VN Ren'Py Broken Promises [v0.34] [Light Cavalry]

[Knight_BP]

You should actually consider the reviews you get because this is how you know if you need to improve or not, all of the reviews not only the good ones because when a game gets so many bad reviews, you as a creator of that specific game, should ask yourself if something is wrong about your game and you will know what is wrong by taking notice of the reviews.
Getting all emotional over reviews doesn't make any sense because their role is to guide you in making a better game, and it's not like the negative reviews are based on you as a person, it's based on your game and on you as a creator and if you can't deal with this especially if you have mental issues, then maybe you should let someone else to take the leash of the game and consider more your mental health.
Because you need a clear mind and an objective point of view as creator, otherwise you will not succeed and your game will remain at the same level as it is (unless you want to make just a typical plain porn game like many others, if that's the case then you can ignore the reviews altogether as usual)

I do read the them from time to time, but some reviews I've noticed where just something I can't really fix lol. But I have a friend who hops on in and checks out what's going on if anyone has something useful for us. Besides we are trying to make something different, sure it's college themed but it has undercover police in it which I loved watching some foreign series about undercover cops. I always was fascinated by that which is why I made this sort of AVN. Later down the line some people will be pissed at me for doing some things but I excpect it and no I don't mean NTR, we are past that. We even said it at the start, but no LI is safe when it comes to their mental health or worst psyhical I'm not gonna promise anything since that would really backfire lol, we're still at the phase where we are adding some bit and pieces, we're fairly new by making a game my writer is a bit experinced when it comes to writing but idk about it in AVN's. However we are taking advice from devs when it comes to some things but we are doing most of the work haha

 

[Skylaroo]

Honestly Grace is dead to me as a character. No amount of revision or retconning of her will make what happened before leave my mind, ever. Things like that are why people say "Always make a good first impression." because that is what is permanently etched in people's minds. As long as I can utterly ignore her going forward okay. If my ignoring her makes me lose out other content I'll just drop the game as a whole. That is just my feelings on the matter.

I'm just playing devil's advocate here since everyone is free to feel however they feel, but "Always make a good first impression" is the opposite of "Never judge a book by its cover". If I have to choose one that feels more correct than not, I'd say it's the latter rather than the former.

And for what it's worth while listening to your prospective audience is good, understanding them is better. You saw how people reacted to Grace and how she as a character was presented. You got a lot of good input from a lot of people. You can use that input to grow as a writer or you can get stubborn and refuse to listen. The former will allow you to branch out as a writer in the future in terms of stories. The latter will deadlock you into an echo chamber of a niche. Either way it is up to you as a writer to decide what you want.

And this is where I'm happy to actually call you out. What's the point of understanding the audience if no amount of revision would change your mind? The dev is trying to understand what was wrong with Grace and had made an attempt to fix it, but you were the one who is stubborn and refuse to acknowledge the change. It's really awkward to see you giving advice, but at the same time prefacing that it wouldn't change anything to you even if they took your advice. You're already deadlocked into an echo chamber of first impression, no?

 

[HansDampf788]

Okay 0.1.1 is up, once you guys get it let me know what you think with Grace

So I didn't really play the game but skipped through it to check the changes for Grace and well her backstory is still the same toning the dialogue down does nothing for me plus from what I saw she already has a child and I'm not a fan of that for personal reasons. I'm also not a fan that every LI has a terrible past/backstory and you said only the girls in the banner are LIs which means 2 of my favorite models in your game aren't LI. So all in all I think I will pass on your game because I don't see a harem tag and it seems like the game is focused too much on drama.
The only real good thing I saw is your art but I'm not blinded by it like so many others.

 

[Skylaroo]

which means 2 of my favorite models in your game aren't LI.

Just out of curiosity, which 2 are they?

 

[HansDampf788]

Just out of curiosity, which 2 are they?

Sakae and Tess.

 

[Havik79]

So am I to assume with no harem tag this is to pick one girl and done?.

Anyone?.

 

[Knight_BP]

So I didn't really play the game but skipped through it to check the changes for Grace and well her backstory is still the same toning the dialogue down does nothing for me plus from what I saw she already has a child and I'm not a fan of that for personal reasons. I'm also not a fan that every LI has a terrible past/backstory and you said only the girls in the banner are LIs which means 2 of my favorite models in your game aren't LI. So all in all I think I will pass on your game because I don't see a harem tag and it seems like the game is focused too much on drama.
The only real good thing I saw is your art but I'm not blinded by it like so many others.

