(checked bios on phone outside police, got this error)
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/loc_hospital.rpy", line 284, in script
call screen hospitaloffice
File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 569, in execute_call_screen
store._return = renpy.call_screen(name, *args, **kwargs)
File "game/app_bios.rpy", line 1, in execute
screen app_bios:
File "game/app_bios.rpy", line 1, in execute
screen app_bios:
File "game/app_bios.rpy", line 5, in execute
vpgrid:
File "game/app_bios.rpy", line 264, in execute
if bios_granny:
File "game/app_bios.rpy", line 265, in execute
if bios_name_granny and bios_alive_granny:
File "game/app_bios.rpy", line 265, in <module>
if bios_name_granny and bios_alive_granny:
NameError: name 'bios_alive_granny' is not defined
Game had a lot of typos bad grammar and even some missing words. Game requires a good once over with a spelling/grammar checker. Example "Hm, my just vibrated" (I assume the word phone is missing)
Sounds/music are loud.
codename should have a default.
At the start if you are outside the crown offices and click the phone then map and then exit it auto puts you outside your house instead of leaving you at the office.
Some of these images with Polly seem grainy
Should include a opaqueness slider for the text to allow players to make it stand out.
Kat says "You like this, Kat?" probably should be MC
MC knowing patients are behind that specific wall and Kat knowing MC is an agent when she seemed to not know he was going to work there.
You can bypass talking to Lincoln, and roam around and MC looks for a "Silv" which is a name he doesn't know.
MC directly saying to Lincoln about the four kings seems weird, rather than just saying he is an agent doing his duty or whatever.
The choice of "That seems risky for a paramedic" I thought it was about choosing your partner rather than her forgetting, maybe make it a bit more apparent.
The game has a weird "auto save" type thing, like if you do something but then roll back to before it the next "scene" exists, example is like Silv changing while if you do it before you ever talk to Lincoln then you will find her like that, if you roll back though she is in the position as if you already talked to Lincoln. Which again MC talks about him hearing about her prior to hearing about her, and thus it is weird that she is fully dressed post the Lincoln talk.
The number pressing and it not being able to use the numpad feels pretty bad.
Lincoln at his desk post the stab has a weird click box which is some part on the table.
Weird MC doesn't have Tyrus write his address or talk about the CCTV with James. I understand the hand thing is important but with MC asking it of everyone else, seems he would do Tyrus too.
James McGill photo in notes is a bit too close to his face unlike the rest.
I like the phone, but also some of the clicking forward/backward/leaving seems a bit off and hard to do.
I do wish the notes were a bit more in depth and MC pointed out more lies. Like Skye saying she only went to do the back of the bar once, yet if you solve it was twice. The photos also having that random other stool or the drinks not really being easily to notice since the restock kind of resets them.
