VN Ren'Py Abandoned Broken Hearts Club [Ep. 1-2 v0.2.1] [PsychIntent]

[DarkSithLord47]

@DarkSithLord47

The rape wasn't shown so no it shouldn't have it.

Just cause it doesn't show it doesnt mean its not there.. hell a big portion of the game is about your daughter being raped and all the things she goes through during and after that,if that doesn't deserve a rape tag i dont know what will,but hey what do i know it was just my 2 cents

 

[YaYa_UnTIN2]

You can choose at the beginning of the game to make them family instead of neighbors

Hi Spiderfox,

I just left the default settings, other than choosing the MC's name.

Making them family would not of change my play experience with the game, sorry.

 

[myuhinny]

@YaYa_UnTIN2

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@DarkSithLord47

f95zone doesn't do the tags like that there has to be actual picture/pictures depicting rape before the rape tag is added to a game.

Take the game personal trainer there is no rape in the game but there was one picture showing a unconscious girl that was taken by the one that was raping his clients that the MC uses to blackmail the one who was doing it and it didn't show anything else and they gave the game the rape tag because of that one picture.

 

[DarkSithLord47]

@YaYa_UnTIN2

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@DarkSithLord47

f95zone doesn't do the tags like that there has to be actual picture/pictures depicting rape before the rape tag is added to a game.

Take the game personal trainer there is no rape in the game but there was one picture showing a unconscious girl that was taken by the one that was raping his clients that the MC uses to blackmail the one who was doing it and it didn't show anything else and they gave the game the rape tag because of that one picture.

okay my bad then, you just have to understand my point of view too,this isn't a random girl its your own daughter and after the intro and you get to connect a bit with her the whole thing catches you by surprise and not in a good way. maybe i'll check the game after a few more updates to see where the story goes

 

[seamanq]

You can choose at the beginning of the game to make them family instead of neighbors

Yeah, you missed the point. Even if the MC is not related to the girls, the MC's rejection of the younger sister's advances catches the attention of the older sister in a good way. Mandy and Shane are sisters, no matter how you slice it or which option you choose.

 

[seamanq]

Hi annO'nymous,

The girl was portrayed as horny neighbor in my game. I guess the way we as players were suppose to play the scene out was to further the girl's seduction of the MC somehow.

Man I hate female meaningless mind games, just say what you mean and get on with it.

People rarely just say what they mean. Real human behavior is far more complex than that.

 

[Spiderfox]

Yeah, you missed the point. Even if the MC is not related to the girls, the MC's rejection of the younger sister's advances catches the attention of the older sister in a good way. Mandy and Shane are sisters, no matter how you slice it or which option you choose.

No I got that, I was just explaining to the other poster why his play through they were neighbors and the other guy said Niece

I thought that scene was very well done, whether they are related or not.

 

[seamanq]

No I got that, I was just explaining to the other poster why his play through they were neighbors and the other guy said Niece

I thought that scene was very well done, whether they are related or not.

This whole Patreon non-incest thing makes things very wonky. Normal novel writers don't have to write multiple version of their stories. Unfortunately, making a "non-incest" version of a story sometimes requires leaps that don't make a lot of sense, especially when the vision of the original story was different.

 

[seamanq]

Just cause it doesn't show it doesnt mean its not there.. hell a big portion of the game is about your daughter being raped and all the things she goes through during and after that,if that doesn't deserve a rape tag i dont know what will,but hey what do i know it was just my 2 cents

@DarkSithLord47 I get where you are coming from, but this is a male-dominated site, and men are visual ... so if there is "mention" of a rape but no visual of it ... it didn't happen. Sorry to say it, but that's what it is. Literally any good story in literature starts with a conflict ... in the case of this VN, you're coming in at the middle of things, or what we call in media res. The rape story is the conflict that sets much of the surrounding story into motion, and will eventually find resolution at the end of the story.

 

[Spiderfox]

@DarkSithLord47 I get where you are coming from, but this is a male-dominated site, and men are visual ... so if there is "mention" of a rape but no visual of it ... it didn't happen. Sorry to say it, but that's what it is. Literally any good story in literature starts with a conflict ... in the case of this VN, you're coming in at the middle of things, or what we call in media res. The rape story is the conflict that sets much of the surrounding story into motion, and will eventually find resolution at the end of the story.

