VN Ren'Py College Kings [Act 1 v1.4.8] [Undergrad Steve]

[Cirdon]

May I ask where the phone during scene bug was, it's not supposed to be in the game

The APE party scene. Any time I was talking to Chloe I had the phone icon visible and if I clicked it I was back to the freeplay and staring at the back of rock collection dude's head. I hit exit phone and I was back at the "End freeplay" if i clicked them.

 

[LISC-MOODY]

Looks promising.

 

[Cirdon]

How could I improve it for the release of episode 1? Would you like to see completely separate choice paths ?

You're description hinges upon this whole fight club thing. Your demo harped on how the fraternities train you.

You need a fully fleshed out mechanic for both of those things for a full episode/chapter release. Or you just make the fight outcome based on your stats and don't bother with elaborate mechanics for either. Whichever direction you go, it needs to be fully implemented so players can decide if that's a direction they want to go.

The "I think the fight club idea is stupid" path needs to go to a nice "You and Lauren have a fun relationship, graduate college, get jobs and move to a house with a white picket fence, 2.5 kids, and 3 cats. You have sex twice a month and you're both 'happy' about it."

Your description is too heavily weighted toward the fight club angle, so there's no sense in creating an extra fully fleshed out path if that's not a story you really want to write.

 

[xXwankerXx]

In response to the dreaming, I wanted to have realistic relationships with the girls and I felt a dream scene was a good way to implement an example of what sex scenes can look like without exaggerated porn style plots where you have sex with everyone you meet

Lots of ppl (myself included) prefer actual build up and progress especially with the main ladies, there's secondary characters for quickies and sex with no strings attached, a sex scene that's happening only in MC's dream leads to no progress with the respective woman. There's also the risk that the actual sex scene isn't as good as the dream counterpart. I think you should stick to "legit" progress, a little teasing and seduction doesn't hurt.

That aside, I'd like to congratulate you for the promising start, definitely a game that's worth keeping an eye on and the resemblance with BaDIK will make ppl curious to play it. Good luck with the project !!

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Had my interest until that same derpy mc reveal. I miss Max.

 

[kauthor]

Well, there will probably be a walkthrough mod for sure!

 

[Midgaanlok]

From the pictures I've seen, the characters in the game look top tiered. Now we only need a good story and freedom of choice to hold it up. Can't wait to play the game at its developmental peak.

 

[ben_sylar]

Found a bug:

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[VossJck]

It was a good beginning.

Found a bug when I had to choose whether to walk up to the girl or she was occupied. I said walk up and say hello, we exchanged names, next thing I know Ryan is pushing me forward and we go over the giving each other our names again.

Also, when Loraine called me about talking the next day, it would not stop telling me I had a message until I chose both possible answers.

I'm hoping the Apes are the villainous foils in this story because they are assholes.
I kind of felt the wonderful woman dating the biggest asshole in the college is a bit overdone, just my opinion.

I do look forward to the next release.

I really wish you luck in this DEV and I'm sure you will find a following.

 

[Vuynjou]

damn the renders looks good

 

[Deleted member 2196026]

I really like it, rendering is great. Gameplay went well, didn't have any bugs, great game. Can't wait for more.
I do feel it's quite familiar, in terms of story and such, but I ain't complaining, real great. All the best with more.

 

[MartinSr]

Great start DEV. Will be watching and waiting for more content, to see where this leads.

 

[scarp1]

I get this error code just after returning to dorm then fall on bed, scene after talking to Lauren on the bench.

I dont get the error if i try to kiss Lauren, error comes up every time though if you choose not to kiss her.

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 3515, in script
    jump nextscenee
ScriptError: could not find label 'nextscenee'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 3515, in script
    jump nextscenee
  File "C:\Users\Ant\Downloads\CollegeKings-0.1-pc\CollegeKings-0.1-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1697, in execute
    rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
  File "C:\Users\Ant\Downloads\CollegeKings-0.1-pc\CollegeKings-0.1-pc\renpy\script.py", line 898, in lookup
    raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'nextscenee'.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
College Kings 0.1
Sat Oct 03 02:26:23 2020

 

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College Kings [v0.1] Undergrad Steve

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[John 13]

Nice game

 

[RustyRug]

Hmm this game looks pretty interesting good luck dev hope the game gains some traction

 

[69AssLover69]

Yessir! Looks amazing, can't wait until more content

 

[Hotkillerz]

cheats?

 

[Hotkillerz]

everytime you decides not to kiss her. cant even get pass the scene as it breaks the game

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 3515, in script
    jump nextscenee
ScriptError: could not find label 'nextscenee'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 3515, in script
    jump nextscenee
  File "C:\Users\chamb\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa7220.39388\CollegeKings-0.1-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1697, in execute
    rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
  File "C:\Users\chamb\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa7220.39388\CollegeKings-0.1-pc\renpy\script.py", line 898, in lookup
    raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'nextscenee'.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
College Kings 0.1
Fri Oct 02 21:17:00 2020

 

[baklol]

then forces will awake in ver 6- or ver 7 lets see how much it will take time