This is a very frustrating one, because the dev is clearly capable of better when they try. Great setting, visuals, and characters. Some good branching scenes early on. But man, there's a *lot* of dialogue that feels like a first pass. I assume English isn't their first language, and they should seriously consider hiring a translator. This isn't a case of bad writing, but of sloppy writing.
And how do you go from the scene with Amy in the bath and Luna sleeping, which has what feels like a dozen different outcomes, to the current release that has you threatened/blackmailed into jerking off on some unwanted, unnecessary bitch next to your niece with zero player agency whatsoever? Incredibly disappointing.