Jack2122
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Thank you!
I will try my best with all the dialogs.
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I will try my best with all the dialogs.
Jack2122
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Do you need a proofreader or story editor?
I'm not being sarcastic. There's a forum for it and people willing.
Sersenio
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It will be interesting to see how the game develops. It definitely has potential.
Specter2470
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Ok, so knowing full well the dev's first language may not be English (hell - most likely, really), the grammar, spelling and sentence structure are completely broken.
Hurts my brain reading such stuff.
Sorry, dev, can't do it. I'll fix that shit for free if you want, but I'm not playing a game that causes me migraines
Hurts my brain reading such stuff.
Sorry, dev, can't do it. I'll fix that shit for free if you want, but I'm not playing a game that causes me migraines
Jack2122
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Yeah the english is very bad, but the renders are nice and the girls are cute. Dev don't let the criticism get you down, get some help to rework the english and keep going. I look forward to your next update. Good Luck!
Would 100% recommend a proofreader. I did enjoy some of the fantastically poor writing like this gem:
"why didn't you got her yesterday?"
"just reasons, not something interesting"
Got a good belly laugh from that one.
"why didn't you got her yesterday?"
"just reasons, not something interesting"
Got a good belly laugh from that one.
Professor Black
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recurring? i might be new to this site, only game i know that has sex and basketball is WVM. I'd genuinely like to see the others.
Hello.
The demo is short.
The worldbuilding is just a school so limited.
The characters are already numerous and different but not enough male characters for the basketball team.
The story is classic but too fast paced. You go to the library and there's already an exhibitionnist you can fuck. The first night you're already invited to a truth or dare game by only girls that are good with showing their body and, when you wake up after drinking too much, the only thing you think is fucking the closest girl to you. For a dating sim game, it's really strange not to develop the relationship with potential partners (targets but I don't like that term) before having some action. Also, is the MC that frustated sexually to have sex with every woman he encounters? I know it's a porn game but some feelings and romance (what, it's in the tags but I didn't see any) don't do anything bad.
The art is the good point of the game. The characters and the background are well done.
And the main problem is the english. Following what is happening is difficult.
It's too early to asses the evolution of the game and knowing if it'll become good or not but the basis are already there.
Good continuation.
The demo is short.
The worldbuilding is just a school so limited.
The characters are already numerous and different but not enough male characters for the basketball team.
The story is classic but too fast paced. You go to the library and there's already an exhibitionnist you can fuck. The first night you're already invited to a truth or dare game by only girls that are good with showing their body and, when you wake up after drinking too much, the only thing you think is fucking the closest girl to you. For a dating sim game, it's really strange not to develop the relationship with potential partners (targets but I don't like that term) before having some action. Also, is the MC that frustated sexually to have sex with every woman he encounters? I know it's a porn game but some feelings and romance (what, it's in the tags but I didn't see any) don't do anything bad.
The art is the good point of the game. The characters and the background are well done.
And the main problem is the english. Following what is happening is difficult.
It's too early to asses the evolution of the game and knowing if it'll become good or not but the basis are already there.
Good continuation.
Jack2122
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HI
yes I know it was fast paced but from this point it will be more slower... there will be more male characters.... the worldbuilding will not be just in school, the main theme is school setting but not just that there will be more stuff that I'm planning!
the ENGLISH is the most known problem so it's the most likely to need improvement.. all of the dialog.
Thanks for playing and for your feedback!!
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this is an update, the name changed because it's was used in a couple of games!
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