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I agree, I think op may have taken the planned kinks from my patreon page. There's a tiny bit of voyeurism in this version as well.I think the tags need fixing: there is only vaginal and oral sex so far
Thanks a lot!The mac version is now on itch.io, I cant test it so I hope it works ok for you.
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Sorry you felt that way This is meant to be basically a prologue. The entire story won't be explained in the first part. I appreciate your opinion though.It looks great. Sometimes. There are some faces that people are making (especially when the woman comes to your office) that are just weird looking.
The story is rushed, there's no set up, no backstory of the main character besides what we read on the forum post here, no build up of other characters, no plot for those characters besides what we see. This needs some massive rewrites, or you just need to find a talented writer to make your ideas come to life. Because as of now, this game is just a lot of fluff with no real substance behind it.
You say the MC has PTSD, but you don't really get that feeling from him. Instead you get the feeling of a fat drunk pervert. And all of this along side some cheesy cheery music that is completely out of place for most of the scenes.
I get that maybe you wanted this to be like some old black and white PI movie, but it's not coming across like that. There's no depth here, and you have the premise for there to be a good solid story here.
I appreciate that! That is the goal to slowly reveal the back story. I think it would be pretty boring if everything is spelled out right away and wouldn't give people a reason to come back for more. I probably could have paced it a little bit slower though and maybe explained a little bit more. My goal for next update will be to have quite a bit more content and move the story along further, explaining some of the characters past and how they are connected. As far as getting beat up, he did get sucker punched. There will be more action and the MC is a military vet, he can handle his ownCan honestly forgive a few weirding look facial expressions, especially when the majority of the renders are so well done this is a first release after all (an established dev I'd undestand ppl going on about it). Agree with most reviews the premise of this game has potential and there are some issue with how story plays out, that said tho this only a first version so cant really judge how dev it telling the story atm...as for back story most good devs tell it through dream sequence and flashbacks throughout the game, to keep intrigue and suspense give it time it a first release I myself dont wanna read a short story before even being able to play( dev might release the backstory as a standalone, to early to judge on that alone). And thankfully dev isnt using 1998 renders like others...keep that in mind too
my only issue is getting beat up, unless its a set up to finding a sensei to train you and make you op...kinda make me feel like a limp dick (still easy to look past that one scene)
Not sure where you guys are getting that he has PTSD. Doesnt say that in the description or game. It did in an old post before the story was drastically changed. He might though, and it might be revealed why later on in the story.I gotta agree with RoadWulf above me in that that everything seems be happening way too quickly, and that MC's PTSD does not come across at all. That said the renders are real nice and the story does have potential, it just needs some pacing. I will be checking out v2 when it comes out.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
He took the beating like a champ, I give him that. He just shrugged it off and was soon ready to get some.he can handle his own
MC clearly is a functional alcoholic, with a couple broken relations already established and unwilling to emotionally connect with others. There was no mention in-game yet but you can see the dev thought it through.there is no mention of ptsd anywhere