VN Ren'Py Completed City of Broken Dreamers [v1.15.0 Ch. 15] [PhillyGames]

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VicelloBalthazar

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The Bush Diver said:
Excuse me, brothers. I have to share this with y'all. Wiser words have never been written before! :D

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IDK about "badge of womanhood..." However...
I love the fur, personally. Just trim up the sides, ladies. Not into bikini spiders! haha:ROFLMAO:
A fresh shave or wax is awesome... until it turns into five o'clock shadow, stubble and worse!
Not into rubbing one out with Scotch-Brite or sand paper! Aaaaah!:eek:

Live long and prosper, Vin:alien:(y)
 
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moskyx said:
*** UPDATED POST 2022-MAR-18***

Nueva traducción actualizada - v1.11.0

Como siempre, hay que descargar e instalar el juego original y luego descargar y extraer la carpeta "game" del parche y pegarla dentro de la carpeta donde hayáis instalado el juego, reemplazando todo si os pregunta. Para cambiar de idioma hay que entrar en el menú Preferences

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New translation update - v1.11.0

As always, you have to download and install the original game, then download and extract the "game" folder from the patch and copypaste it into the same folder you've installed the game, replacing all when asked. A changing language option will appear in the Preferences menu
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I don't know why but I don't see any option to pass the game to Spanish in "preferences", I have everything downloaded.
 
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VicelloBalthazar said:
IDK about "badge of womanhood..." However...
I love the fur, personally. Just trim up the sides, ladies. Not into bikini spiders! haha:ROFLMAO:
A fresh shave or wax is awesome... until it turns into five o'clock shadow, stubble and worse!
Not into rubbing one out with Scotch-Brite or sand paper! Aaaaah!:eek:

Live long and prosper, Vin:alien:(y)
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Let it all hang out, my friend, then dive into it. Heed my words and your life will change for the better.
 
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I think we're all happy the wait is finally over and we can play Chapter 11. So now it's time to sum up my thoughts.

Unfortunately, I think a lot of the problems that bedeviled Chapter 9 have resurfaced. The sense of rising tension and ominous atmosphere take a back seat for most of the chapter, only resurfacing in the final scenes. In the meanwhile, the MC runs through a series of scenes that feel a little too much like opportunities for screen time for various ladies rather than plot points. Even at the end when the action picks up again, the events don't hit with the impact they probably should have.

The lewd scenes we get are gorgeous, but they're not especially memorable, possibly because it feels like the character insights that normally accompany such scenes are largely absent. This might also be exacerbated by some cut corners (or maybe outright glitches) in some of the various path branches. Several scenes would jump straight to the MC stripping after an innocuous seeming choice (even when he'd never done anything with that girl before), and there were a number of lines that seemed redundant or awkwardly phrased.

The combined result of this is that Chapter 11 feels too leisurely for most of its play time, only to feel too rushed at the end when the plot picks up again. It does check off a few important boxes and promises serious developments Chapter 12, but this installment is a little less than I was hoping for. We'll have to venture into spoilers to get more detailed.
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So that should do it. Sorry to be negative, but I hate to see the game sell itself short. Hopefully Chapter 12 will pick up where this left off and run with it.

tl;dr Chapter 11 has some fun (if familiar) character bits, but they drag the plot to a halt until the final minutes of the update.
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I think the biggest issue with Sasha is that she was clearly intended to be a one and done back in episode 6 or whenever it was she was first encountered, and it was more interesting to have a gangbanger girl in the scene than another generic Mad Max dude. Which sure, fair enough. But then she got a stronger than expected fan reception and Philly apparently felt the need to shoehorn her back into the narrative despite her one plot purpose already being fulfilled.

So she ends up collecting dust in the basement for multiple episodes, popping out every so often to appease the people who demanded her continued presence. The entire sequence of letting her go felt tacked on; as you said, the MC could've visited Todd on his own at any point and Sasha's presence feels mostly like one last attempt to make her seem even a little relevant to ongoing events. The bit where she changes in front of the MC was more of the same tired teasing that wore out its welcome multiple episodes ago. Teasing isn't fun if it never gets beyond that.

