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I updated the game, or better said, i reported it for updating and sent the link. Not sure if i did everything right, since it's my first game. I wait a little and if it doesn't work out i update manually.
Changes:
- rewrote loyalty system and added government forms and a player focus
- added toggle option to hire or not hire males/females
- added random hints in the sidebar. it's just a test, since i want to add more hints and which will be shown will depend on the area (which means, when the player progresses in game, the most basic hints won't be shown anymore)
- added volume control
- rewrote some stuff to make it easier to understand, but i have to change more of course
- terminated the bugs posted (i hope)
- changed a lot more small stuff
Next i will complete those implementations and i also have to think about the fear - food - escape mechanic. Will be changed too, but iam not sure how exactly yet.
Changes:
- rewrote loyalty system and added government forms and a player focus
- added toggle option to hire or not hire males/females
- added random hints in the sidebar. it's just a test, since i want to add more hints and which will be shown will depend on the area (which means, when the player progresses in game, the most basic hints won't be shown anymore)
- added volume control
- rewrote some stuff to make it easier to understand, but i have to change more of course
- terminated the bugs posted (i hope)
- changed a lot more small stuff
Next i will complete those implementations and i also have to think about the fear - food - escape mechanic. Will be changed too, but iam not sure how exactly yet.
nice management game will try it out.
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since this is general then MxM content also? tags are just general types.
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since this is general then MxM content also? tags are just general types.
You know that you can add porn to this and still have a patreon right? Here are some examples of games that have porn and a patreon on it.
https://f95zone.to/threads/something-unlimited-v2-3-3-gunsmoke-games.326/
https://f95zone.to/threads/legend-of-queen-opala-origin-v3-08-beta-swegabe.471/
https://f95zone.to/threads/claires-quest-v0-22-4-dystopian-project.614/
https://f95zone.to/threads/something-unlimited-v2-3-3-gunsmoke-games.326/
https://f95zone.to/threads/legend-of-queen-opala-origin-v3-08-beta-swegabe.471/
https://f95zone.to/threads/claires-quest-v0-22-4-dystopian-project.614/
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The problem with those games is that they're all hand drawn as opposed to this one which I think wants to go for real porn. If you try to sell real porn games through patreon I think it can get taken down by the copyright holders of whatever porn you're publishing. The games you linked are all drawn for the games so it is their product they're selling.
I would definitely warn people that there's real beastiality clips in there. Threw me off when I came across it, especially because its not a tag in the game. The packs great besides that!
MxM is male and male, right?
Most likely not. I could imagine a really small amount for example as bad ending, or just one scene, like the farm event though.
However, in theory it is possible to just change contents of the video pack. The problem is, i didn't have that in mind when i wrote the code and all the text and images in the base game are related to straight.
II think, once i go patreon and if subscribers want it, i add some.
Exactly. I really would have liked to make my own stuff, but iam no artist and i have too many things to do as it is right now, since iam all alone. I mean, i have seen many real porn games that add it to their game, even on patreon. But the problem is, this game is somewhat violent and if i can raise some money, i want to spent it on better equipment for my pc and later on maybe to hire an artist, not on lawsuits.
Once this game is finished, which will take a while, and i want to continue making adult games, i try to hire an artist to add my own content. The thing is, i didn't have any experience with any off all of this, even the simplest stuff, like how to post a game here. Not to mention that i had to learn programming first if you can call it that.
But basically, this game is my attempt to learn "twine". When iam better at it and can afford to hire someone or convince someone to partner up with me, my next game will be hand drawn for sure. I already have a game concept, but it would be too much work for just me.
Well, there isn't. Or at least, when you read the text only, there isn't. I did that on purpose, but i forgot to add an option to disable farm content. Will be added next update.
Yes, i like it too. i also like that the file size is relatively small for that many clips. That's exactly what i hoped for.
But i really would like if there was a caucasian video pack too. But the game is new, maybe there will.
You can toggle taking prisoners. You also can sell them at the auction. That is, when you mean prisoners with the term slaves.
They also die slowly due to "natural" events, like disease and breakdown.
