VN Ren'Py Captain Lance [0.75.4-PRE-RELEASE-2] [TearStar]

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Lillen B.

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I cannot for the life of me figure out how to get the Ana Sue threesome to trigger. I've tried everything I can think of. Is it actually in the game, or is it something that is planned but not implemented yet?
 

tsukiouji

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Hm... I'm to a point with Helena where she just says "we should stop" and the only other thing I can do is end chapter 2? please help

edit~ i guess the issue was because i did helena last, since i didn't realize to specifically hunt her out. the timing for a lot of this stuff seems pretty awkward and unintuitive.
 
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TearStar

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I cannot for the life of me figure out how to get the Ana Sue threesome to trigger. I've tried everything I can think of. Is it actually in the game, or is it something that is planned but not implemented yet?
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Hm... I'm to a point with Helena where she just says "we should stop" and the only other thing I can do is end chapter 2? please help

edit~ i guess the issue was because i did helena last, since i didn't realize to specifically hunt her out. the timing for a lot of this stuff seems pretty awkward and unintuitive.
Helena is supposed to be like that, no one else is like her tho. And it's called achievement for a reason: doing a specific path through a specific method for a specific reward. It does not hurt the game in any means if you skip it / or you don't.

Reason is story-based.
 

JaegerMister

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How do you actually install the erotic career patch or is that outdated? Also, is this game even still in development? Never mind, read previous comments and realized I wouldn't want the erotic career patch. I'll have to read the walkthrough at some point, but is there a way to make Hannah the mother of Helena? Hannah is hands down my favorite character in this game so far and I kind of want a route that's all her... Ok so again an edit needs to be made. Apparently Hannah CAN end up being Helena's mother ( ALL MY YES, FOREVER AND EVER :love::love:) But her content for chapter 3 hasn't been implemented. Swell. Well,at least I know my efforts for Hannah's heart have NOT been in vain, and that's enough to keep my hopes going. Hopefully we'll see more of our (or at least MY) favorite gorgeous older sister's content soon. Keep up the good work, this game is awesome.
 
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How do you actually install the erotic career patch or is that outdated? Also, is this game even still in development? Never mind, read previous comments and realized I wouldn't want the erotic career patch. I'll have to read the walkthrough at some point, but is there a way to make Hannah the mother of Helena? Hannah is hands down my favorite character in this game so far and I kind of want a route that's all her... Ok so again an edit needs to be made. Apparently Hannah CAN end up being Helena's mother ( ALL MY YES, FOREVER AND EVER :love::love:) But her content for chapter 3 hasn't been implemented. Swell. Well,at least I know my efforts for Hannah's heart have NOT been in vain, and that's enough to keep my hopes going. Hopefully we'll see more of our (or at least MY) favorite gorgeous older sister's content soon. Keep up the good work, this game is awesome.
Yea, Hannah is great, but I think I like all of them equally, Ana and Mom, and Helena, this game just has awesome characters! Just wish we got some more hot sexy scenes, feel we have been missing them of late, well this update seemed to not have any new content? Well guess it was mostly a bug fix update anyway, but I also want to see some content with the other daughters too, Lance has 3, at least in her strange dreams/vision.. ;)
 

TearStar

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Yea, Hannah is great, but I think I like all of them equally, Ana and Mom, and Helena, this game just has awesome characters! Just wish we got some more hot sexy scenes, feel we have been missing them of late, well this update seemed to not have any new content? Well guess it was mostly a bug fix update anyway, but I also want to see some content with the other daughters too, Lance has 3, at least in her strange dreams/vision.. ;)
Let me correct this. Your choices can lead to Lance having three daughters - Helena and twin sisters. If only two were chosen then only the elder sister of the twin will be.

As for the steamy hot sexy scenes, we are two updates apart from those in my current calculation. Next one is current in development, I'm missing some scenes for Linette, Vivienn, Mum. Some actually thought out but not written. I never wanted to rush those scenes - even if I wanted to I'd rather implement a tease scene that makes more logical sense. Most of the actual story scenes are written for Hannah, Anastasia and story scenes for Extonia, Herome and Arlya, also continuation of the main story line.

It will be a much larger update than this one. This was just a left over of what I had and fixes. I don't rush and force stories to come out I rather let ideas come to me instead that is why some updates takes longer time but natural ideas feels better than forced revelations.
 
