VN Ren'Py Confusion - Chapter 9 [v0.9] [AVNSnax]

[SerHawkes]

Couple of typos I saw, but not too many.

Zoey: Do hope we can forgive her. I get it, she really is hard up. Dick move how she played it, but I think I could eventually forgive her and go with a arc of making her a power bottom.

Brad: Ugh... Just when I semi had hope for him. Sure, he did drink a tad too much and that did come into play a tad. 50/50 on him atm now.

Kevin: So, Kevin the power bottom eh? Who woulda thunk it. Hate bang when?

Izzy: Not gonna lie, I kinda got the feeling that she was built different. Guess I was right.

Overall: Felt a tad shortish but we are likely on our slow road to Alex getting a lewdy harem of sorts...

 

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[Mistress Elizabeth]

Just played 0.5 today. Some thoughts about it:

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[Kind Nightmares]

I wasn't big fan of Zoey, but I'm so upset about her drastic change. It’s like she went from a girl who patiently waited only for a kiss from Chris and supported Alex in everything in just one update turned into a rapist. Yes, there were hints that Alex was sexually attractive to her, but to change like that.

 

[Mistress Elizabeth]

I wasn't big fan of Zoey, but I'm so upset about her drastic change. It’s like she went from a girl who patiently waited only for a kiss from Chris and supported Alex in everything in just one update turned into a rapist. Yes, there were hints that Alex was sexually attractive to her, but to change like that.

Well, about Zoey...

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[Kind Nightmares]

Well, about Zoey...

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I will not argue on this topic, but I will agree on one thing, that what she did, to put it mildly, was wrong and they should have talked. And that's what confused me, as if the character was changed completely.

 

[Mistress Elizabeth]

I will not argue on this topic, but I will agree on one thing, that what she did, to put it mildly, was wrong and they should have talked. And that's what confused me, as if the character was changed completely.

Don't get me wrong, I also I didn't expect something so over the top and so sudden, considering that although her attitude was not always exactly ideal, she was often also supportive.

 

[Avaron1974]

I enjoy the game but I do have to wonder if we're playing a "look at all these people you will hate" sim.

At this point there are about 3 or 4 people that I like and the rest I want to drop into an active volcano just as it goes off.

Glad the twins have each other and they are both super adorable. Sam is a sweetheart and the mother is tolerable at times but everyone else needs to swim in lava.

It almost hurts to say that about Zo. I know she was off the deep end even before this update but to see her just dive right in like that and lose all chance of friendship never mind possible sexy time.

I see people asking for a Sam redemption arc but I don't see how that is possible. Let me put in perspective for you, if a guy attempts to rape a girl she would hate him for life. Everyone else would back her up in hating him. Just because Zo happens to be a fairly attractive girl people are happy to dismiss her attempted rape of someone vulnerable. Fuck that, she can burn with the rest.

The rest are just utter twats with no chance of a good outcome, especially the shitty sister.

 

[Mistress Elizabeth]

I enjoy the game but I do have to wonder if we're playing a "look at all these people you will hate" sim.

At this point there are about 3 or 4 people that I like and the rest I want to drop into an active volcano just as it goes off.

Glad the twins have each other and they are both super adorable. Sam is a sweetheart and the mother is tolerable at times but everyone else needs to swim in lava.

It almost hurts to say that about Zo. I know she was off the deep end even before this update but to see her just dive right in like that and lose all chance of friendship never mind possible sexy time.

I see people asking for a Sam redemption arc but I don't see how that is possible. Let me put in perspective for you, if a guy attempts to rape a girl she would hate him for life. Everyone else would back her up in hating him. Just because Zo happens to be a fairly attractive girl people are happy to dismiss her attempted rape of someone vulnerable. Fuck that, she can burn with the rest.

The rest are just utter twats with no chance of a good outcome, especially the shitty sister.

In my case, the Zoey thing seems so over the top that I just want to believe that she immediately realizes how hard she has screwed up and will try to change. But yes, strictly speaking, she has no right to get anywhere near Alex anymore.

At least with Zoey we already knew that there were things about her that were off, that Brad guy's sudden transformation is plain insane.

 

[GokutheG]

My feelings on this update are a bit...mixed.

I like that Alex is trying to cheer up her mom. Got some background on why Ellie is the way she is and the dad is irredeemable.

Really disappointed with how Zoe was handled this update. It sucks that all options lead to the same outcome. Really wish these two could have talked and possibly accepted her feelings even tho things started fucked up. Overall I absolutely hated this part of the update the most because I wanted these two to start dating and it seems like they can't even be friends now and this came out of nowhere.

I find it hard to believe that Kevin would watch porn with a trans girl right in front of his dad but I guess it was to give more insight to his character. Surprised it wasn't that he'd get busted watching it in his room after his dad just barges in.

Holy fuck why are Izzy and Brad also complete pieces of shit? I didn't want Alex and him to start dating but I thought he was a decent enough guy that they could be friends but not anymore. Actually I think Brad's character was assassinated harder than Zoe's if you can somehow believe that. Alex telling Brad that she's trans makes no fucking sense. Why share such personal info with someone who was drunk and such an ass to her? She should of left as soon as he groped her. Did that bs really happen just for Brad to join Kevin's blackmail/humiliation scheme.

