VN Ren'Py Abandoned Buried Desires [v0.5] [Betisis]

[Beduin123]

I really enjoyed this game, story is good, some of the best looking characters ive seen, still not much sex stuff but hoping it will come at some point.

Only thing i found extremly stupid was the way MC handels Rubys loss in the competition, i thought he was supposed to be a strong cleaver dude but accepting the cheating just for a handjob and not even from the girl who cheated, no touching no nothing...that just turns MC into a pussy-whiped brainless idiot who cares more about a handjob then ruby....hope this isent how the future story will progress.

On a sidenote, where did all those nice looking chars come from, did dev make them their selfs? i mean man i would to have all of em and make a story my self....but cant create something like that my self sadly, and dont think a stick figure would do much for a novel....anyway great work whoever created them.

That's the main problem with this game. The renders are superior, the characters are great, the story started as very solid, but than went all over the place.
It seems that the Dev cannot keep a consistent story even within a couple updates and forgets about what he wrote earlier every now and then.
His MC started as a strong and experienced (if somehow traumatized by a past incident) man, but now he acts as 15 y. o. cocky teenager.
The Dev has to stop smoking pot or ask someone else to do the writing for him.

 

[0tt0von]

That's the main problem with this game. The renders are superior, the characters are great, the story started as very solid, but than went all over the place.
It seems that the Dev cannot keep a consistent story even within a couple updates and forgets about what he wrote earlier every now and then.
His MC started as a strong and experienced (if somehow traumatized by a past incident) man, but now he acts as 15 y. o. cocky teenager.
The Dev has to stop smoking pot or ask someone else to do the writing for him.

All true but we do get some moments of high comedy like

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non-sensical and ridiculous but also so absurdly over the top that the "tragedy" becomes comedy.

 

[Julius Kingsley]

3 years and not one scene with the daughters.. I dunno what to say

 

[wino ant]

3 years and not one scene with the daughters.. I dunno what to say

Do the kids still say "Jebaited" these days?

 

[virtuvoid]

3 years and not one scene with the daughters.. I dunno what to say

Devs are basically caterers selling fan-service to their supporters.

Their specialty is sexual foreplay rather than hard-core, often taboo, sex. Ginger beauty niece Ruby, for example.

Still, the thought of seeing much more of the twins, Olivia and Ava, takes priority over my aversion to the vile MC.

 

[Julius Kingsley]

Devs are basically caterers selling fan-service to their supporters.

Their specialty is sexual foreplay rather than hard-core, often taboo, sex. Ginger beauty niece Ruby, for example.

Still, the thought of seeing much more of the twins, Olivia and Ava, takes priority over my aversion to the vile MC.

I was hoping for at least one scene with Emma, love the brat

 

[virtuvoid]

I was hoping for at least one scene with Emma, love the brat

Yeah, I like Emma the best between the daughters. But I've seen her model overused.

 

[Julius Kingsley]

Yeah, I like Emma the best between the daughters. But I've seen her model overused.

Any recs with loli like girs?

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Any recs with loli like girs?

There's a place to ask about that type of thing, rather than in this thread.

 

[Julius Kingsley]

There's a place to ask about that type of thing, rather than in this thread.

Thanks man, didn't know.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Thanks man, didn't know.

No worries. It's why I linked it for you.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

I was curious to know what games she appears in (model), I haven't been playing a lot lately.

That forum I linked is where you will be likely to get the best responses. You probably would improve your success with replies if you include pictures and/or a link to the OP of this game when you post the new thread over there.

 

[virtuvoid]

I was curious to know what games she appears in (model), I haven't been playing a lot lately.

I first encountered the Emma model in a 3d porn comic : Lady Jane's Adventures (by Thulsa Doom). Very short, petite but perky body. Loli. Mainstay charertistic is her face.
The fairly recent game I remember her exact model was the F95Zone-rejected Proud Father. The niece of the MC (Ryley).

The problem I have with recycled models is that a memorable character simply cannot be so easily "cloned". Huge buzz-kill.

 

[Lucifel]

Full of promise but kind of doesn't deliver on it yet.

 

[Vincent Valentine]

does anyone know if we're close to the end of the story? ^^ I have the impression that the ambition behind is great and often it creates either very long updates or abandonment. when is it from here?

 

[benny7]

That's the main problem with this game. The renders are superior, the characters are great, the story started as very solid, but than went all over the place.
It seems that the Dev cannot keep a consistent story even within a couple updates and forgets about what he wrote earlier every now and then.
His MC started as a strong and experienced (if somehow traumatized by a past incident) man, but now he acts as 15 y. o. cocky teenager.
The Dev has to stop smoking pot or ask someone else to do the writing for him.

Pretty much spot on. And that's not even mentioning how bad the translations are.

 

[Badjourasmix]

Bad translations don't really bother me that much but that is probably because english is not my first language. This was a game that I was very excited about when it came out almost 3 years ago, but now I can't bring myself to play it. I didn't even play the last update. Visuals are a very important part of this type of games but that alone is not enough to make a successful game. I know that remake/reworks aren't very popular in this forum, but at this point it would probably be better if the dev just started from scratch.

 

[UnfinishedSentenc]

SOOOOOOO much potential! Maybe the dev could use an editor. I am available! Among many degrees, I have a masters in English. I am a published author of psychological thriller/horror novels. I have already aided in editing and writing one major game, and I am helping on another project right now. I do NOT charge for my services. I do it as a courtesy for the community.

Hey, dev, if you want help, shoot me a PM, and I will get on it right away. We can edit 10 - 20 mistakes at a time. After you attend to them, I will move to the next 10 - 20. It depends on how deep you want to go, though, as far as expediency. If you do not care about punctuation, but more about spelling, diction, cohesive plot, and flow, then it should move pretty fast. But if you're concerned about commas, semi-colons, and the like, it may take a little longer. However, punctuation-wise, I am a stickler about run-on sentences and nonsense like that. They make the story uncomfortable to read and hard to follow.

So anyone else who has access to the dev, in case he doesn't read this, let him know that UnfinishedSentenc will help him out. Buried Desires is an average to above average story as VNs go, and it deserves much better writing, cohesion, and flow to make it shine even better and bump it up a few notches to where it should be.

 

[ike314]

I'm sure this has been said to death but "Worst therapist ever" aside from that pretty hot.

 

[virtuvoid]

I'm sure this has been said to death but "Worst therapist ever" aside from that pretty hot.

Welcome to this thread!
The therapist is there to do a job in Buried Desires. That is, to help steer the MC on to the correct path which is to try to fuck every other character who is blest with a pussy. No more, no less.

Yup! Aside from the ginger twins Olivia and Ava, I would rate her the 3rd hottest babe in the game. Lots of stiff competition!