My opinion with some constructive criticism:
Nice art, but I just skipped all the text because it felt like it was written by a horny teenager, not surprised the MC and other characters were written like that too (even though they are 20+ years old?). My suggestion would be to put some effort into improving the writing for the story and characters if you actually want it to be worth spending time reading. Also, what's the point of the obviously incorrect dialogue choices as options to choose from when they serve no purpose in the game other than as a fail state? Maybe consider remaking the game as a kinetic novel if choices serve no purpose. If the dev can improve upon the things I mentioned, then after a couple updates this will probably be a decent game.