Ren'Py Abandoned Blurred Lines [v0.3f] [Studio009]

[Samuel Hidayat]

I've tried it, and it looks promising. Artstyle is unique and pleasing to the eyes, but you need a proofreader because there's a lot of run-on sentences and other syntax problems.

Small tip; you might want to change the font color for the money. The blue isn't contrast enough to be visible in every scene.

 

[studio009]

I've tried it, and it looks promising. Artstyle is unique and pleasing to the eyes, but you need a proofreader because there's a lot of run-on sentences and other syntax problems.

Small tip; you might want to change the font color for the money. The blue isn't contrast enough to be visible in every scene.

Thank you, your critiques were absolutely helpful

 

[Oshitari Azumi]

Given that it's a demo, its fine that there's not a lot rn. I personally really love the art! I'm usually someone who doesn't go for games with (what I assume to be) custom art, but this is really good looking. Personally, the only issue I have is, when in-game, the HUD/bottom menu is kinda difficult for me to see. I do like how the background for the dialogue box is like a notebook, but the dark text can be tricky to see on darker backgrounds and the money is also tricky to see for the same reason. Otherwise, I'm kinda interested to see where this game goes, given that (to my knowledge) there aren't many XXX-games focused around secret agents and whatnot.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Given that it's a demo, its fine that there's not a lot rn. I personally really love the art! I'm usually someone who doesn't go for games with (what I assume to be) custom art, but this is really good looking. Personally, the only issue I have is, when in-game, the HUD/bottom menu is kinda difficult for me to see. I do like how the background for the dialogue box is like a notebook, but the dark text can be tricky to see on darker backgrounds and the money is also tricky to see for the same reason. Otherwise, I'm kinda interested to see where this game goes, given that (to my knowledge) there aren't many XXX-games focused around secret agents and whatnot.

I think making the notebook background brighter would solve the issue. Right now, the semi transparent look just blends a bit too much with dark scenes.

 

[Oshitari Azumi]

I think making the notebook background brighter would solve the issue. Right now, the semi transparent look just blends a bit too much with dark scenes.

Yeah either that or adjust the text font for both spoken dialogue and the money in the bottom right corner. Though, judging by the fact that the dev responded to you with the same issue that I have, it seems that the message was received.

 

[studio009]

studio009 Can you update the discord link please or is it patreon only?

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The game either needs a "gay" tag or a comma between those two words.
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[Busted1201]

Wow
That's the first 2D Western game I am really excited for. The drawings look awesome and the Wife looks damn hot.
Really hope for some cheating / hotwife stuff with her.
Hope for the Dev. After the first release, he will gain more supporters.

 

[studio009]

New update on Patreon

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[studio009]

 

[Busted1201]

Still no news about the first version of this game. Wonder how long it will take for the first release.

 

[Busted1201]

So ist this game over bevor even the first version was released ? just asking because there are no updates on his patreon side over nearly two months

 

[Deleted member 5476035]

Also wondering if the game is still active? Love the artwork and would be willing to support on Patreon if needed.

 

[Deniz31]

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I have started to send out alpha releases to Patreons, Beta will be out in a week
this project become longer than expected
-37 new drawings
-18 pages of dialogue

 

[Claudio83]

Here the links of 0.1 Alpha:

PC:

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MAC: mega.nz/file/i44ADbyJ#FnxqMClBjHabcFIpIcddYRIanSHwBCK23IAZTWugfeM

 

[Busted1201]

Here the links of 0.1 Alpha:

PC: mega.nz/file/i9h0FDZA#LD4hi_e42_BYY0vBDSMwDaAABd-OwIVPdq3BQ_RJ9UI

MAC: mega.nz/file/i44ADbyJ#FnxqMClBjHabcFIpIcddYRIanSHwBCK23IAZTWugfeM

Hell Yes ! Big shout out Hero ! THX

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Here the links of 0.1 Alpha:

PC: mega.nz/file/i9h0FDZA#LD4hi_e42_BYY0vBDSMwDaAABd-OwIVPdq3BQ_RJ9UI

MAC: mega.nz/file/i44ADbyJ#FnxqMClBjHabcFIpIcddYRIanSHwBCK23IAZTWugfeM

Mac link is dead for some reason.

 

[Claudio83]

Mac link is dead for some reason.

The MAC links works for me (the file is available for the download)

 

[studio009]

felt strange about pirating my own work but love that its happening naturally, this release has lots of mistakes so if you guys notice any plz mention it on discord thank you.

 

[Puma1978]

Really well made game so far. i like the style...and a pleasure to see a Comic Character of Gina Valentina in the game......very cute ..i didnt found any bugs only the font style of texts is maybe a little to hard for quick reading on smaler screens.
But for the start a very good charming kinky game.