Please tell me we get to kill the asshole that raped her. PLEASE!!!!

 

[myuhinny]

@Spiderfox

Why kill them as they would be getting off easy instead you can shove a sharp spiked dildo up their ass over and over again till they can never sit or walk again without pain.

 

[Spiderfox]

@Spiderfox

Why kill them as they would be getting off easy instead you can shove a sharp spiked dildo up their ass over and over again till they can never sit or walk again without pain.

as long as I get to castrate them as well, I'm good with that

 

[seamanq]

as long as I get to castrate them as well, I'm good with that

Frank has become Shane's new mission in life. I think by the time she is done with him, he will wish he was dead.

 

[seamanq]

Rating/reviewing the game

While I am getting a lot of positive feedback in the threads here, it seems that the only people who can find how to rate and review the game are those who absolutely hate it for some reason or another. In order to add your rating of the game (which must come with a small review), in the banner on the top of every forum page for this topic, click the "star" you want to rate it, and a window will open up where you can write a brief review. Be sure to follow the directions given, otherwise the review may be deleted. I will be keeping an eye on the reviews and will take them into consideration on whether it is worthwhile continuing to develop this game. Without enough positive feedback and/or support on Patreon, it may not be justifiable to continue this project long term.

 

[DarkSithLord47]

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Rating/reviewing the game

While I am getting a lot of positive feedback in the threads here, it seems that the only people who can find how to rate and review the game are those who absolutely hate it for some reason or another. In order to add your rating of the game (which must come with a small review), in the banner on the top of every forum page for this topic, click the "star" you want to rate it, and a window will open up where you can write a brief review. Be sure to follow the directions given, otherwise the review may be deleted. I will be keeping an eye on the reviews and will take them into consideration on whether it is worthwhile continuing to develop this game. Without enough positive feedback and/or support on Patreon, it may not be justifiable to continue this project long term.

dont get let down by the reviews,take the criticism and make your game better maybe add more choices to the player (my opinion) but if you expect full support by everyone at once you'll never get that,as you said you have positive feedback here in the threads but if you cant see this as a good sign and get bumped after a few bad reviews idk man...people can change their reviews if you work hard and wanna make this game work,if you only care about the reviews again i don't know man...good luck with your game

 

[YaYa_UnTIN2]

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Rating/reviewing the game

While I am getting a lot of positive feedback in the threads here, it seems that the only people who can find how to rate and review the game are those who absolutely hate it for some reason or another. In order to add your rating of the game (which must come with a small review), in the banner on the top of every forum page for this topic, click the "star" you want to rate it, and a window will open up where you can write a brief review. Be sure to follow the directions given, otherwise the review may be deleted. I will be keeping an eye on the reviews and will take them into consideration on whether it is worthwhile continuing to develop this game. Without enough positive feedback and/or support on Patreon, it may not be justifiable to continue this project long term.

Hi seamanq,

- I will be keeping an eye on the reviews and will take them into consideration on whether it is worthwhile continuing to develop this game.

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Good luck

 

[fortuna95]

I think it's a very special and rare game but maybe there's too much (psychologic) dialogues so far and some guys think it's too boring and blue balls-content. My english isn't the best, so I've personaly few probs to understand the conversations and have to check some words at translator. But I think/hope in the next updates the game become more lewd content, so I guess the reviews are going to be better.

(Guys, I wrote these words without translator, so I'm curious about my english, would be great to hear your opinion and if you understand me good (via DM too) and corrections are welcome, thanks!)

 

[YaYa_UnTIN2]

People rarely just say what they mean. Real human behavior is far more complex than that.

Then I am a rare breed. - sarcasm

Now you know why my tagline is Misunderstood Thinker.

I really try hard to explain what I am trying to convey the best I can. I cannot make other people's brains process and understand on my wavelength most of the time.

I just think people make simple things (speech included) complex so not to face them head on.

 

[myuhinny]

@fortuna95

The words you used seem fine to me.

 

[seamanq]

Hi seamanq,

- I will be keeping an eye on the reviews and will take them into consideration on whether it is worthwhile continuing to develop this game.

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Good luck

I always review the good and the bad, as you can see looking through this thread ever since the initial release of the game. Even though I may disagree (sometimes a lot), I always feel that I can learn something from feedback, both positive and negative. In fact, I changed a lot of things between Episode 1 and 2 because of negative feedback that really was warranted.