4.10 star(s) 123 Votes
Apr 22, 2019
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looking at the artwork, looks good, but to the "not needed, trying to show professional" editing of images, takes everything out, I think after playing this game I will begetting a blurry vision
 

Buddawg

Member
Aug 12, 2017
219
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i like the game but it has some minor problems like some of the dialogue being cringe not sure if that was on purpose or not though also the sketch book dots are tiny so the hit box is a nightmare but i experienced no errors which was nice and the art is really good so an A+ for the aesthetic
Pretty much excactly my sentiment.
The minigame either needs better timing, or bigger hitboxes. I do play fps so my mouse-aim is very decent, and this was just annoying. Its not user friendly, and will be a stumbling block instead of a feature.
Game looks good, very good. But, its not really a game. And it lacks story telling. It does have a story, no doubt about it.. its just not very well told, or written. Its the better side of engrish, but not good. It could do with a lot more flesh in the storytelling and this game would shine a LOT. The pacing is so rushed that you dont really get attached to anything. I know a lot of ppl like that, i dont. I really hope this works out for him, I just personally need more than just great visuals.
 

ljz781212

Member
May 26, 2018
200
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I thought that only the first mini-game is a little difficult due to timeout. They are all interesting and worth to be remainned but need to be adjusted easier.
 

Korentin

Member
Game Developer
May 20, 2019
152
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There was no way for me to finish the first mini-game without changing my monitor to 60 from the standard 144, other then some other problems with the minigames the game is superb so far and I can't really understand why people complain about the "story", although if you don't complete the minigames and try a few different choices I guess I could understand why someone could get a tilted view of the possible narratives in the VN.

Hopefully the dev can keep the interesting narrative up and possibly adjust the difficulty of some of the minigames.
 

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Not a Muggle
Game Developer
Dec 9, 2017
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First impressions are very important. My first impression of this game is that the developer must be a 3D artist himself, or have an other job where you must be creative. The design of everything is very well done, I think the menu screen has been one of the best I have seen on here.

Story- and dialoguewise, this game isn't that deep, but not everyone is looking for a good story in a porn game, so that's fine. Another thing that's done very well is the 3D rendering. The characters in the game look pretty and every girl is unique. We can't tell much about their personality or development yet, since this is the first version of the game, but this is a very good start. The choices you make do see to matter, so that's very good! The mobile phone was fun, but it shouldn't be used too much.

I am always looking for inspiration to improve my own game, and one of the things I am going to change is the menu screen. A full-width background with custom buttons is so much nicer! So thank you for this game, I am waiting for the next update. I wish the developer good luck and hope future updates will make this game even better :D
 
4.10 star(s) 123 Votes