I forgot to ask, do you think stamina is still an issue or should i make it even more of a choice?
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by slave number, i meaned total females. It doesn't matter if i am taking or not taking them, sometimes that number just breaks and then after that food number breaks.
I am ok with die and escape, not that number goes error.
Sorry, i didn't get you. I look into it. Thank you!
Do you have a clue when it happened or what you did before?
- Aug 7, 2017
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Had it happen to me at soldiers rest chapter while exploring, have no idea what caused it didn't notice any event that I didn't have already (but I was clicking fairly fast tbh).
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So, here's the first introductory paragraph.
"In 2019 a new virus spread over all humanity. Even though the virus was seen as a thread and many counter measures were taken by various governments, a variant of the virus viped out most humans just a decade later.
The survivors tried to build new governments, but too many knowledge was gone with the dead. There just wasn't enough time to learn the needed skills to maintain the existing infrastructure. The results were catastrophies like nuclear meltdowns, uncontrolled wildfires, the uprise of once extincted diseases, the rupture of food chains and many more.
The newly formed provisional governments failed again. Anarchy took over and the survivors organized into small groups fighting each other rather than cooperating."
Just copy-pasting this, I've got four underlined words highlighted as misspelled here just in the forum...
"Even though the virus was seen as a thread and many counter measures were taken by various governments, a variant of the virus viped out most humans just a decade later."
Seen as a thread? Do you mean threat? Countermeasure is one word. Viped? I assume you mean wiped.
"The survivors tried to build new governments, but too many knowledge was gone with the dead. There just wasn't enough time to learn the needed skills to maintain the existing infrastructure."
Nothing blatantly misspelled, but still, you could really use an editor or someone to give this another pass. Something like...
The few scattered survivors that remained tried their best to rebuild society and maintain what little infrastructure they could as best as they were able, but too much knowledge and those with highly specialized skills had been lost in the collapse. It sadly wasn't enough to fend off the total break down of life as they once knew it, plunging those who remained into a stark new 'normal'.
"The results were catastrophies like nuclear meltdowns, uncontrolled wildfires, the uprise of once extincted diseases, the rupture of food chains and many more."
Catastrophes, no 'i' needed. Proper spelling would be uprising and extinct (but a better word would probably be emergence), but the greater problem is that sentence itself makes no sense conceptually. If the disease was extinct, then there was nothing for it to 'rise up' from. Some diseases like small pox have been effectively eradicated from the global population, but are not extinct per se since frozen samples exist in case of emergencies (both the US and Russia posses live cultures of small pox in cold storage). But if something is truly extinct, then it is gone for good. Not only that, but the frightening prospect of such a thing being unleashed is the pandemic potential in a modern world with a high population density. If your premise is correct and the population has already been so devastated, there just isn't a high enough density left to where 'pandemic' is much of a threat, since isolated and scattered community without means to travel quickly between one another aren't efficient vectors for disease. Plus thematically, it's drawing from the same well twice, and is both boring and lazy.
Also, how does the elimination of humanity 'rupture' food chains? We're the top predator of the global food chain, without us around fucking things up for the rest of the chain below us, nature should actually begin to reach a new better equilibrium. If anything natural food chains (i.e. the ecosystem) should get healthier without humanity fucking things up with our overpopulation, massive deforestation, over hunting and farming of wildlife, production of greenhouse gases, pushing out species with urbanization and farming expansion; basically everything we do to support ourselves at the cost of the rest of the world.
"The newly formed provisional governments failed again. Anarchy took over and the survivors organized into small groups fighting each other rather than cooperating."
Wait, provisional government failed again? How many series of provisional government have there been? If however you mean that 'organized society Version 2.0 also collapsed', then you need to reword that sentence. The funny thing about anarchy is that it doesn't take over, it's the state of things when there is otherwise no takeover. Also if they have organized into small groups, that's not anarchy per se either. That's perhaps tribalism.
I'm sorry, I haven't even gotten to the game itself yet, but this first paragraph was so rough, and it had me facepalming so hard, I just couldn't let it pass without saying something.
