VN Ren'Py Abandoned Come Inside [v0.2.1] [ttll]

[Bagger288]

Seems to be a pretty good start to a game all around.

Complaints: The translation was at times weak, but mostly understandable. The first few minigames were fine (though I had to try the first one a few times), but the fourth one was infuriating. I had a tough time finding the slave route even after I realized there is one, but I did get it eventually.

I noticed a couple of bugs: ignoring Kelly when she's texting you can lower Lindsay's points, the slave route makes it impossible to arrive at the meeting early, and Jen's blackmail scene plays out after you leave on that route.

 

[ljz781212]

You know I thought Milfy City and 'City of Broken Dreamers' set the standard for high quality images. That was before I ran into this game. Holy Crap. The attention to detail is mesmerizingly great. From subtle eye movements in conversations, to the intricate designs of skin, clothes, etc. It's a level of quality many developers can't even dream of achieving. The story looks interesting so far as well. Seems like attention to grammar took a hit halfway through the episode, but that can be easily addressed. I'm hoping things become more clear as more updates come out. We're told that the mc is a teenager and his best friend doesn't look older than 16/17, so I'm really curious about how and when exactly the protagonist moved out of town, got filthy rich and came back while still being extremely young. Lora and Lindsey look way older (like early 30s), so when the mc is recalling sexual encounters with Lora and the Mom (before he moved out), you have to wonder about how old he was when their relationship started. So I'm hoping that stuff gets clarified. This is easily the best new game to drop on F95 in a while. Looking forward to seeing what's next. 10/10 so far.

Wait, Isn't Lora the mom? I think they are same one.

 

[Disabled Account #1278362]

Wait, Isn't Lora the mom? I think they are same one.

Lora is the mom in the patched version, yes.

 

[lordshimra]

https://f95zone.to/threads/come-inside-v0-1-ttll.32087/#lg=post-2045756&slide=0

how did u get the pressure on her boobs in the bikini? been wondering how to do that

 

[KingWeWuz]

The relationship dynamics on money and family were incredibly well done. Wow, just wow, the writing is absolutely solid.

The sis is a selfish bitch who wants to be treated like a queen and make stupid decisions. The two-faced politeness in her writing is so down to earth it's almost like this isn't a porn fantasy, but rather some real stuff going on.

The only bad part of the writing is the mc has absolutely no idea how to lock the door despite having secrets he should be extremely paranoid about. Also, no one knocks they just come in like assholes.

 

[joram00]

The game looks great and it's interesting enough... but ffs lose the minigames or make them accesible (i'm talking the first one, couldn't be boothered trying anymore) you either hit those dots perfectly or don't have a chance in that time... luckily the images are easily accesible

 

[Disabled Account #1278362]

The game looks great and it's interesting enough... but ffs lose the minigames or make them accesible (i'm talking the first one, couldn't be boothered trying anymore) you either hit those dots perfectly or don't have a chance in that time... luckily the images are easily accesible

There are some saves posted in the thread that have all the sketchbook scenes unlocked. I would suggest downloading one, the scenes contain a good amount of backstory that you really cant get from just the images.

 

[joram00]

There are some saves posted in the thread that have all the sketchbook scenes unlocked. I would suggest downloading one, the scenes contain a good amount of backstory that you really cant get from just the images.

I saw the saves but i usually prefer to follow through with mine, i manage to see the sketchbook story using the console and the game variables. The tiping game is not that bad, but the click one with a portable bluetooth mouse is almost imposible in the time (the dots are unforgiving and require too much precission).
As i said it's looking good, not a big fan of minigames though

 

[Onysko]

I saw the saves but i usually prefer to follow through with mine, i manage to see the sketchbook story using the console and the game variables. The tiping game is not that bad, but the click one with a portable bluetooth mouse is almost imposible in the time (the dots are unforgiving and require too much precission).
As i said it's looking good, not a big fan of minigames though

You might try using a cheat engine to slow the game down, giving you extra time to click on those dots. I agree, they have a pretty small click area.

 

[kansasdude]

I hope the developer keeps up with this game till the end and does not abandon this

 

[kansasdude]

if you take a look at his Patreon page, he needs more supporters (payers)

$374 of $500 per month
When i reach this goal that means people like my game and will continue the development.

