VN Ren'Py Broken Promises [v0.34] [Light Cavalry]

[Steinchen]

well found this game now and begann to play it and i like it somehow,but some thinks are really confusing as fuck.

grace for example talks like she is an old hag and she is what 7 to 8 years older than the Mc???

Mc is nearly 21 years old and that makes grace only near 30 years why the fuck she is talking like she is a fifty year old hag??

and what is a decade of age difference between a couple???? thats nothing... just weird...

 

[punisher2099]

Is that patch in the op going to be updated? or will this just not have incest in it at all anymore? What do you have to do to get it to work with the current version cause I'm willing to do it myself.

 

[Fauxcest]

Is that patch in the op going to be updated? or will this just not have incest in it at all anymore? What do you have to do to get it to work with the current version cause I'm willing to do it myself.

Was coming here to ask the same thing

 

[DuckDairyDip]

well found this game now and begann to play it and i like it somehow,but some thinks are really confusing as fuck.

grace for example talks like she is an old hag and she is what 7 to 8 years older than the Mc???

Mc is nearly 21 years old and that makes grace only near 30 years why the fuck she is talking like she is a fifty year old hag??

and what is a decade of age difference between a couple???? thats nothing... just weird...

There is context to be said about her conflict with their age differences. Yes, it shouldn't really matter because they are both adults and Grace even says this, but the issue is the fact they have a history. They met when the MC was a preteen and Grace was in her late teens. MC revealing he had a crush on her and Grace saying she may have even shared those feelings back then is the complexity to the issue. The age gap conflict is because Grace primarily knows the MC as the boy she hanged out with when they were younger, not as the young man he is now.

 

[portgasdluigi]

There is context to be said about her conflict with their age differences. Yes, it shouldn't really matter because they are both adults and Grace even says this, but the issue is the fact they have a history. They met when the MC was a preteen and Grace was in her late teens. MC revealing he had a crush on her and Grace saying she may have even shared those feelings back then is the complexity to the issue. The age gap conflict is because Grace primarily knows the MC as the boy she hanged out with when they were younger, not as the young man he is now.

Grace seems really into MC at this point so I doubt it'll take long for them to get close.

 

[Larry2000]

I just wanna say thank you for taking your time to be descriptive in their backstory! shame, Im looking for a feel good story and not get depressed playing a porn game. reminded me of that game way back where mc got kicked out of the house and found out all his relative/LI got raped by the dad while he was gone. not the same genre, but same vibe

I do not know what game you are talking about, and thank God I don't know, but what you wrote is radically different, it's absolute madness. In this game, dev fucked up with Grace in the beginning, but now he's fixed it, and there's nothing close to what you wrote about, I can't imagine how it can give the same vibe

If you wanna know, the DARK game you're referring to is actually being redone to not be a walking depression factory. All the dark shit from the original game is gonna be cut and remade.

https://f95zone.to/threads/coming-home-is-never-easy-prologue-caveboomer-productions.81338/

 

[dildorog]

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[Bedlamh]

Okay just finished it. 1st, REALLY enjoying the story right now & characters.

The only issues I have is that the grammar/phrasing/etc needs work. Even though I CAN understand what is trying to be said I still shouldn't have to auto-correct while reading it. And it looks like multiple times different languages show up as if characters are speaking/thinking in different languages when they really are not.

The other is that there is literally only like 3 choices in all of chapter 1. Though I absolutely LOVE the fact that is felt really long, the lack of choices bugged me still. Even if it was just choices on what are character could think of certain characters looks, or the events going on, even if these didn't matter, having these additional choices would contribute to feeling like you are playing you rather than just somebody with your first name (Or chosen name). Unless I somehow missed if this was suppose to be kinetic lol?

It would be a lot better if the sleazy comments that the mc is "forced" to think were removed when there really is no need for them, or at least give options, (For Ex: "Think pervy thought" or "think nothing"). Honestly, this takes away from the story and feels, well, forced. Feels unnatural as is. Like they are just slapped onto places ALMOST left and right, for the simple reason of "Because it is an adult visual novel". All this does is hurt the otherwise great storytelling.

Aside from these, this has potential to be S Tier quality, really enjoyed what is there and hope these things get improved/fixed. Right now, because of these I would say it is B Tier.

Keep up the great work and I am looking forward to future releases!!!