"In 2019 a new virus spread over all humanity. Even though the virus was seen as a thread and many counter measures were taken by various governments, a variant of the virus viped out most humans just a decade later.
The survivors tried to build new governments, but too many knowledge was gone with the dead. There just wasn't enough time to learn the needed skills to maintain the existing infrastructure. The results were catastrophies like nuclear meltdowns, uncontrolled wildfires, the uprise of once extincted diseases, the rupture of food chains and many more.
The newly formed provisional governments failed again. Anarchy took over and the survivors organized into small groups fighting each other rather than cooperating."
Just copy-pasting this, I've got four underlined words highlighted as misspelled here just in the forum...
"Even though the virus was seen as a thread and many counter measures were taken by various governments, a variant of the virus viped out most humans just a decade later."
Seen as a thread? Do you mean threat? Countermeasure is one word. Viped? I assume you mean wiped.
"The survivors tried to build new governments, but too many knowledge was gone with the dead. There just wasn't enough time to learn the needed skills to maintain the existing infrastructure."
Nothing blatantly misspelled, but still, you could really use an editor or someone to give this another pass. Something like...
The few scattered survivors that remained tried their best to rebuild society and maintain what little infrastructure they could as best as they were able, but too much knowledge and those with highly specialized skills had been lost in the collapse. It sadly wasn't enough to fend off the total break down of life as they once knew it, plunging those who remained into a stark new 'normal'.
"The results were catastrophies like nuclear meltdowns, uncontrolled wildfires, the uprise of once extincted diseases, the rupture of food chains and many more."
Catastrophes, no 'i' needed. Proper spelling would be uprising and extinct (but a better word would probably be emergence), but the greater problem is that sentence itself makes no sense conceptually. If the disease was extinct, then there was nothing for it to 'rise up' from. Some diseases like small pox have been effectively eradicated from the global population, but are not extinct per se since frozen samples exist in case of emergencies (both the US and Russia posses live cultures of small pox in cold storage). But if something is truly extinct, then it is gone for good. Not only that, but the frightening prospect of such a thing being unleashed is the pandemic potential in a modern world with a high population density. If your premise is correct and the population has already been so devastated, there just isn't a high enough density left to where 'pandemic' is much of a threat, since isolated and scattered community without means to travel quickly between one another aren't efficient vectors for disease. Plus thematically, it's drawing from the same well twice, and is both boring and lazy.
Also, how does the elimination of humanity 'rupture' food chains? We're the top predator of the global food chain, without us around fucking things up for the rest of the chain below us, nature should actually begin to reach a new better equilibrium. If anything natural food chains (i.e. the ecosystem) should get healthier without humanity fucking things up with our overpopulation, massive deforestation, over hunting and farming of wildlife, production of greenhouse gases, pushing out species with urbanization and farming expansion; basically everything we do to support ourselves at the cost of the rest of the world.
"The newly formed provisional governments failed again. Anarchy took over and the survivors organized into small groups fighting each other rather than cooperating."
Wait, provisional government failed again? How many series of provisional government have there been? If however you mean that 'organized society Version 2.0 also collapsed', then you need to reword that sentence. The funny thing about anarchy is that it doesn't take over, it's the state of things when there is otherwise no takeover. Also if they have organized into small groups, that's not anarchy per se either. That's perhaps tribalism.
I'm sorry, I haven't even gotten to the game itself yet, but this first paragraph was so rough, and it had me facepalming so hard, I just couldn't let it pass without saying something.
When you have NO male subjects, sometimes the loyalty number under the blue star is not displayed.
Can't hold an auction if you have only female prisoners to sell. Is this intentional ?
I can't tell if I'm getting +5 loyalty per turn or not. It does appear that every new good reduces loyalty.
EDIT: I think I was hitting the loyalty cap without realizing it. It looks like a lvl5 HQ raises the cap 10 ? Or is that an achievement that I've got ?
It seems to me that you need to max out the prison to have it reliably produce anything. I'd suggest examining the math with an eye towards boosting production when it is not yet maxed out.