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Let me correct this. Your choices can lead to Lance having three daughters - Helena and twin sisters. If only two were chosen then only the elder sister of the twin will be.

As for the steamy hot sexy scenes, we are two updates apart from those in my current calculation. Next one is current in development, I'm missing some scenes for Linette, Vivienn, Mum. Some actually thought out but not written. I never wanted to rush those scenes - even if I wanted to I'd rather implement a tease scene that makes more logical sense. Most of the actual story scenes are written for Hannah, Anastasia and story scenes for Extonia, Herome and Arlya, also continuation of the main story line.

It will be a much larger update than this one. This was just a left over of what I had and fixes. I don't rush and force stories to come out I rather let ideas come to me instead that is why some updates takes longer time but natural ideas feels better than forced revelations.
Looking forward to it. ;) Yea, good approach, i understand it has to take time to do scenes for all those girls and to come up with stuff, didnt mean that you should rush them, just a personal wish. And yea, i remember that choice, that you say how many daughters Lance had, when you got some question, well, i choose 3... :)
 

JaegerMister

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Definitely the right approach to take. It's essentially how to be an author 101 actually. Let the story come to you and take the time you need to guarantee your quality instead of rushing out some half-baked piss poor excuse for a product. Though, and this is just brutal honesty, you really could use someone to actually proof read what you write. While the general content of your stories are solid and good, your dialogue often shows up missing words, having odd phrasing or otherwise riddled with grammar errors. Not trying to insult, as I've said before I like your content, but the writing itself needs work, even if the gist of what you're writing doesn't.
 

JaegerMister

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Though, as an aside to the previous message, I recently played HealSlut and Long Live The Princess and as such I think I've been spoiled when it comes to the quality of writing in my porn games. Seriously, their banter and party interplay is just unfairly good. Porn has no right to be that well written. Seriously, how can I make fun of the cheesy dialogue, terrible storytelling, and horrible "character development" when the dialogue is amazing, the storytelling is top notch and the character development is just tres magnifique?
 

TearStar

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My text is proofread or supposed to be. I have asked for help since my native grammar is so out of contact with most of the languages (also our literature sentences, phrasing) if that makes sense. I'm always translating my "literature grammar" to English from the top of my head which makes sense. Now, you can imagine this doesn't work.

That said, I hate hearing about "grammar" errors. That triggers me the most - not because of grammar nazis. I've done all I could to be readable - I asked for help from others who are far better in English to proofread - and it's the most I'm capable of. I can't tell the difference between Text A and Text B in grammar. Only if they are way too annoying (like MTL). I'm at a point where I'm thinking I just continue the game on my native language and no one can say a word about awful grammar.

I don't think there would be a lot of translators.
 
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JaegerMister

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My text is proofread or supposed to be. I have asked for help since my native grammar is so out of contact with most of the languages (also our literature sentences, phrasing) if that makes sense. I'm always translating my "literature grammar" to English from the top of my head which makes sense. Now, you can imagine this doesn't work.

That said, I hate hearing about "grammar" errors. That triggers me the most - not because of grammar nazis. I've done all I could to be readable - I asked for help from others who are far better in English to proofread - and it's the most I'm capable of. I can't tell the difference between Text A and Text B in grammar. Only if they are way too annoying (like MTL). I'm at a point where I'm thinking I just continue the game on my native language and no one can say a word about awful grammar.

I don't think there would be a lot of translators.
Like I said, I'm not knocking your game. And my apologies, I wasn't aware that English wasn't your native language. You're not doing a bad job by any means. The problem with English is that even the majority of it's native speakers are absolutely terrible at it. Most of the writing in porn games made by native English speakers is even WORSE than the writing I've seen in your game. At least you manage to get what you mean across, even if the phrasing sometimes comes across as odd and a little jarring, I'm always able to, at the very least, understand what you were trying to say. And that's saying something. I'm not really any good at programming, but if you want someone with way too much time on their hands, doesn't care about being paid and is regularly willing to shift through thousands upon thousands of pages of text to correct literally every tiny misspelling of a word, I"m available.
 
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When it comes to the grammer, I think its a bit mixed, sometimes its understandable and sometimes its not; its mostly the sentence structure, not the spelling, its that the words are in the wrong order, which can make the sentence confusing.
 
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