Ren'Py Business of Loving [v0.13.5i] [Dead End Draws]

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Update will be out tomorrow for all 5$ Patrons!
Public release will be on April 23rd.
What's new?!
- 3 New Lorraine Scenes
- 1 New Lily Animation Set
- 7 New Kim Degrade Scenes
 
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Benn Swagger

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deadend said:
Sorry man, I'm trying to fix things with every update, hopefully you give it another shot soon.
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Since you're here, here some suggestion that I got the inspire from another game.
- Lock relationship point to an event/scene. This way, players will not missing the progression.
:. When I fuck the mom (lorain) ... I'm not doing anything else but cooking for the family. Then after fuck her, I began discover the kitchen scene, the yard night scene and jogging scene. If you lock it, then you plot progression to a certain character can be seen. It doesn't happen with the boss, the scene line plot do just fine, but it because related to the boss office and the boss can only met at that room. But Lorain can be anywhere and this is messed up or your coding design too simple for it.

- Add more day time like morning, midday, evening & night ... thus you can have more control to event auto-trigger.

- Grinding too fast, but prolong it would result meaningless unless you make each progression feel something. Like from normal to more intimate with certain character.
:. I felt this game is like more to Meet n Fuck game than life simulation porn games. Click click click, and you fuck someone.

- Maybe I will be burn or send to the gallows for saying this by another users ... but I think you should use RPGM instead Renpy. It's weird, me too dislike RPGM, but atleast you can control more of the progression and event plot with RPGM.

Btw, you should join Developer Hub in discord and ask other developer of you trouble with coding. Because Life Simulation games are more complex than VN coding. (If you already join, then ask them more for you trouble)
 
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Benn Swagger said:
Since you're here, here some suggestion that I got the inspire from another game.
- Lock relationship point to an event/scene. This way, players will not missing the progression.
:. When I fuck the mom (lorain) ... I'm not doing anything else but cooking for the family. Then after fuck her, I began discover the kitchen scene, the yard night scene and jogging scene. If you lock it, then you plot progression to a certain character can be seen. It doesn't happen with the boss, the scene line plot do just fine, but it because related to the boss office and the boss can only met at that room. But Lorain can be anywhere and this is messed up or your coding design too simple for it.

- Add more day time like morning, midday, evening & night ... thus you can have more control to event auto-trigger.

- Grinding too fast, but prolong it would result meaningless unless you make each progression feel something. Like from normal to more intimate with certain character.
:. I felt this game is like more to Meet n Fuck game than life simulation porn games. Click click click, and you fuck someone.

- Maybe I will be burn or send to the gallows for saying this by another users ... but I think you should use RPGM instead Renpy. It's weird, me too dislike RPGM, but atleast you can control more of the progression and event plot with RPGM.

Btw, you should join Developer Hub in discord and ask other developer of you trouble with coding. Because Life Simulation games are more complex than VN coding. (If you already join, then ask them more for you trouble)
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Thanks for taking the time to make a solid critique. Pacing of the story is definitely something I've been trying to work on, I'll keep these things in mind as I move forward.
 
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deadend said:
New release is up for 5 bucks if you're interested
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If not, it comes out the 23rd alongside the incest patch. Cheers lads.
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And it's really nice too - you even get a little bit of Patty (who is now my favorite character for sure! :love::love::love:)
 
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i wish the max all cheat would just unlock all scenes as well, also there is some bug when you try to enter kim office and little bug here and there even with fresh start

not game breaking so i guess its fine
 
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deadend said:
New release is up for 5 bucks if you're interested
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If not, it comes out the 23rd alongside the incest patch. Cheers lads.
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Thx for the released :)

But where is the incest patch? Is the patch released?
 
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therehe87

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Just downloaded and play the fresh updated version and unfortunatly got a bug with Kim:

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A save with bug attatched. Also there was the problem with spank bank scenes with Ramirez from MC room - most of it ended with this bug

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All bugs was appear on Vanillia route (they all too cute to be not nice to them :< )
 
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johndoe1545 said:
i wish the max all cheat would just unlock all scenes as well, also there is some bug when you try to enter kim office and little bug here and there even with fresh start

not game breaking so i guess its fine
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therehe87 said:
Just downloaded and play the fresh updated version and unfortunatly got a bug with Kim:

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A save with bug attatched. Also there was the problem with spank bank scenes with Ramirez from MC room - most of it ended with this bug

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All bugs was appear on Vanillia route (they all too cute to be not nice to them :< )
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Thanks for the heads up, I'll get right on it!
 
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Hey guys, it's posted up already, but I'll share the links again just in case.

New Public Release!
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And the incest version.
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There will probably be some bug fixes later today as well.
 
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Still occurring the error that takes you to the room when you click my mother on the grass at dusk ... and where is that nice little anal with her?
 
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How do i access Loraine's degradation scenes? for some reason i can't seem to play them.

Also, isn't there suppossed to be a scene in the greenhouse at night with Lilly? Because i can't access it for some reason.
 
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