The "Tipp" for the first mission "One Small Step" says " Assign as many soldiers as possible to the Gangbang Gang and set them on patrol duty. "
It doesn't seem possible to set them on a patrol mission. EDIT: Never mind, I figured out that you actually have to assign members to them before assigning them patrol duty.
Can't hold an auction if you have only female prisoners to sell. Is this intentional ?
I can't tell if I'm getting +5 loyalty per turn or not. It does appear that every new good reduces loyalty.
EDIT: I think I was hitting the loyalty cap without realizing it. It looks like a lvl5 HQ raises the cap 10 ? Or is that an achievement that I've got ?
It seems to me that you need to max out the prison to have it reliably produce anything. I'd suggest examining the math with an eye towards boosting production when it is not yet maxed out.
The "Tipp" for the first mission "One Small Step" says " Assign as many soldiers as possible to the Gangbang Gang and set them on patrol duty. "
It doesn't seem possible to set them on a patrol mission. EDIT: Never mind, I figured out that you actually have to assign members to them before assigning them patrol duty.
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Oh shit, second paragraph and it hasn't gotten any better...
"Now, almost 50 years later, not much has changed. There are no countries and no governments. A few communities managed to survive living a simple life of farmers and hunters.
You are (First Name). Your father was one of the few people who "always had seen it comming". He was better prepared than most other people. He had a secure place, hidden in an abondened mountain area. He had stored supplies and equipment for many years to come.
But now he is dead and you are all alone. Your mother died when you were born. Your father did his best to raise you to become a strong and independent man, armed with all necessary skills to survive in a harsh environment.
Basically, you have everything to live on your own, but you are lonely. Even though you are socially unexperienced due to the lack of company, you realize that you are the born leader. With every day passing by, you are more and more driven by the thought to explore the world around you. You want to find other humans, build a society, create something lasting, reproduce."
First pet peeve, consistent formatting. There is a break and a blank space breaking this up into three blocks of text, but in the middle of the second (after '...many years to come.') there is another break, but without the extra space to separate it into four blocks. Pick one or the other. Either eliminate the break and make it a single paragraph, or commit to the break and give it a gap like the other two. Whatever you choose to do, make sure you consistently apply that standard going forward, otherwise it just looks very sloppy.
"Now, almost 50 years later, not much has changed. There are no countries and no governments. A few communities managed to survive living a simple life of farmers and hunters."
Really? Fifty years, and there wasn't a single Steve who put their foot down and declared their neighborhood to be Stevelandia?
"You are (First Name). Your father was one of the few people who "always had seen it comming". He was better prepared than most other people. He had a secure place, hidden in an abondened mountain area. He had stored supplies and equipment for many years to come."
Coming. Abandoned.
So the protagonist grew up with a parent or parents who were preppers. That is definitely gonna color the outlook of their children. Might want to actually read up on the subject, seeing as how it's easily one of the most influential aspects of the protagonist's formative years.
"But now he is dead and you are all alone. Your mother died when you were born. Your father did his best to raise you to become a strong and independent man, armed with all necessary skills to survive in a harsh environment."
Well, how did the father die? Old age? Accident? Eaten alive by giant mutated cockroaches? The mother gets a blurb, why not the father?
"Basically, you have everything to live on your own, but you are lonely. Even though you are socially unexperienced due to the lack of company, you realize that you are the born leader. With every day passing by, you are more and more driven by the thought to explore the world around you. You want to find other humans, build a society, create something lasting, reproduce."
Cool. Thanks for eliminating all tension from survival. You just happen to live in an entirely self-sufficient and self-maintaining underground shelter or something? Sounds like you have 'everything'.
That second sentence is pure unadulterated bullshit. Leaders aren't born, they're made; and they're not made in a vacuum. A leader who has not been tested is not a good leader either.
How are you driven by the thought to explore? Unless this is a Fallout-like situation and you're trapped in a Vault and unable to leave, what is stopped you from just doing it? Why sell it like you are obsessing over your thoughts, when placating that curiosity is as simple as opening up the door and stepping out on your own? Something you can presumably do at any time.
"Now, almost 50 years later, not much has changed. There are no countries and no governments. A few communities managed to survive living a simple life of farmers and hunters.
