Please provide feedback!
What did you like the best?
Did you have an orgasm? If so, which scene was it to?
What do you want to see more of?
What do you think should happen in Chapter 3?
What kink/fetish do you think should be included which was missing?
Right, so going in order, my favorite parts of this chapter were seeing Izzie gradually become more evil as well as her outfit change, to the point that my orgasm from this chapter was when Marlene was teaching her to be more evil and bust her math teacher's balls. The scene had both Izzie's new outfit and focused on her descent.
As for what I'd like to see more of? I'd really like to see a bigger focus on Izzie becoming even more evil. While I enjoyed most of this chapter, those scenes were the only ones that kept me consistently aroused. I'd like to see her get a sexier outfit, even when she's outside of sexual scenarios, ideally with a focus on leather or latex. It'd be really hot to see her wearing leather leggings when she's out and about, as well as heels. Just a gradual transition from her pastel clothing to black clothing would be very exciting. Transitioning her pink robe into a black one would be kinda hot to see, too. A sort of cementation that the Izzie we knew in chapter 1 is gone.
As for what I think should happen in chapter 3? I suppose it ties into what kink I think is missing. I'd really like to see a body transformation kink be present. With regards to the girls, I know there's been a big focus on Marlene losing weight, but it'd be really hot if that was just a final prep phase for her final BNWO transformation into a PAWG. It'd be great to see the final stage of a girl's transformation being thiccness in all the right places, as well as adopting ebonics speech patterns. It kind of feels like the models for the girls have too skinny thighs and flat asses and this would be a good excuse to make them sexier. I feel like Marlene becoming that kind of person in chapter 3 would be exciting, with a lot of foreshadowing that she'll transform Izzie into that kind of person in chapter 4. It'd be cool to see this transformation done from an almost-ritualistic angle. Being forcibly drugged and left as a horny mess, unable to masturbate and unable to be fucked. As she begs for some kind of sexual release, all she gets are more drugs, leading her to an even greater desperation until her mind snaps, she loses consciousness, and reawakens with her new body, new speech patterns, and a complete and absolute fanatical devotion to the BNWO.
Also, instead of those BNWO enforcers from the monitoring room murdering the white women, it'd be hot to see them convert them into devout BBC-hungry snowbunnies, instead.
From a male standpoint, it'd be interesting to see a black male transformed into something like NaughtyComic's the Thrasher: a giant, extremely muscular and sexually aggressive beast wearing nothing except a gimp mask with 0 ability to speak outside of grunts and growls. It'd be interesting to see that kind of character have the ability to automatically turn any white woman into a cock-crazed snowbunny by raping them.