I like the progression in this story. Not only the steps that are taken along the way, but the repetition of the steps. Namely, the use of the upskirt demands that lead Casey into more and more thinking it's perfectly normal to send those kinds of pics. And I like the repetition of the shaving scenes too, with the idea that her skin and dark pubes works against her having an /acceptable pussy/.
I think you two work pretty well together. The story in on point, and the visuals help to bring the scenes alive. I really did like the first photoshoot where it's all new to her, and the scene progresses and leads. I think the eventual sex with Greg turned out pretty well. I'm a bit torn with what I should make my /main playthrough/. I don't mind what's happening with Greg at all, but I still like what happened with Tara as an alternate path through the main path.
I also like that this story seems to be mostly about nudity. But, I do hope there's a lot more sex depicted in the future "professor path" and "Cassandra path". BDSM-based training and discipline with the professor, could like to more sex scenes between them within that play. And Cassandra could be more bi, and hence she could lead Casey into a more party/freeuse type of experience.
Or maybe the story really should mostly be about nudity and the related humiliation of being one-around-many clothed people. I do like that idea, and I have have enjoyed the scenes where Casey is left naked, and the other people are just chatting away like it doesn't matter, like they were in the photoshoots.
At any rate, I think it's a good decision to just develop the main paths and leave the others for later. I think it gives you he choice on whether to bring more sex into it, depending on what's happened in the main plot when you're finished with it. I find it a bit strange that nothing much sexually has happened with Casey on the Tara path. Like, nothing. But, I did like the outside showers and the idea that /she only gets to pee in a bucket/. I like Casey's rebellious thoughts too, showing that it not what she wants to be doing.
I do like both paths and the story itself. I like the composition. I like the ideas. So, great job.