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I hope is there several routes like getting his job back or evelyn route or wife route idk this game has potential
yes but technically avoidable.is there any femdom ?
Yeah, I agree BojackI hope is there several routes like getting his job back or evelyn route or wife route idk this game has potential
I'm looking forward to the next installmentHey ya'll! I just wanted to let you know you've been heard!
The earlier portions of the game were written far earlier than much of the rest while I was still learning how to use DAZ and Ren'py and was still setting up the infrastructure for creating my game. As such, my focus was turned away from the earlier stuff I had written and I neglected to go back and revise it as I should have. I made some changes to some of the story beats and dialogue that shouldn't break the suspension of disbelief. It fits better in the logic of the world. Ultimately I think it helps develop the MC better and sets his fall from grace and the events that follow more squarely on his shoulder.
Furthermore, I underestimated the amount of attention the light femdom would get. It was never my intention for it to take away the main focus. In fact, unless you were directly pursuing it, any and all current and future femdom type scenes were narratively supposed to help bolster the MC into taking more charge. I feel this is better exemplified in the greater story, but I understand how it came across in the scope of the one chapter that is currently available. I debated even leaving the first choice in the game at all before the initial release for the same reasons people have pointed out here. As such I have changed dialogue and scenes so that it is far clearer and more easily avoidable for those uninterested in it and it fits the initial narrative I had intended far better.
While I have some history with review and breaking apart what makes movies, television and games work, actually writing for it is a far different beast. I have had more practice, better understand how to succinctly and properly convey the story to the players within the scope of the individual chapter/update, and future parts will be more focused on whichever particular route you've decided to follow while maintaining the greater plot. Routes will branch out more continuing onward. I appreciate the feedback and hope you continue to enjoy my game!
probably not sad another blackmail game wasted on femdomFemdom avoidable ??