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MrSpunkyPants 
excellent name, very funny
excellent name, very funny- Thread starter X0R
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We will wait and see about the bumps on the head (double meaning)
- Oct 26, 2017
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Dev's hope at the start of development, Dev at the middle of v0.0.0.1, Dev at the end of v0.0.0.1
I wish you much luck, looks very promising.
I wish you much luck, looks very promising.
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When I see "Animated" tag I expect the sex scenes to be animated, only animating a HJ, just seems like lazy work to me. The Renders looks good tho.
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I'm not really sure how to do that but if you know
I didnt make the tags but thanks for the compliment I guess.
Solid renders, decent concept, not enough choices (1), and too dang short (ten minutes to get through the entire thing).
A few things:
Feels like a scene is missing between the MC giving Eva the job and her remembering that she left the keys at the office, one render the MC dangles them in front of her, next scene she is at home realizing she forgot the keys, which are shown to be sitting on the MC's desk right next to him. Perhaps there was supposed to be more of an interview scene?
The MC is an idiot if he has a DSLR camera and stands just outside the window to take an incriminating picture.
But then the councilman is an idiot if he stands around outside his house buck naked.
I love redheads and the freckles are a bonus but the inclusion of a sex scene wasn't necessary and the player should have the choice to not fuck her or cum inside her.
We, the audience, has no clue who Dana is or why she matters. We should get some information during the scene to explain it. Even if that means that the MC is explaining to Eva who Dana is... A little exposition directed at Eva so as to explain to the audience would help.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes... A solid noir private investigator game would be welcome.
A few things:
Feels like a scene is missing between the MC giving Eva the job and her remembering that she left the keys at the office, one render the MC dangles them in front of her, next scene she is at home realizing she forgot the keys, which are shown to be sitting on the MC's desk right next to him. Perhaps there was supposed to be more of an interview scene?
The MC is an idiot if he has a DSLR camera and stands just outside the window to take an incriminating picture.
But then the councilman is an idiot if he stands around outside his house buck naked.
I love redheads and the freckles are a bonus but the inclusion of a sex scene wasn't necessary and the player should have the choice to not fuck her or cum inside her.
We, the audience, has no clue who Dana is or why she matters. We should get some information during the scene to explain it. Even if that means that the MC is explaining to Eva who Dana is... A little exposition directed at Eva so as to explain to the audience would help.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes... A solid noir private investigator game would be welcome.
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Thanks for the detailed feedback. The lack of explanation is intentional and will be revealed in future updates. The story will also be more branching and more choices. This is meant to just be basically a prologue. Next update will be longer for sure. I hope you check back for next one!
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Well it's not only about the tag, I don't understand why someone would animate a HJ and BJ, but not the sex? In my mind I think, why even bother at all then to animate, when you leave out animating the good stuff? I'm just curious
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Honest answer, it's very difficult to do and I'm new to this. I could do it and have it look like shit or do it the way I did. I hope for future updates i can get it down.Well it's not only about the tag, I don't understand why someone would animate a HJ and BJ, but not the sex? In my mind I think, why even bother at all then to animate, when you leave out animating the good stuff? I'm just curious
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I was waiting for that one. Thanks for posting the worst render in the game rofl
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Story seems interesting and renders are good, sign me up.
Also sounds like the average /pol/ poster.MC (named by player) is a Private Investigator with many personal issues.
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Just wanted to say thank you to all the positive feedback! I hope you guys check back for the next update, it will be much longer and have more freckles!!!
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The mac version is now on itch.io, I cant test it so I hope it works ok for you.
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