Ren'Py Bite: Season One [v0.7.5a Ep.8 P1] [Blue Dragon Studios]

[Dr. FuckFace]

Sure, because no adults ever watch teen shows . . . ever. Good analysis of real life behavior.

Sure, some do. There might be even a hole for VN in that genre.

Just ask yourself, do you really want "porn" for children? And thats just a moral debate on the side.
Main issue is the extremely childish plot, behaviour and language. There is no way that any "normal" adult would enjoy it if the dev wont fix it but its not irredeemable.

Please remind me how old were you again?

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Just ask yourself, do you really want "porn" for children? And thats just a moral debate on the side.

This is one of the least accurate descriptions of the game you could give. Define children, because the Twilight-style writing is more for young adults than children. Also, why did you put the word porn in scare quotes?

I would never ask myself such a silly question about something like this. This is not even remotely "porn for children", so I fail to see any "moral debate" on the matter. I keep playing because I want to see where things go and will reserve my judgment for now. It's fine for you to dislike the writing, obviously. But there are a huge number of games on this site where teens are involved in a lot of drama; seems like this fits among that whole group of games.

Main issue is the extremely childish plot, behaviour and language. There is no way that any "normal" adult would enjoy it if the dev wont fix it but its not irredeemable.

I agree work definitely could be done to improve the dialogue and storyline, but writers vary in skill and approach. I have no idea of their experience in writing, but if they are new to it I tend to cut them slack. Rather than saying, "this is childish", "your writing is terrible" or other unhelpful criticisms, I prefer making suggestions that hopefully help writers improve.

Please remind me how old were you again?

Says the person whose analysis was basically, "it's great . . . except you write like shit". I'd ask you to provide your own age, but I really couldn't care less. Why would I ever reveal something like that about myself on a site where I'm anonymous on purpose? Do you want my credit card details, blood type, and fingerprints as well?

 

[JohnF95zone]

Says the person whose analysis was basically, "it's great . . . except you write like shit". I'd ask you to provide your own age, but I really couldn't care less. Why would I ever reveal something like that about myself on a site where I'm anonymous on purpose? Do you want my credit card details, blood type, and fingerprints as well?

Yeah, if anyone wants to know the Cookie Monster predates the World Wide Web by almost two decades (you can fact check that) .

 

[cxx]

Sure, because no adults ever watch teen shows . . . ever. Good analysis of real life behavior.

well hot chicks and ............... what was the question?

 

[cebs]

Android port updated​

 

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[Mommysbuttslut]

Maaann I'm all for an over dramatic campy MC with c grade dialogue but holy fuck did he take the entitled over reactive bullshit up to 11 with this one. This fucking kid clearly didn't get bullied enough in highshcool.
Mom> Fuck this Imma tell him
MC> Fuck you both, you aren't gonna tell me, you never understand me. Let me go lock myself in my room and cut my wrists while I listen to Linkin Park.

Then he goes home, whines more and takes it out on his girlfriend for comforting him. Idk what the hell is going on with the writing but the MC is acting like a whiny fucking NTR protag, and honestly he'd deserve to be one right one.

 

[KnuckleDragger79]

Maaann I'm all for an over dramatic campy MC with c grade dialogue but holy fuck did he take the entitled over reactive bullshit up to 11 with this one. This fucking kid clearly didn't get bullied enough in highshcool.
Mom> Fuck this Imma tell him
MC> Fuck you both, you aren't gonna tell me, you never understand me. Let me go lock myself in my room and cut my wrists while I listen to Linkin Park.

Then he goes home, whines more and takes it out on his girlfriend for comforting him. Idk what the hell is going on with the writing but the MC is acting like a whiny fucking NTR protag, and honestly he'd deserve to be one right one.

Agreed. This game is getting worse in all aspects with every update.

The MC is turning into a whiny little bitch, the spelling is horrible, the grammar is nightmarish and the punctuation is on the same level as a third grade lab monkey.

If the quality of the game continues to go down, I'm gonna have to bail. This is starting to hurt my brain......

 

[plaguyex]

if you're missing the bar reward open the script.rpy and edit the lines that state:

$ correct += 1

between the ~19400 / ~19600 range to say:

$ gcorrect += 1

= profit

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

if you're missing the bar reward open the script.rpy and edit the lines that state:

$ correct += 1

between the ~19400 / ~19600 range to say:

$ gcorrect += 1

= profit

You can also just open the Console and type those (or find the variables with a save editor and modify their values) to force the changes that way.

 

[cxx]

yay update?

 

[Content_Consumer]

Blue Dragon Studios

Am I the only getting "ev" showing up as unknown when she should, presumably, have a name?

define ev = Character ("Unknown", color="#02f764", who_outlines=[ (1, "#000000") ], what_outlines=[ (1, "#000000") ])

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Blue Dragon Studios

Am I the only getting "ev" showing up as unknown when she should, presumably, have a name?

define ev = Character ("Unknown", color="#02f764", who_outlines=[ (1, "#000000") ], what_outlines=[ (1, "#000000") ])

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If you find it later in the code defined, then yes. I do seem to remember seeing some characters with "Unknown" as their names for quite some time, probably to try to maintain mystery about them for longer.

 

[Content_Consumer]

If you find it later in the code defined, then yes. I do seem to remember seeing some characters with "Unknown" as their names for quite some time, probably to try to maintain mystery about them for longer.

So far as I can see, it isn't defined in the script anywhere, which is why it looks strange when Diego is telling you her name is "unknown".

I suspect there should be two entries, like there is for other characters, one that is 'evun' and the other just 'ev'.
evun would be for when you don't know her name yet and ev would be when Diego tells you her name.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

So far as I can see, it isn't defined in the script anywhere, which is why it looks strange when Diego is telling you her name is "unknown".

I suspect there should be two entries, like there is for other characters, one that is 'evun' and the other just 'ev'.
evun would be for when you don't know her name yet and ev would be when Diego tells you her name.

I think it could be either of those. Either an updated definition of it is missing, as you suggest, or it's a mistake and a term like "a bit of a mystery" or some such should've been used instead of the variable for her name when Diego says that line.

 

[MisterNephilim]

The overreaction with Mc's family was a bit hammy and over the top, it could have been handled better for sure.

 

[grumble314]

OMG I was enjoying it with all the flaws till this update, now I just want the MC to commit fellatio on a 12gauge followed by a stake to the heart.

 

[CamaroFan432]

The names of the hunter girl and the of the fairy need to be fixed. It's stupid, that after they are actually introduced to the MC, that they still named "unknown" and "fairy". That's lazy. Also the whole family situation was stupid AF. How old is the MC supposed to be? 20? Well, he acted like a 5y old. And as others already mentioned, the writing needs improvement, it lacks maturity. It may be not the best VN, but I saw way worse.

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

The names of the hunter girl and the of the fairy need to be fixed. It's stupid, that after they are actually introduced to the MC, that they still named "unknown" and "fairy". That's lazy. Also the whole family situation was stupid AF. How old is the MC supposed to be? 20? Well, he acted like a 5y old. And as others already mentioned, the writing needs improvement, it lacks maturity. It may be not the best VN, but I saw way worse.

Not to mention the flashback in the crystal ball shows the MC was literally accomplice to this plan. His mom never would've done it had MC not literally walked her down from the cliff and promised her he'd be fine. Even though he doesn't know why they did it he literally knows that he was in on it and agreed with them at the time, and he's still whining about them going behind his back.
Like for fuck sakes little 8 year old MC is showing more maturity and rationality than the flaming douche nozzle we're playing right now.
Should fucking rename him Giant Pussy

 

[cebs]

Android port updated​