VN Ren'Py Abandoned Cobra Venom [v0.3.9 Public] [SaVa_Game]

[DA22]

Yes.
But she will remain Kate's friend anyway.

Hope she will tone her predatory nature a bit down then if they stay friends. It is not that she is a bad person, but she feels more like a NTR-NPC and something of an antagonist now as an enabler for MC or a friend.

 

[Jimbo Browne]

Hope she will tone her predatory nature a bit down then if they stay friends. It is not that she is a bad person, but she feels more like a NTR-NPC and something of an antagonist now as an enabler for MC or a friend.

Yes, a very hedonistic personality with near predatory behaviour towards others whom she finds appealing; as shown towards Kate and the MC (to some extent) so far. Jacqueline is written in a way where she "weaponizes" her sexuality as she has against the principal

What is refreshing here is that she is written in an intriguing way; as she also seems to care about the well being of Kate (though that could also be self serving).

I have played other games where such a character has been reduced to being just predatory "NTR-esque" shell, which can be very off putting to players.

Her character to me provides and interesting contrast to both Megan and Alexis in the game.

Looking forwards to how they develop.

 

[SaVa007]

At first glance, it might seem that Jacqueline, Meghan and Alexis are alike.
All three girls are sexually aggressive, but they each have their own reasons for doing what they do.
Alexis loves risk the most. Megan wants to earn MC's trust. Jacqueline likes sex - yes, but she is not devoid of feelings.

 

[Jimbo Browne]

At first glance, it might seem that Jacqueline, Meghan and Alexis are alike.
All three girls are sexually aggressive, but they each have their own reasons for doing what they do.
Alexis loves risk the most. Megan wants to earn MC's trust. Jacqueline likes sex - yes, but she is not devoid of feelings.

That subtle yet important attention to detail is what makes your narrative intriguing.

It is not something that is easy to do, congratulations on achieving the same.

Getting insights (however brief) into the thought process behind the development of the story and its characters is fascinating, thanks for sharing.

 

[MrFriendly]

At first glance, it might seem that Jacqueline, Meghan and Alexis are alike.
All three girls are sexually aggressive, but they each have their own reasons for doing what they do.
Alexis loves risk the most. Megan wants to earn MC's trust. Jacqueline likes sex - yes, but she is not devoid of feelings.

Jacqueline: I have no interest in her because she has a super creepy husband and she won’t stop bugging Kate about fucking. I don’t understand their relationship at all. No matter how helpful she is to Kate it also feels like she is doing it all with the ulterior motive of sex

As for Megan, fucking as soon as you meet doesn’t build trust. It just means you fuck indiscriminately. Again I have zero interest... I don’t like it when people immediately call into question the decisions of someone they just met and yet are also “down to fuck” the same person.

Alexis is hot and she’s been a fun side piece but the tired trope of the bisexual who corrupts some “innocent” girl into a threesome is frustrating. I prefer the “risky public sex” part of her not the “let’s get Hannah in on this too”.

Really enjoying the story, look forward to seeing the English becoming more polished in future.

 

[Shuchetan]

Thanks for letting me know. The problem was because of the "%" sign. Already fixed.
Here are the files that need to be replaced in the "game" folder. (Keep the previous files before replacing.)
Workupload
If you or someone else finds an error, please write to me in private messages.

The Bugfix File is showing containing Trojan!!!

Can someone upload a clean version?

 

[Rinbael]

As for Megan, fucking as soon as you meet doesn’t build trust. It just means you fuck indiscriminately. Again I have zero interest... I don’t like it when people immediately call into question the decisions of someone they just met and yet are also “down to fuck” the same person.

Yeah I don't trust her and get the feeling Megan is a "black widow" kind of spy that specializes in seduction and depending on what you choose in the bar I'm guessing that will come into play when she is trying to infiltrate the gang for example if you are fine with her fucking the barman she is going to fuck leaders of the gang to get in and if you are fine with the group sex that will come into play as well.

 

[MrFriendly]

Yeah I don't trust her and get the feeling Megan is a "black widow" kind of spy that specializes in seduction and depending on what you choose in the bar I'm guessing that will come into play when she is trying to infiltrate the gang for example if you are fine with her fucking the barman she is going to fuck leaders of the gang to get in and if you are fine with the group sex that will come into play as well.

Yeah, I just found her really distasteful... "Hi, you didn't do a good job on this op back in the day. Wanna fuck? No? How about with the bartender? No? How about I just fuck him then?"...

I think you are right that she will try to fuck her way into the gang, to the top of the gang, and then blame the MC for any issues that result from her "fucking" plan.

 

[Rinbael]

Yeah, I just found her really distasteful... "Hi, you didn't do a good job on this op back in the day. Wanna fuck? No? How about with the bartender? No? How about I just fuck him then?"...

I think you are right that she will try to fuck her way into the gang, to the top of the gang, and then blame the MC for any issues that result from her "fucking" plan.

