VN Ren'Py Abandoned Come Inside [v0.2.1] [ttll]

[NamelessKnight]

Nice start ttll and I'm impressed what you did with a low-mid end PC. Nice story, good dialogues and great renders.

There are many possibilities(or paths) here, so I will have to make good use of my saves to test each one. About the mini-game, I recommend you increase the time a little or increase the size of the hotspot(or hitbox), because the frustration is real when you need just one dot to finish and time is over or your click doesn't hit the dot correctly.

There are complaints about NTR stuff, but I just saw a possible future sharing and a voyeur scene with blackmail and someone is not the MC's love interest(until now). So guys, if you don't like sharing stuff, you can avoid, if even that you don't like the game, I recommend stay away from it, because it's not for you and play another one, your implausible complaint doesn't resolve anything. ttll, about this kind of complaint, I recommend you ignore, but you listen to the constructive critics.

Good luck with your project ttll

 

[Ruodger]

Very beautiful models, interesting game ... waiting for the update.

 

[Shollee]

Niiiice

 

[Deleted member 1134835]

Wow, amazing bro!!!. One of the best game I've played. I hope MC fucks his mom.

 

[Jaycock101]

Does anyone have a mac zip file of the game? it does not work when you unarchive it.

 

[leyre]

Ok, now THAT was a fucking interesting game, hungry for more

Also

Sharing is Caring

 

[DanThaMan]

Ok, now THAT was a fucking interesting game, hungry for more

Also

Sharing is Caring

I'll definitely enjoy sharing the sister

 

[Perchik]

I tried all routes, I can't seem to visit her at night.

Hint: Mute phone on/off

 

[Hyun251]

dont listen these people's "opinion".

I hope to play "your game".

 

[Riitesh]

Man all those comments made me Curious. Too bad i am out of town. And this game isn't available for Android cause i always like to cum inside

 

[FrozenNorseman]

Love the idea, love the renders (I really need to learn how that lighting is done), love that there's elements in there that puts this game above the rest - but, I tried playing this and ended up rage quitting at the sketch drawing. It was infuriatingly hard to hit those dots.

I'll give it another go once my temper calms a bit down again.

 

[Derptronic]

ttll, we will be watching your career with great interest.

 

[Andy211]

Awesome job! Cool renders, nice lookin' clean UI... A true breathe of fresh air after all the same RenPY novels..

 

[Fiko1]

I don't comment but this made me. I don't want another good looking thing to fail.

This is top. Really loved it. I just played Broken Dreamers and then started this but wasn't expecting such a quality. I dare to say it's almost next to the other top level games. Amazing. Good job. Maybe just the diary and phone messages while in a scene are a bit chaotic but it's nice that they affect each other.

BUT let's not get ahead of ourselves. I saw a lot of cases where 1st version was amazing and that was it. Or they did couple more but then they abandoned it. They never released another version.

So author better shows his consistency and then we can talk about me giving you money.

Don't get discouraged because you are not getting enough money at the beginning or you have low number of patrons. Prove yourself worthy.

Thank you.

 

[Deleted member 111545]

I can't seem to visit the sister at night either idk what to do

 

[jish55]

Maybe just the diary and phone messages while in a scene are a bit chaotic but it's nice that they affect each other.

I think the text messages played a decent role in this, as it did affect the mc's surroundings and how others reacted to him. A good example was when you kept checking your phone while your sis was talking to you, and she thought you were ignoring her, or if you say you forget your cell to the club chick and your friend texts you in the middle of the convo, thus causing her to get pissed at you.

 

[JuiceBox12]

I don't comment but this made me.

This is top. Really loved it. I just played Broken Dreamers and then started this but wasn't expecting such a quality. I dare to say it's almost next to the other top level games. Amazing. Good job. Maybe just the diary and phone messages while in a scene are a bit chaotic but it's nice that they affect each other.

BUT let's not get ahead of ourselves. I saw a lot of cases where 1st version was amazing and that was it. Or they did couple more but then they abandoned it. They never released another version.

So author better shows his consistency and then we can talk about me giving you money.

Don't get discouraged because you are not getting enough money at the beginning or you have low number or patrons. Prove yourself worthy.

Thank you.

Pretty much this. And even my writing issues aside, the dev has set a pretty high bar in the visual department, that who knows if he can keep it up. I mean, who knows how long it took him to make this. Could have been 6 months. So even if I were interested in being a patron, I'm definitely not interested in waiting forever between updates. And yes, I'm talking about High Life.

 

[Fiko1]

I think the text messages played a decent role in this, as it did affect the mc's surroundings and how others reacted to him. A good example was when you kept checking your phone while your sis was talking to you, and she thought you were ignoring her, or if you say you forget your cell to the club chick and your friend texts you in the middle of the convo, thus causing her to get pissed at you.

I know, it's nice how others react to it but I think you can lose a lot of content when you use diary or phone at wrong time. And even the controls of the diary moves the scene just by turning the page with the mouse wheel. It's nice mechanic but it's not necessary and I think it would be better if it got implemented directly into the scenario. Just my opinion.

 

[Dependable_223]

You're being too mean to her I think she was jealous that the MC will steal her girlfriend

i dont think it was, mc even mentioned he did not like when she ignored him, also even if she was she could have easily said sorry i cant talk right now maybe later that would have given better perspection on her side ride now she came like egotistical bitch.. With really bad personality.

 

[grobulos]

Ok, About Render, to be honest i play alot and support few cool Guys of Devs. My Info about new Games i got from f95 zone Site. And this is why i want exactly to see your Quality of Render. 6/6 Points perfect. Story.... regular, nothing new, nothing special. Thats Sad, before i invest my regular 10 Dollar show me your Talent. 3 Things i need from You: Renderquality, Story, Gamesystem. One, you brought, 2 are left, convice me and i support you too, i keep an eye of your Work