First off really like the game and the following I hope everyone will find helpful as these are suggestions to aid the dev in making a better game for us all. I really like were the story is going, but really need to have someone proof read and correct grammar and spelling.
By the way is there any plans to add a work out gym routine or some kind of martial arts so MC to get stronger
and/or any aspirations on allowing school or training to increase whits of knowledge?
It's great he jumps in to protect and help, but am not sure if it was sucker punch or the MC failed in a block. (good spot to jump to third person view). As the player I hoping you are intending on building up the MC skills in some form of defense techniques.
The Three thugs could become good antagonists though out the game play, In that based on MC skill receives a reward or higher points for affection of those whom he protects.
A humble suggestion, wait a few more times before allowing Casey to proved such a reward. Maybe simply start it off with a hug or kiss and perhaps some prays from Valeria for his heroic efforts. which could be the start to a path with Valeria.
There are several good side line opportunities with Lucy and Aurlel, But here again maybe conciser a build up prior to the bathroom scene. Ya its great to get the work out, however can we put quality of story and character build prior to satisfaction?
Also please provide the option to have or not have tattoos. Tattoos on a women detract for her natural beauty and brands her as a whore and lose individual, well from my point of view that is. Sorry if the offends those whom like it, as it was not meant to but there are those of us out here that would prefer the option. This could also include the removal of the lip piercings. Both are really big turn offs.
The scene with Lucy in the bathroom needs some work, there are point when her face look demonic. Also really like the wall scene and the options but one is mission and that is the one to satisfy her before the MCs satisfied.
Another good opportunity to fool around would be with Sunny. Or you could make here a cock blocker. hehe
Well thanks for reading and your consideration of the above, I look forward to your next update.