Well I can’t please everyone, this VN isn’t for you then

 

[SirAlexander111]

Anyone?.

Better question would be,
Do we have to choose between the li's (and miss one of them content) to spend some time with them, when a option comes concurrently?

 

[Knight_BP]

Better question would be,
Do we have to choose between the li's (and miss one of them content) to spend some time with them, when a option comes concurrently?

Too early to do that, we won’t put that right at the start because you still need to meet and socialise with the current characters. But idk maybe we do make those choices but I don’t think of that being likely.

 

[Havik79]

Better question would be,
Do we have to choose between the li's (and miss one of them content) to spend some time with them, when a option comes concurrently?

I suppose that too, but I am a simple bird lawyer I am here for the ginger girl, anything else is gravy.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

The only real good thing I saw is your art but I'm not blinded by it like so many others.

For some art is all that matters. That doesn't mean they are blind or stupid. We all have different tastes, there isn't reason to insult others that like something different than you imo.

It's too drama centric for me as well, but I don't see any reason to insult it's fans

 

[Knight_BP]

I mean everyone has their own different tastes. Some people don like Summers gone some do. It really depends on your preferences. If you don’t like the game you don’t like the game. I won’t lose sleep over it besides when I’m making a game I need to be hardened and know I can’t please anyone

 

[SirAlexander111]

Too early to do that, we won’t put that right at the start because you still need to meet and socialise with the current characters. But idk maybe we do make those choices but I don’t think of that being likely.

Good, good.

I suppose that too, but I am a simple bird lawyer I am here for the ginger girl, anything else is gravy.

Vanessa? Or another one

Some people don like Summers gone

What reasons there might be!

 

[Havik79]

Oh, I didn't notice a new banner, 2 ginger girls, and wait why is the transsexual from Fetish Locator in the banner.

Being A Dik is a better example of a divisive game than Summers Gone, so many love it, but pissed me off the first 2 LI turned out to be lesbians, and then forced to do gender studies..

 

[SirAlexander111]

Being A Dik is a better example of a divisive game than Summers Gone, so many love it, but pissed me off the first 2 LI turned out to be lesbians, and then forced to do gender studies..

I'm disappointed in you that you could think of any other girl when queen Bella is there , I mean personal preferences are so overrated nowadays

 

[Spfjolietjake]

I'm disappointed in you that you could think of any other girl when queen Bella is there , I mean personal preferences are so overrated nowadays

Bella deserves to be in a better game then that for sure... I worry what Ill will be fall her in that damn vn.

 

[SirAlexander111]

Bella deserves to be in a better game then that for sure... I worry what Ill will be fall her in that damn vn.

Damn, I fell for her the moment MC assertively kisses her by lifting her against the bookshelf in the library (early episodes) and Bella gave in for the first time wholeheartedly. That was some moment, the eye contacts, the expressions she gave.

 

[SirAlexander111]

I worry what Ill will be fall her in that damn

There's is nothing that mc can't solve

 

[xXwankerXx]

Sakae and Tess.

So you don't like Grace coz she's 'damaged beyond repair' and a single mom but you like Sakae, who's a proven cheap slut with 1/2 kids, and Tess, who has 2 grown ass daughters of her own ?? I don't get u, bro'... maybe Grace did her fair share of dumb shit before the dev rewrote her backstory, but nothing beats Sakae's character... I share your opinion about Tess tho, too bad she ain't fuckable.

I won’t lose sleep over it besides when I’m making a game I need to be hardened and know I can’t please anyone

That's the right mindset. In this business, you gotta have thick skin if you wanna make it big. Don't be a pouty princess like Nyx and don't get discouraged by some bad reviews, on the contrary, do better next time and prove your haters wrong.

no LI is safe when it comes to their mental health or worst psyhical I'm not gonna promise anything since that would really backfire

Please no AL fire incident, crazy nurses or suicide. That's too dark and ppl will grab their forks and torches again. Btw, can you tell us who Grace's baby daddy is, or is he too important to the story for spoilers ??

 

[Knight_BP]

Please no AL fire incident, crazy nurses or suicide. That's too dark and ppl will grab their forks and torches again. Btw, can you tell us who Grace's baby daddy is, or is he too important to the story for spoilers ??

Maybe she does have a baby, maybe she doesn’t idk. But if she did…..why would I spoil it and not present it in the game ;P