I just don't get what the fuck is going on with this writing. Seems like Zoe, Izzy and Brad were written this way just to push Alex and Chris together.

Overall this update was a massive disappointment. When I heard the dev say that this chapter will end on a bang I did not take it as a metaphor for my enthusiasm for the rest of the chapters. My hype for this game has just dropped by 95%. Chapter 6 needs to knock it out of the park but now I'm wary if Ill even enjoy the writting.

 

[AVNSnax]

My feelings on this update are a bit...mixed.

I like that Alex is trying to cheer up her mom. Got some background on why Ellie is the way she is and the dad is irredeemable.

Really disappointed with how Zoe was handled this update. It sucks that all options lead to the same outcome. Really wish these two could have talked and possibly accepted her feelings even tho things started fucked up. Overall I absolutely hated this part of the update the most because I wanted these two to start dating and it seems like they can't even be friends now and this came out of nowhere.

I find it hard to believe that Kevin would watch porn with a trans girl right in front of his dad but I guess it was to give more insight to his character. Surprised it wasn't that he'd get busted watching it in his room after his dad just barges in.

Holy fuck why are Izzy and Brad also complete pieces of shit? I didn't want Alex and him to start dating but I thought he was a decent enough guy that they could be friends but not anymore. Actually I think Brad's character was assassinated harder than Zoe's if you can somehow believe that. Alex telling Brad that she's trans makes no fucking sense. Why share such personal info with someone who was drunk and such an ass to her? She should of left as soon as he groped her. Did that bs really happen just for Brad to join Kevin's blackmail/humiliation scheme.

I just don't get what the fuck is going on with this writing. Seems like Zoe, Izzy and Brad were written this way just to push Alex and Chris together.

Overall this update was a massive disappointment. When I heard the dev say that this chapter will end on a bang I did not take it as a metaphor for my enthusiasm for the rest of the chapters. My hype for this game has just dropped by 95%. Chapter 6 needs to knock it out of the park but now I'm wary if Ill even enjoy the writting.

I guess I'm grateful that so many people have such strong feelings about the characters in a bit of adult entertainment. I tell myself that Summertime Saga forums don't discuss characters' actions and motivations much, and not because they're so fully formed and well thought out.

There were times after the first release last June where people complained that they didn’t understand how someone like Elliott could be the way she is. I had to bite my tongue because I knew future chapters included backstory that would help explain it. In the same way, I’d ask that you reserve judgement until the story is complete. Zoey's role isn't at an end.

I tried to establish right from the start that Zoey was an obsessive, flighty love interest. At first, all she ever wanted was Chris. Then, she almost immediately started fantasizing about giving Alex a blowjob. Next, she watched Alex masturbate in a public restroom stall. Then, she locked herself in her bedroom for a couple of days while endlessly pleasuring herself. She wasn't in her right mind and might ultimately be forgiven for that. Or not.

Bad things happen to good people every day. Even if you can't imagine *why* people in power feel that way, they do. Look at the misogynist racists in Washington trying to make it a crime not to be a Wonder Bread-eating, Bible-thumping, Caucasian Male. I wonder why these "patriots" feel it's their right to tell me how to live my life if it doesn't infringe on theirs. Personally, I have had to endure a lot of prejudice, physical attacks, and bullying by those you might feel are ordinary, everyday people. That's the case if you're "one of them," but if you're not...

Unlike a "typical" AVN, where a male protagonist can make no mistakes and gets all the girls, I wanted Confusion to be grounded more in reality than fantasy. Sometimes, people make questionable decisions, like Alex's not reading in Brad before they'd been on a couple of dates. But think about it from her point of view. Everyone told her that she should see if the relationship was going anywhere before committing to telling the truth about her sexuality. It was the first time she'd been faced with that situation. Mistakes made, and lessons learned.

I understand that some people feel there are shortcomings in my story-telling skills. Or lack thereof. Like Alex, I’m trying. Constructive criticism is always appreciated.

 

[dreddhead]

I guess I'm grateful that so many people have such strong feelings about the characters in a bit of adult entertainment. I tell myself that Summertime Saga forums don't discuss characters' actions and motivations much, and not because they're so fully formed and well thought out.

There were times after the first release last June where people complained that they didn’t understand how someone like Elliott could be the way she is. I had to bite my tongue because I knew future chapters included backstory that would help explain it. In the same way, I’d ask that you reserve judgement until the story is complete. Zoey's role isn't at an end.

I tried to establish right from the start that Zoey was an obsessive, flighty love interest. At first, all she ever wanted was Chris. Then, she almost immediately started fantasizing about giving Alex a blowjob. Next, she watched Alex masturbate in a public restroom stall. Then, she locked herself in her bedroom for a couple of days while endlessly pleasuring herself. She wasn't in her right mind and might ultimately be forgiven for that. Or not.