$800 per month
I will make a poll for all patrons to choose two girls for a custom wallpaper.

$3,000 per month
I will get a new PC. More renders per update, more characters, updates will come out faster.

 

[blobzerz]

Whoever thought introducing timed pixel hunt minigame was a good idea needs to have his head checked. Always second too short to click last fucking pixel.

 

[tata18]

i like this game

 

[Onysko]

kansasdude
I am definitely considering it, but not until some more updates are rolled out consistently. And I'll need to see how good they are at communicating with their patrons.

 

[Croftic]

How to start the 5th mini game?I passed the first 4, but when I click on the 5th picture - the game does not start (MC just tells the story and nothing happens).

 

[Onysko]

How to start the 5th mini game?I passed the first 4, but when I click on the 5th picture - the game does not start.

Some mini-games only unlock after you reach specific points in the story. I'm fairly certain the 5th and 6th mini-games unlock right near the end of the version, after leaving the business meeting, when you get off the red motorbike, before entering your home.

 

[Trasher2018]

Great game with outstanding artstyle and renders.

But .. I might be wrong, but it the one memory not a violation of rule 7?
I mean I dont care and its the MC but still ... I guess Patreon will have a problem with that too ... or is that part of the incest patch only?

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I cant imagine how this game will work without that patch tbh ^^

Cant wait for the next update ... really awesome work, only with some small spelling mistakes. The minigames are a but to hard - I like the creativity in them, but sometimes the timelimit is a bit to harsh or the amount of clicks to much. No one wants to do such a minigame more than 1-2 times.

 

[Goku14]

Great game with outstanding artstyle and renders.

But .. I might be wrong, but it the one memory not a violation of rule 7?
I mean I dont care and its the MC but still ... I guess Patreon will have a problem with that too ... or is that part of the incest patch only?

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I cant imagine how this game will work without that patch tbh ^^

Cant wait for the next update ... really awesome work, only with some small spelling mistakes. The minigames are a but to hard - I like the creativity in them, but sometimes the timelimit is a bit to harsh or the amount of clicks to much. No one wants to do such a minigame more than 1-2 times.

how did you get that image?

 

[Fantabaldu]

how did you get that image?

You must open the book of memory , and inside there are some picture t open with a minigame . when you win it will start a story with memory with your childhood with you Mom
i quote a previous post , where you can understand better haw to play the minigames

Alright I took the liberty of explaining the mini games in the sketch book, in order to view the memories. There are about 4 types of mini games so far for 6 different memories, I'm pretty sure you need to unlock the first ones in order to view the last ones (i.e., you can't automatically jump to the 6th memory, you need to get the previous ones too).

As you progress through the game, more memory mini games unlock. e.g., only after Lindsay's shower scene will the beach memory mini game become available for you to play and unlock.

They should all be unlocked for you to play right before the end, after getting off the motorbike when returning from the meeting (harassment \ blackmail scene). (you'd still need to unlock the 1st memory and those after it, in order unlock the last one, the rule still applies)

So with all that aside, the mini games themselves:

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These are the first 4 by the order that they unlock (I think..), they don't unlock all at once, like I said. And there's no need to complete them as soon as you can, you can do them all right after leaving the harassment\blackmail.

1st memory - lunch

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2nd memory - lollipop

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3rd memory - beach buns

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4th memory - Bangerous operation

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5th memory - new home

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6th memory - struggling

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Aaaand... That's it for this release!

 

[Disabled Account #1278362]

Great game with outstanding artstyle and renders.

But .. I might be wrong, but it the one memory not a violation of rule 7?
I mean I dont care and its the MC but still ... I guess Patreon will have a problem with that too ... or is that part of the incest patch only?

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I cant imagine how this game will work without that patch tbh ^^

Cant wait for the next update ... really awesome work, only with some small spelling mistakes. The minigames are a but to hard - I like the creativity in them, but sometimes the timelimit is a bit to harsh or the amount of clicks to much. No one wants to do such a minigame more than 1-2 times.

That scene is in fact only present in the patched version.