I personally found it amusing that even after Philly dragged her screen time far past the character's breaking point, she still didn't get a lewd scene. Which unfortunately implies she'll be back around before we know it because the crowd wants what the crowd wants.
 
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VicelloBalthazar

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The Bush Diver said:
Let it all hang out, my friend, then dive into it. Heed my words and your life will change for the better.
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Dive in is damn right!!! Hahaha:ROFLMAO: First time I ever went down on a girl she was furry and I had a mouthful of braces! Try that on for size! Aaaah!:eek: Fortunately, I have a tongue much like Gene Simmons of Kiss.:p It was also fortunate that she was a natural blonde and not especially hairy. That was a rather unique experience.

"Put some hair around it!" or "Maybe if it had some hair around it." were common quips in the old school days whenever one of us couldn't find something. Haha:ROFLMAO: I'm not Australian but I have always enjoyed exploring the bush down under! Hahahahahahaha:ROFLMAO:
 
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Dev Update #120
And back to it! New release is out and I hope you guys are enjoying it! I dove back in on Wednesday so not a huge update today but that is okay.
First, I have started writing as well as outlining everything for chapter 12. Next, sitting at 45 renders done and also waiting on my first animation which decided it wanted to take a very long time to run...
I also had to get a new laptop for writing and post work since my old one is starting to kick the bucket (battery has ballooned twice on me which I just gave up on after the second round and now the monitor keeps cutting out). Doing a slow transition over just to make sure it all goes smoothly, but just knowing everything is ported over is a relief.
Next on the list, is the poll for the comic is now out to everyone in the Augment tier and up. I will create that Monday night, and Tuesday and hopefully get that out by Wednesday. Then, after that we will do the monthly customs poll, so I can get those to you guys before the month is up.
Gonna be a busy week :p
As always guys, stay awesome!
Philly
 
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I'm really enjoying the game a lot. Currently, I just started chapter 5. Currently, my biggest critique is that the animations are too smooth in some parts. Don't get me wrong, I like the smooth animations. They really make the characters feel alive. But some animations are too smooth. Namely, the ones where slapping (or any fast movement) is involved. When the main character slaps a girl on the ass while he's fucking her, it barely looks like it would cause pain. Well...maybe not pain. I know that smacking a girl isn't necessarily done to inflict harm during sex (unless really rough sex is their kink). More of a jolt of surprise would be felt, ya know? But in any case, the "slaps" look too slow to be a slap: more of a tap if anything. If Philly isn't super busy or has some free time, I hope he revisits some of these old animations that involve fast movements and speed them up. Maybe make the movement in the frames farther apart. That would speed up the animation, right?

One quick question. Did Philly say how many chapters he's planning on making?
 
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Dev Update #120
And back to it! New release is out and I hope you guys are enjoying it! I dove back in on Wednesday so not a huge update today but that is okay.
First, I have started writing as well as outlining everything for chapter 12. Next, sitting at 45 renders done and also waiting on my first animation which decided it wanted to take a very long time to run...
I also had to get a new laptop for writing and post work since my old one is starting to kick the bucket (battery has ballooned twice on me which I just gave up on after the second round and now the monitor keeps cutting out). Doing a slow transition over just to make sure it all goes smoothly, but just knowing everything is ported over is a relief.
Next on the list, is the poll for the comic is now out to everyone in the Augment tier and up. I will create that Monday night, and Tuesday and hopefully get that out by Wednesday. Then, after that we will do the monthly customs poll, so I can get those to you guys before the month is up.
Gonna be a busy week :p
As always guys, stay awesome!
Philly
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Love Philly Games! Thank you Philly!!!
Gratitude to UncleVT for bringing the news.
Live long and prosper, Vin :alien: (y)
 
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Machete said:
That's how myths are often born. Just to say one, Han Solo was meant to be just a support for the first movien and Star Wars was supposed to be done with him.
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Machete speaks truth! Rumors are cheap and usually based on lies and/or opinions.
Gracias Machete!
Live long and prosper, Vin:alien:(y)
PS: Whether Sasha was intended as a "throw away" one appearance npc or not, I am certainly happy to have her. :cool:
 
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