OoOoOo~! I really like this, I rarely play alpha games with so little content, but this one was charming, so I couldn't resist!
I want to start with pointing out a few typos/errors/mistakes on my end (I don't know if your supporters or fans already mentioned this, or if you caught it yourself), I won't make it a habit, as I'm not much of a sociable person, and I don't believe you'll find me active on any of your social medias. And I apologize in advance that I won't likely be giving monetary support, so take my words with a grain of salt, I guess... Anyways:
I really like what I've seen so far, writing'is'good, plot's'stable, even the art is pretty good! I will say I'm really interested in playing the finished product!
Some critiques and concerns:
This game is right up my alley, it has a female MC virgin with customizable POC features; like, dayum, girl, hit all those points! Gotta be honest, if it had rape, it'll literally be my dream game.
I'mma play a bit o' devil on your shoulder, and sprinkle some food for thought for issuing some CNC of the rape baiting variety? I do like NC in games, but it's as you say, for me, I don't like being snared into NC by unwanted characters, and would like the player to have a bit of agency into picking choices that would lead to a player desired rape? It'll be rape baiting on the player's end, but NC on the character's end? Though you mentioned it's not really your cup'a, fair, so I'll admit I wouldn't mind leaving it to CNC fantasy fully in the characters explicit permission? I've my eye on both bad boys BFF's Ex BF and Dealer, though Frat Dude may have the moxie. (Though, honestly, all of them have dubious-con energy, not gonna lie.
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I'm hoping you'd consider it, given that there was a scene in there that's already leaning heavily on what I'm referring to, in regards to Blair and Gabe, it felt pretty rape bait-ish to me, and I liiiked~
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looot~!!!
Speaking of Gabe.
Whew!
My God!
What have you've DONE?!?!?!
I'm really big on the Girl Code, so I was ready to pass on that one, but then when he went all Fuckboi Kink-Trash Dom, I knew I was ruined for the rest of the game! Girl, you're going to make me fuck over my BFF, and not be sorry 'bout it!
(I'm already plotting foisting Blair to rebound on Rafi, and scoop Gabe up in a flash!). Seriously, can I have Gabe, no strings to Blair? (having to fuck her, I mean) This is usually Polygamists' wet dream to double up with BFFs' BFs, but I'm too monogamous for that, not that I don't mind innuendo and plots being available (during my GGGB run, I didn't like the team up with BFF when going down the baddie route). Also, please tell me the route's'gonna be messy? I don't want to break Blair's heart,
bUt I'm kIndD of foR iT??? Like, Choke-Doms are rare—
Blair, you fool.