echizen128
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- Sep 5, 2017
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This is a very frustrating one, because the dev is clearly capable of better when they try. Great setting, visuals, and characters. Some good branching scenes early on. But man, there's a *lot* of dialogue that feels like a first pass. I assume English isn't their first language, and they should seriously consider hiring a translator. This isn't a case of bad writing, but of sloppy writing.
And how do you go from the scene with Amy in the bath and Luna sleeping, which has what feels like a dozen different outcomes, to the current release that has you threatened/blackmailed into jerking off on some unwanted, unnecessary bitch next to your niece with zero player agency whatsoever? Incredibly disappointing.
And how do you go from the scene with Amy in the bath and Luna sleeping, which has what feels like a dozen different outcomes, to the current release that has you threatened/blackmailed into jerking off on some unwanted, unnecessary bitch next to your niece with zero player agency whatsoever? Incredibly disappointing.