VN Ren'Py Broken Promises [v0.34] [Light Cavalry]

3.60 star(s) 57 Votes

Jamsalad

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Mar 22, 2018
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Pretty good looking renders but definitely a 'meh' from me. I would wait for a couple updates for something to happen. Very bored by it and not great writing imo.
 

Rinbael

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Sep 7, 2018
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I know you guys want to introduce every character and get to know them but I thought it focused way to much on the other characters and I was mainly interested in the MC and how the story effects him. It's a personal issue for me but I hate seeing story scenes happening when the MC isn't around to see them.

While I like playing these kind of games for the story I thought there was far too much of it and a lot of it was pretty dull and uninteresting especially when it focused on characters I'm not really interested in like Alice and Afina. There also doesn't seem to be very many choices at all and the game seemed really on rails though since it's a first release hopefully more choices appear as the game goes on.

Then there is how every female character introduced instantly starts thirsting over the MC which is kind of ridiculous especially since you can hear their internal thoughts which is something I'm personally not a fan of. When the other male student appeared I thought he would start thirsting over the MC as well since everyone else seems to.

I have to ask though I really hated the teacher and it bugged me you can't flat out reject her since she annoyed the shit out of me, will that be an option later on? because she really got on my nerves and I wanted an option to report her for sexual harassment.

The game looks pretty decent though and I'm waiting to see what the next update is like since there is quite a few issues I have with the game mainly with the writing being really dull and boring.
 

kaixbi

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Jan 28, 2019
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I really want to see Models with good and new hairstyle, these hairstyles getting old.
 

YorickChad

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Dec 21, 2021
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straight up robbed the MC from chasing sunsets must of seen their amazing game and success and decided yeah lets rob that i feel so sorry for the Stone fox devs having their MC's likeness stolen and put in this game oof
 

Swordsman83

Anti Anti-NTR & Anti-Woke Crusader
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Apr 14, 2020
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more worrying is their "404 weird" patreon page, I would say.
it might be only temporary fingers crossed...yet it might be those guys are just went from "broken promises" to the full broke(( n) pages) :BootyTime:
most of these girls are natural hair colour is black ? 1st woman met in the game is the police chief. black eye browns with blonde hair. looks off to me at first sight.

their patreon page works fine for me. guess the op post updated with new link.
 

Krampus00

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Feb 28, 2020
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straight up robbed the MC from chasing sunsets must of seen their amazing game and success and decided yeah lets rob that i feel so sorry for the Stone fox devs having their MC's likeness stolen and put in this game oof
But he's so muscular!

Every girl is obsessed with MC just by looking at him, that's why, they were looking at another game character, that shit is hilarious in way but gross
 

Deleted member 15555

Harem Lover
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Apr 25, 2017
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I think you just ruined the vn, at least for me with that whole thing with Grace
If you think this is the type of thing we want to read in a vn and then fall in love with said Li, you are clearly mistaken about what we want in a romance game or how much we can put up with it.

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I'm not a fan of this type of writing.
 
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Litrabi

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Jun 29, 2021
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Every time i see "romance" tag i think to myself: "Here we are again, another porn game without porn!" :LOL::LOL::LOL:
 

xinkala

Bonk
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Nov 26, 2020
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Okay gotta ask... sorry Zoey if this tag annoys you... but 0.1 as in demo or this 0.1 full release? i'm a bit confused with this Version numbers... and in my defense you are sometimes hella fast with ur mod updates.
you know.... wt mod is actually not necessary.
 

linkinn

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Apr 25, 2020
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wait a minute .... that woman wasn't mc's sister or aunt? I remember playing the first version and I think that was not there, did they add that in the rework? :WaitWhat: man this is hilarious, I better wait for the dev to put a better explanation of the tags they have planned, that "maybe more" in the dev notes doesn't convince me :LUL::HideThePain:
You know how things will go, he'll tease alot, after a while he'll start showing flashbacks "bUt It'S In ThE PasT, iT isN'T NtR, hErHer", the usual.
 

Deleted member 15555

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Apr 25, 2017
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You know how things will go, he'll tease alot, after a while he'll start showing flashbacks "bUt It'S In ThE PasT, iT isN'T NtR, hErHer", the usual.
I don't think they will add ntr considering Knight is one of the devs, but whoever wrote this game clearly missed how this type of writing and giving this type of info to the players will ruin both the LI and the game for said players...
Anyway, they clearly fucked up big time with this.
 

xinkala

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Nov 26, 2020
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Long story short. Nice renders, good background music and normal story.
It just seems fucking complex and would take years to develop( if you dont want rushed content).
About teacher...is she fucking nympho?! Not my favorite character.
Grace...hmmm was that really necessary? Yea she not a virgin but i don't really want to know that shit. Immediatly lost all interest in her.
Other characters are normal for now. I hope that with vanessa(that her name right?sister) developing some progress won't take years.

But overall it's good.Just make sure to not fuck up others characters as well like grace....damn i even liked her...shame...

Good luck
 

xinkala

Bonk
Game Developer
Nov 26, 2020
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Hope that dev wilk fix this dowsides. I really like this game and want to see it gets complated. Without rushed story
 

m4pII

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Jun 22, 2019
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Great image, good plot idea, beautiful girls, but unfortunately very bad dialogue.
I quickly got bored, and it didn't take long for me to just skip through the text.
 

ugulugulu

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Feb 3, 2020
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I enjoyed playing through the game and it was an enjoyable experience all things considered but.....Holy Cow, could you please NOT cramp so much drama into version 0.1? o_O

This is just overbearing, there is not one person that is even remotely normal. Feels more like you entered a daycare center for adults. It would have been fine if you'd have introduced those problems as the story progressed instead of throwing it into peoples face á la "take that!"
The story itself was engaging enough, but considering that every woman in this game seems to have problems that might/might not be stuff that usually tied to them (domestic violence, semi-stalker, possessive ex, etc) you kinda start guessing which mental issue the next girl has that might be introduced. At this point I think we only are missing a rape victim, then we should have managed to gather all the stereotypes.
Please, it's just too much.
 
3.60 star(s) 57 Votes