an extended dialogue and sex with the MC.
Mystery and conflict! These are exactly the kind of story-telling I like and would love to more of.
The dialogues with Charlene is great as well. And Cassie's poses in photo sessions and the lighting in there were really great.
One of the other biggest selling points for me is the fact that at least three female characters (Gina, Jessy, and Ms. Cooper) are known to have pubes. And pubes is one of my fetishes, as I think they really added to the intimacy. Jessy have reddish pubes which is even more rarer among the games with pubes. So, as one of the pube connoisseurs, I thank you for them.
Story-wise, the weakest points, though, are Katia's, Alexia's, and Olivia's paths. I don't really feel enough story in there, to be honest. The early events in their paths respectively really could be expanded more. Katia's path did have many dialogues but they were mostly about sports and exercises. While they are her passions, it would nice to have some more story delving into her background, specifically where she came from and what kind of family she was in, etc. Olivia's path seem to be going nowhere, unless so many grinding (more on this below) is required to actually move from the swimming pool titjob scene. It got tiresome fast. Same problem with Alexia except I finally got to the end of her current path where the MC was introduced to her new roommate. But in general, there is hardly much conversation with her there as well, just same dialogue over and over until the end event.
Grinding is also a major issue although I suspect that have already been reported by others. Breakfast scene is probably a good example... it's all same over and over, which can get boring fast. One of my suggestions would be to make variants of breakfast scene on weekdays. Optionally with different sets of choices that impacts stats differently. But at least make them a little more different every time, if you can.
Unfortunately, I nearly quited after the ceaseless grinding but I gave it some more time and finally got to the scenes I described in the beginning above. In general, I think the problem is that too much grinding is required to reach the really good story material. And I suspect that this may have costed the game many potential Patrons. My other suggestion is to somehow make the grinding themselves a story material, if you can.
Finally, and most
importantly, it was admittedly through the incest tag that I found this game on F95zone in the first place. The MC's little sister Becky looked very cute and adorable. I have to ask, though... will she have at least some pubes?
Overall, I would say 9/10 rating for this game.