VN Ren'Py Abandoned Broken Hearts Club [Ep. 1-2 v0.2.1] [PsychIntent]

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seamanq

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In the case of honey select games you can't really call a meatball on a stick a dick. You call it either the meatball on a stick or slinky dick as the dick is just like a slinky during sex scenes. It never goes in or out it just compresses like a slinky does.

I have started naming 90+% of the MC's horsecockian the fake so that they have a name to match their fake looking horse cock.
I don't like horse cocks on men in actual pron, so why would I like them in fictional pron? It's just not my thing. I like the name (Horsecockian) and I don't limit names to 10 characters. I use BiggusDickus, and someone reminded me that it was a Monty Python reference (I had quite forgotten that). But if the name fits ....
 

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I'm not really interested in dream scenes to be honest. It's not that they're bad, I just don't find them as hot. Probably can't explain it well, but they just don't have the same tension/passion/risk/excitement as a regular sex scenes.

Appreciate the "friend with benefits" though. I think it has a lot of story potential and adds a bunch of "fun".

Are you planning to make this games story mostly linear or have a bunch of different character routes/endings?

Edit - Just noticed multiple endings in the tags. Wuups o_O
 
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I'm not really interested in dream scenes to be honest. It's not that they're bad, I just don't find them as hot. Probably can't explain it well, but they just don't have the same tension/passion/risk/excitement as a regular sex scenes.

Appreciate the "friend with benefits" though. I think it has a lot of story potential and adds a bunch of "fun".

Are you planning to make this games story mostly linear or have a bunch of different character routes/endings?

Edit - Just noticed multiple endings in the tags. Wuups o_O
No worries. I am not going to make it super complicated like I Love Daddy or Twists of My Life, but there will be multiple possible paths to pursue, and depending on the character, consequences for violating those paths. Some of the women are ok with non-exclusive, and some aren't. So depending on which path you pick, you will arrive at a different conclusion depending on how you treat each love interest (very much like real life). As the paths become more clearly defined, you may wish to have multiple saves (like with Acting Lessons). Because of limitations in my personal life, there will most likely be an update every two months, but maybe longer. That's why I shifted my Patreon to billing only on the issuance of a major release, that way Patrons only pay one Patron contribution for each release.
 

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I'm not really interested in dream scenes to be honest. It's not that they're bad, I just don't find them as hot. Probably can't explain it well, but they just don't have the same tension/passion/risk/excitement as a regular sex scenes.

Appreciate the "friend with benefits" though. I think it has a lot of story potential and adds a bunch of "fun".

Are you planning to make this games story mostly linear or have a bunch of different character routes/endings?

Edit - Just noticed multiple endings in the tags. Wuups o_O
And even though there are choices that can be made, yes, the story is fairly linear in nature.
 

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Having just played Broken Hearts Club I feel compelled to post my comments on the game because of one, to me, glaring flaw: the assertion that a police force would not prosecute an accusation of rape, when full physical evidence has been gathered, due to budget scrutiny (and the reaction of MC to that fact).

Firstly, let me say that I really enjoyed the game otherwise. As with most players I found the MC to be one of the most mature and likeable I have ever encountered in a porn game. I also really liked the character models (that for Sandi in particular) because they are all new and unique, and am keen to see where the game goes (I hope Shane doesn't become too in-your-face in her pursuit of MC !).

However, having worked for nearly 20 years as a forensic scientist specifically in the field of DNA analysis/profiling I can assure you that whilst budget pressures have put a severe strain on police forces (in my country at least, which is England) they are more concerned about conviction rates in regards to expense. The cost of a single split pref extraction would not be that great, and in the circumstances shown, would probably be all that was required to yield a full profile, almost certainly guaranteeing a conviction.
A far more plausible method of negating the DNA evidence would be if the chain of continuity from sample collection to presentation of the profile at court could be broken. As an example of what I mean, a common trick of defence lawyers was to summon every operator who worked on a case to give expert witness testimony confirming their work (and theoretically there could be one for each stage: extraction, quantification, PCR, electrophoresis, analysis, genotyping and final check) in the hopes that one would be unable to attend - this would mean that the continuity would be cast in doubt and the evidence inadmissible. In my opinion a far, far more convincing reason for the lack of prosecution would be if the Chief of Police, a pal of the rapist's father, arranged for the labelling/unique identifiers on the evidence bags to be tampered with, or 'lost'.

Also, I found MC's reaction to the news ("good old home justice") very unconvincing. If my daughter had been raped and I was told the police were not going to pursue the criminal because of cost, my reaction would be much, much more intense. As in violently furious. It would not be that difficult to stir up some kind of media interest in the story of a police force unwilling to investigate a rape - a crime they had categorised as low priority and of "minimal damage" - due to cost !
 
