Confusion's original release was June. I've been working pretty much non-stop since then. Chapter 3 was September. Chapter 4 was a few days ago. My goal has been a new chapter every 8-10 weeks, although sometimes (like the upcoming chapter) it will take longer thanks to the holidays (and my needing some down time). Also, some big events are coming up in chap 5 that will take some time to block out and model.
I think it works either way: "Kevin's threatening," meaning a threat made by Kevin as opposed to someone else. But in context, since Kevin is clearly the person being talked about, that delineation doesn't necessarily need to be made.
I think it works either way: "Kevin's threatening," meaning a threat made by Kevin as opposed to someone else. But in context, since Kevin is clearly the person being talked about, that delineation doesn't necessarily need to be made.
With everything else being talked about this week, grammar was the least of my concerns.
Actually Kevin's threatening to rape does work. Threatening in this case is a gerund, a verb with ing as a nounActually, Snax... it's either "Kevin's threat to rape" or "Kevin threatening to rape." The rest of the sentence is correct as is... choose either way you prefer, both of my examples are grammatically correct. You just can't mix and match the two...You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
I do not mean to be critical, just clarifying... My degree program was classical music performance but English was my primary academic major all through school including my tenure at Indiana University.
Adventure ever on my friend, Phat
Gerund... ing suffix as NOUN, not verb. Kevin is the noun here. Sixteen years studying English, been reading at a collegiate level since age twelve. I know what I said and it was correct.
I'll add it to next release's to-do list.Actually, Snax... it's either "Kevin's threat to rape" or "Kevin threatening to rape." The rest of the sentence is correct as is... choose either way you prefer, both of my examples are grammatically correct. You just can't mix and match the two...You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
I do not mean to be critical, just clarifying... My degree program was classical music performance but English was my primary academic major all through school including my tenure at Indiana University.
Adventure ever on my friend, Phat
No worries... quickest fix is to just lop off the 's. You seemed to want the possessive form which would be Kevin's threat of rape, just drop the "ing." Again, no worries. Happy to help out with spelling and grammar editing, no charge obviously, getting early access to play test already which is all I ever ask for proofreading, editing and royalty free musical score suggestions but you really don't have a lot to edit. You have exceptional taste in music as well. Not sure if I could add much there either but happy to go through the dialogue in .rpy and edit just the dialogue... easy, breezy, lemon squeezy.
Your dialogue already reads rather well, some of the best I've read.
Hey same here. I still have my IU student card in my wallet for some reason xDActually, Snax... it's either "Kevin's threat to rape" or "Kevin threatening to rape." The rest of the sentence is correct as is... choose either way you prefer, both of my examples are grammatically correct. You just can't mix and match the two...You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
I do not mean to be critical, just clarifying... My degree program was classical music performance but English was my primary academic major all through school including my tenure at Indiana University.
Adventure ever on my friend, Phat
I just want you to know that I love your game. It's by far the best game centering on transgender issues I've played so far. I can't wait for the story to continue..
Gee, thanks! I'm about 40% of the way through Chapter 5. It's turning out to be much harder than previous chapters but I'm still hoping for an early Feb release.I just want you to know that I love your game. It's by far the best game centering on transgender issues I've played so far. I can't wait for the story to continue..
