Seems like a good game, so I'll be keeping an eye on it. However:
- A proofread would benefit this a lot. Word order in questions is often wrong, people asking what hour it is instead of what time; lots of little things.
- Characters seem to sometimes remember things that didn't happen. For example, if you refused having sex with Miranda, when she asks the MC for sex the nice way, he says, "you basically told me to lay down and then you wanted to ride me, while being a serious bitch". Another example is MC and Blanca both thinking about how she tempted him at Summer's place, even if MC doesn't even meet her there. There was also something with the MC thinking about how awkward something was that happened in Lynda's bedroom, but I've never been there...
There are a few more instances of this where I'm not sure, since it's kept rather vague.