 

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[Legend.Killer]

well renders are spectacular and story is interesting .. gonna wait and see what will happen ..
Keep the good work up Dev

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Okay just finished it. 1st, REALLY enjoying the story right now & characters.

The only issues I have is that the grammar/phrasing/etc needs work. Even though I CAN understand what is trying to be said I still shouldn't have to auto-correct while reading it. And it looks like multiple times different languages show up as if characters are speaking/thinking in different languages when they really are not.

The other is that there is literally only like 3 choices in all of chapter 1. Though I absolutely LOVE the fact that is felt really long, the lack of choices bugged me still. Even if it was just choices on what are character could think of certain characters looks, or the events going on, even if these didn't matter, having these additional choices would contribute to feeling like you are playing you rather than just somebody with your first name (Or chosen name). Unless I somehow missed if this was suppose to be kinetic lol?

It would be a lot better if the sleazy comments that the mc is "forced" to think were removed when there really is no need for them, or at least give options, (For Ex: "Think pervy thought" or "think nothing"). Honestly, this takes away from the story and feels, well, forced. Feels unnatural as is. Like they are just slapped onto places ALMOST left and right, for the simple reason of "Because it is an adult visual novel". All this does is hurt the otherwise great storytelling.

Aside from these, this has potential to be S Tier quality, really enjoyed what is there and hope these things get improved/fixed. Right now, because of these I would say it is B Tier.

Keep up the great work and I am looking forward to future releases!!!

I think the reason it had no choices it's because the chapter was like a prologue

just to introduce the characters and the story before it gets started in the next chapter

but I do agree with you when it comes to the MC perverted thoughts

 

[Bedlamh]

I think the reason it had no choices it's because the chapter was like a prologue

just to introduce the characters and the story before it gets started in the next chapter

but I do agree with you when it comes to the MC perverted thoughts

Completely agree!

 

[anrley]

hi.
i have read some of the earlier posts where it is mentions mc and vanessa are siblings. But story dosen't indicate that. if they really are sublings then i would be very confused. i hope they aren't. Are they?

 

[portgasdluigi]

hi.
i have read some of the earlier posts where it is mentions mc and vanessa are siblings. But story dosen't indicate that. if they really are sublings then i would be very confused. i hope they aren't. Are they?

MC and Vanessa are not siblings. They're childhood friends who were very close.

 

[xinkala]

MC and Vanessa are not siblings. They're childhood friends who were very close.

and then there is a question!

then where is incest?

only one option is left for that....

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[portgasdluigi]

and then there is a question!

then where is incest?

only one option is left for that....

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Guessing incest is there under the genre tab due to the patch. I'm assuming the patch makes MC and Nessa siblings.

 

[xinkala]

Guessing incest is there under the genre tab due to the patch. I'm assuming the patch makes MC and Nessa siblings.

yea but like someone already said it doesn't make sense(they beaing siblings)

 

[vogelbeest]

yea but like someone already said it doesn't make sense(they beaing siblings)

I dont think there's been alot info there to make a conclusion it does or does not make sense....
So far we know they played hide and seek together and made a promise when they were kids...
And from the part where vanessa/nessa is a grownup we learn her mother was the factor that prevented them being together...
Guess it would still make sense if the mother left her husband and son, maybe not the most logical explanation since we would expect a mother to take both kids, but nothing that can't be explained further...

 

[xinkala]

I dont think there's been alot info there to make a conclusion it does or does not make sense....
So far we know they played hide and seek together and made a promise when they were kids...
And from the part where vanessa/nessa is a grownup we learn her mother was the factor that prevented them being together...
Guess it would still make sense if the mother left her husband and son, maybe not the most logical explanation since we would expect a mother to take both kids, but nothing that can't be explained further...

yea that what i mean. there is not any logic in that. taking only daughter leaving son and then პrohibit them from seeing each other? not really make any sense. and father being angry when mc even mention nessa like he hate her. it's just confusing

 

[vogelbeest]

yea that what i mean. there is not any logic in that. taking only daughter leaving son and then პrohibit them from seeing each other? not really make any sense. and father being angry when mc even mention nessa like he hate her. it's just confusing

Well, i expect the situation will be more clear in future updates, either way we don't really have a logical explanation on the situation yet, nor with a i-patch nor without....