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Having just played Broken Hearts Club I feel compelled to post my comments on the game because of one, to me, glaring flaw: the assertion that a police force would not prosecute an accusation of rape, when full physical evidence has been gathered, due to budget scrutiny (and the reaction of MC to that fact).

Firstly, let me say that I really enjoyed the game otherwise. As with most players I found the MC to be one of the most mature and likeable I have ever encountered in a porn game. I also really liked the character models (that for Sandi in particular) because they are all new and unique, and am keen to see where the game goes (I hope Shane doesn't become too in-your-face in her pursuit of MC !).

However, having worked for nearly 20 years as a forensic scientist specifically in the field of DNA analysis/profiling I can assure you that whilst budget pressures have put a severe strain on police forces (in my country at least, which is England) they are more concerned about conviction rates in regards to expense. The cost of a single split pref extraction would not be that great, and in the circumstances shown, would probably be all that was required to yield a full profile, almost certainly guaranteeing a conviction.
A far more plausible method of negating the DNA evidence would be if the chain of continuity from sample collection to presentation of the profile at court could be broken. As an example of what I mean, a common trick of defence lawyers was to summon every operator who worked on a case to give expert witness testimony confirming their work (and theoretically there could be one for each stage: extraction, quantification, PCR, electrophoresis, analysis, genotyping and final check) in the hopes that one would be unable to attend - this would mean that the continuity would be cast in doubt and the evidence inadmissible. In my opinion a far, far more convincing reason for the lack of prosecution would be if the Chief of Police, a pal of the rapist's father, arranged for the labelling/unique identifiers on the evidence bags to be tampered with, or 'lost'.

Also, I found MC's reaction to the news ("good old home justice") very unconvincing. If my daughter had been raped and I was told the police were not going to pursue the criminal because of cost, my reaction would be much, much more intense. As in violently furious. It would not be that difficult to stir up some kind of media interest in the story of a police force unwilling to investigate a rape - a crime they had categorised as low priority and of "minimal damage" - due to cost !
First of all, in a typical police force I would have to agree with you 100%. But Brighton Beach is a playground for the rich and famous. And I am sure you realize that there truly are two justice systems -- one for the rich and famous and one for everyone else. The media attention comes in the next episode, and it will definitely be there, because you are right -- if the media were aware of the cover-up it would be impossible to keep it out of the news.

As far as the MC's reaction, the MC is focused on his daughter and helping her to heal ... that is his main consideration at this point. Besides, Shane is taking care of the retribution part, and she's just getting started. It's gonna be a fun ride!
 

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Firstly, let me say that I really enjoyed the game otherwise. As with most players I found the MC to be one of the most mature and likeable I have ever encountered in a porn game. I also really liked the character models (that for Sandi in particular) because they are all new and unique, and am keen to see where the game goes (I hope Shane doesn't become too in-your-face in her pursuit of MC !).
Thank you for your kind remarks regarding the characters. It is very much appreciated, and I am glad that some of the viewers who are tuning in are seeing what I was trying to create in a mature MC that's not a horndog. I worked hard on creating unique looking actors for this VN and got a lot of hate for it because lots of people didn't like what they looked like (one commenter called them an "abomination"). Don't worry too much about Shane. Even though she appears on the outside to be the female equivalent of a horny teenage boy, there are deeper issues there. These will be explored more in future episodes. Stay tuned.
 

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... glaring flaw: the assertion that a police force would not prosecute an accusation of rape, when full physical evidence has been gathered, due to budget scrutiny...
I am glad to hear that things are different in the UK. But the approximately 400,000 untested rape kits sitting on shelves in evidence lockers throughout the US do, I think, lend credence to Seamanq's story line.
 
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That is true so far. Development is going slowly, but it is not abandoned. I will let everyone know when the next episode is posted.
 
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That is true so far. Development is going slowly, but it is not abandoned. I will let everyone know when the next episode is posted.
i brought it up because i was reading the comments and saw that you said it was your first completed game using DAZ
 
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i brought it up because i was reading the comments and saw that you said it was your first completed game using DAZ
I probably misspoke then. First of all, if the game was completed, it would have the "Completed" tag after the name of the game. It's slow going with the development because I am a one-person band with lots of outside obligations, but I am working on it as I can. My goal for the next episode is for it to be much longer (at least twice as long) as any of the previous episodes. That, of course, will take more time, but I think it's what people who enjoy the game would like. It is my first attempt at creating a game in Ren'py and creating art/animating in Daz 3D. Thanks for asking.
 

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I like what I've seen so far seamanq. The characters are hot and the dream animation, I think it was a dream (lol) was really well done... I really liked it and look forward to your next update!

BTW... Take your time and do it right, you can't rush quality! ;)
 
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Its been almost 4 months now since you last posted and a update would be great by now.

Or any news for that matter.
 
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