Yeah she seems very manipulative as well especially since she somehow got access to the MCs file when she shouldn't be able to. I wouldn't be surprised if she fucked the MCs boss to get it and become his partner. I mentioned it in my post before but she's my main suspect for being Viper right now.

 

[SaVa007]

The Bugfix File is showing containing Trojan!!!

Can someone upload a clean version?

I will update the game soon. The update was uploaded here ahead of time and I didn't think that I would have to repair the script in a hurry.
You can safely complete the game without this fix. The event that should not be shown on this thread has little effect.
Give me 12 hours and I'll fix it.
I have night now and soon I will fall asleep.
I apologize for not seeing this error before.

 

[MrFriendly]

Yeah she seems very manipulative as well especially since she somehow got access to the MCs file when she shouldn't be able to. I wouldn't be surprised if she fucked the MCs boss to get it and become his partner. I mentioned it in my post before but she's my main suspect for being Viper right now.

TBH I kinda feel like the boss and her could be Cobra and Viper... Or the boss is knowingly working for them. Feels like the MC has been kept on a wild goose chase while Cobra keeps escaping and getting more powerful.

Her having access to files she shouldn't could be because she is a good fuck or because she has blackmail on the boss or both (she filmed the fuck and is threatening him with it).

Looking forward to finding out in future updates...

 

[SaVa007]

TBH I kinda feel like the boss and her could be Cobra and Viper... Or the boss is knowingly working for them. Feels like the MC has been kept on a wild goose chase while Cobra keeps escaping and getting more powerful.

I will try to surprise everyone.
And Cobra is not hiding, he is closer than you think.

 

[MrFriendly]

I will try to surprise everyone.
And Cobra is not hiding, he is closer than you think.

Okay... So how did Hannah mastermind the death of her father, go to school, and run around the world as Cobra?

LOL, I know I only amuse myself...

TBH... my suspects have been (for awhile): Jacqueline's hubby or the bartender.

 

[SaVa007]

As for Megan, fucking as soon as you meet doesn’t build trust. It just means you fuck indiscriminately. Again I have zero interest... I don’t like it when people immediately call into question the decisions of someone they just met and yet are also “down to fuck” the same person.

Alexis is hot and she’s been a fun side piece but the tired trope of the bisexual who corrupts some “innocent” girl into a threesome is frustrating. I prefer the “risky public sex” part of her not the “let’s get Hannah in on this too”.

You may have noticed that Megan, like everyone else, has points of love and friendship.
But at the same time, there are no restrictions to have sex with her.
(This is done on purpose.)

Alexis - I don’t know why you thought she wanted to take Hannah to bed.
What was shown in the last update was a joke on the part of Alexis. In this sense, she is different from Jacqueline.

 

[SaVa007]

Okay... So how did Hannah mastermind the death of her father, go to school, and run around the world as Cobra?

LOL, I know I only amuse myself...

TBH... my suspects have been (for awhile): Jacqueline's hubby or the bartender.

Don't forget that Hannah sometimes missed school.

 

[DA22]

Okay... So how did Hannah mastermind the death of her father, go to school, and run around the world as Cobra?

LOL, I know I only amuse myself...

TBH... my suspects have been (for awhile): Jacqueline's hubby or the bartender.

Well another option is that the friend never died or that cobra is indeed female, well that could be a big surprise. Being close more or less keeps everyone a suspect likely besides gang members or the teens.

 

[SaVa007]

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If there is someone who knows how to use Daz studio, go here.

 

[xXwankerXx]

You may have noticed that Megan, like everyone else, has points of love and friendship.

Just checked the renders and there's some scenes with her that I missed. Like when she's leaving or entering (??) Jack's office, the MC waits for her and he pushes her to the wall (literally) then they start kissing and go together to his friend's bar. Can you tell me how to get those scenes pls ??

I apologize for not seeing this error before.

No problem, you'll probably working alone too, so take your time and thank u for developing this amazing game. Mafia shit, gangstas, sexy women and now superhuman thugs ... it reminds me of another good game that was abandoned, perv2k16's Family Matters. Good luck and keep up the good work !!

 

[HaremKing112]

yo i downloaded the compressed version and this happened

 

[TheSidewinder]

Has anyone else hit a translation bug where English suddenly becomes Russian for.... well more than a few screens. Here's just one example:

and just two screens after that, you see this:

then you have about 12 screens of Russian until here:

then back to English:

At that point Hannah comes in:

and there's a VERY long dialog in Russian again, at home, at school, back home again, and I hit English on only one or two screens, usually "Yes" from someone. Two choices were offered and the choices were in English, but the underlying dialog was Russian so I have no idea what those choices would do.
Here's where I gave up since the game just..... lost me.


EDIT: Never mind, I see it's due to my applying that bugfix file.
I can just reinstall the previous version 2.9 and play up to its end then resume with this latest release, but anyone starting fresh with v0.3 is going to have a hard time.