You are (First Name). Your father was one of the few people who "always had seen it comming". He was better prepared than most other people. He had a secure place, hidden in an abondened mountain area. He had stored supplies and equipment for many years to come.
But now he is dead and you are all alone. Your mother died when you were born. Your father did his best to raise you to become a strong and independent man, armed with all necessary skills to survive in a harsh environment.
Basically, you have everything to live on your own, but you are lonely. Even though you are socially unexperienced due to the lack of company, you realize that you are the born leader. With every day passing by, you are more and more driven by the thought to explore the world around you. You want to find other humans, build a society, create something lasting, reproduce."
First pet peeve, consistent formatting. There is a break and a blank space breaking this up into three blocks of text, but in the middle of the second (after '...many years to come.') there is another break, but without the extra space to separate it into four blocks. Pick one or the other. Either eliminate the break and make it a single paragraph, or commit to the break and give it a gap like the other two. Whatever you choose to do, make sure you consistently apply that standard going forward, otherwise it just looks very sloppy.
"Now, almost 50 years later, not much has changed. There are no countries and no governments. A few communities managed to survive living a simple life of farmers and hunters."
Really? Fifty years, and there wasn't a single Steve who put their foot down and declared their neighborhood to be Stevelandia?
"You are (First Name). Your father was one of the few people who "always had seen it comming". He was better prepared than most other people. He had a secure place, hidden in an abondened mountain area. He had stored supplies and equipment for many years to come."
Coming. Abandoned.
So the protagonist grew up with a parent or parents who were preppers. That is definitely gonna color the outlook of their children. Might want to actually read up on the subject, seeing as how it's easily one of the most influential aspects of the protagonist's formative years.
"But now he is dead and you are all alone. Your mother died when you were born. Your father did his best to raise you to become a strong and independent man, armed with all necessary skills to survive in a harsh environment."
Well, how did the father die? Old age? Accident? Eaten alive by giant mutated cockroaches? The mother gets a blurb, why not the father?
"Basically, you have everything to live on your own, but you are lonely. Even though you are socially unexperienced due to the lack of company, you realize that you are the born leader. With every day passing by, you are more and more driven by the thought to explore the world around you. You want to find other humans, build a society, create something lasting, reproduce."
Cool. Thanks for eliminating all tension from survival. You just happen to live in an entirely self-sufficient and self-maintaining underground shelter or something? Sounds like you have 'everything'.
That second sentence is pure unadulterated bullshit. Leaders aren't born, they're made; and they're not made in a vacuum. A leader who has not been tested is not a good leader either.
How are you driven by the thought to explore? Unless this is a Fallout-like situation and you're trapped in a Vault and unable to leave, what is stopped you from just doing it? Why sell it like you are obsessing over your thoughts, when placating that curiosity is as simple as opening up the door and stepping out on your own? Something you can presumably do at any time.
You are absolutely right, it's a mess. Iam no native speaker (who would have guessed?^^) and even though i understand english well, i hardly ever have to talk or write in english. In my defence i have to add, as i started to write the game, i just wrote a storyline quickly to get to the programming part.
Since then i didn't even read it. Probably there are even some statements that aren't conform with what's happening in the game.
You are right about the extinct part and the political stuff, but i think when there really is a breakdown, food probably would become a problem when the preserved food is gone. Because no one would be there to extinguish wildfires or prevent atomic meltdowns and poison and diseases leaking from industrial complexes. Of course, sooner or later it would be better, since we as humans happily destroy and poison everything anyway. That's what i tried to express with the governments failed again part. The game itself starts about 50 years later, a more or less random number of which i thought nature would have regained some kind of balance.
Apart from that, i really could use someone who does the writing. But since i don't have any money to offer, i didn't try to find someone. That may change when i get a little money out of it from patreon.
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Huge props to anyone who takes criticism so well, doubly so for someone not native to the language.
I'm trying to change governments, but I can't figure out what to click on to make it happen.
EDIT: I personally helped with research, and now the fertilzer cost is shown as NaN.
EDIT: I personally helped with research, and now the fertilzer cost is shown as NaN.
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