Bad things happen to good people every day. Even if you can't imagine *why* people in power feel that way, they do. Look at the misogynist racists in Washington trying to make it a crime not to be a Wonder Bread-eating, Bible-thumping, Caucasian Male. I wonder why these "patriots" feel it's their right to tell me how to live my life if it doesn't infringe on theirs. Personally, I have had to endure a lot of prejudice, physical attacks, and bullying by those you might feel are ordinary, everyday people. That's the case if you're "one of them," but if you're not...

Unlike a "typical" AVN, where a male protagonist can make no mistakes and gets all the girls, I wanted Confusion to be grounded more in reality than fantasy. Sometimes, people make questionable decisions, like Alex's not reading in Brad before they'd been on a couple of dates. But think about it from her point of view. Everyone told her that she should see if the relationship was going anywhere before committing to telling the truth about her sexuality. It was the first time she'd been faced with that situation. Mistakes made, and lessons learned.

I understand that some people feel there are shortcomings in my story-telling skills. Or lack thereof. Like Alex, I’m trying. Constructive criticism is always appreciated.

I was also a bit iffy on the character 'changes' in Zoey & Brad, but your's explanation makes a lot of sense.

Thanks for making such a great game.

 

[GokutheG]

I guess I'm grateful that so many people have such strong feelings about the characters in a bit of adult entertainment. I tell myself that Summertime Saga forums don't discuss characters' actions and motivations much, and not because they're so fully formed and well thought out.

There were times after the first release last June where people complained that they didn’t understand how someone like Elliott could be the way she is. I had to bite my tongue because I knew future chapters included backstory that would help explain it. In the same way, I’d ask that you reserve judgement until the story is complete. Zoey's role isn't at an end.

I tried to establish right from the start that Zoey was an obsessive, flighty love interest. At first, all she ever wanted was Chris. Then, she almost immediately started fantasizing about giving Alex a blowjob. Next, she watched Alex masturbate in a public restroom stall. Then, she locked herself in her bedroom for a couple of days while endlessly pleasuring herself. She wasn't in her right mind and might ultimately be forgiven for that. Or not.

Bad things happen to good people every day. Even if you can't imagine *why* people in power feel that way, they do. Look at the misogynist racists in Washington trying to make it a crime not to be a Wonder Bread-eating, Bible-thumping, Caucasian Male. I wonder why these "patriots" feel it's their right to tell me how to live my life if it doesn't infringe on theirs. Personally, I have had to endure a lot of prejudice, physical attacks, and bullying by those you might feel are ordinary, everyday people. That's the case if you're "one of them," but if you're not...

Unlike a "typical" AVN, where a male protagonist can make no mistakes and gets all the girls, I wanted Confusion to be grounded more in reality than fantasy. Sometimes, people make questionable decisions, like Alex's not reading in Brad before they'd been on a couple of dates. But think about it from her point of view. Everyone told her that she should see if the relationship was going anywhere before committing to telling the truth about her sexuality. It was the first time she'd been faced with that situation. Mistakes made, and lessons learned.

I understand that some people feel there are shortcomings in my story-telling skills. Or lack thereof. Like Alex, I’m trying. Constructive criticism is always appreciated.

I think I get where you're coming from with Alex making mistakes when it comes to dating but I was just confused how she was willing to share such personal information with Brad after cutting Zoe out of her life after they both acted in a similar manner.

I read Zoe's action more like developing a crush on Alex while crushing on Chris for so long and that caused confusion in her about her feelings which caused her to act out in...really weird and inappropriate ways. You wanting to base character reactions to things like that in reality just threw me off since in most adult games those actions would not be treated as serious as they are. I want to thank you for treating serious issues as serious in your game even if it involves a character I like.

Alex's anger and decision to cut Zoe out of her life was completely justifiable and I agree with it. I was just making excuses for a character that I like and I was just upset that it had to be one of the few people who has shown to genuinely care and support Alex. I do like that they may be able talk about this massive fuck up with the possibility to heal their relationship.

I am still looking forward to where Alex's journey leads her. You may be able to tell that I wrote my thoughts in that post as I was playing the game so my anger at the mistreatment of the girls was still fresh. I just want good things for Alex and for her to find more people that care for her not less.

 

[Marcypawn]

I'm in the process of downloading the new update, I sure hope nothing really bad happens in it!

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[PapaPhat]

I guess I'm grateful that so many people have such strong feelings about the characters in a bit of adult entertainment. I tell myself that Summertime Saga forums don't discuss characters' actions and motivations much, and not because they're so fully formed and well thought out.

There were times after the first release last June where people complained that they didn’t understand how someone like Elliott could be the way she is. I had to bite my tongue because I knew future chapters included backstory that would help explain it. In the same way, I’d ask that you reserve judgement until the story is complete. Zoey's role isn't at an end.

I tried to establish right from the start that Zoey was an obsessive, flighty love interest. At first, all she ever wanted was Chris. Then, she almost immediately started fantasizing about giving Alex a blowjob. Next, she watched Alex masturbate in a public restroom stall. Then, she locked herself in her bedroom for a couple of days while endlessly pleasuring herself. She wasn't in her right mind and might ultimately be forgiven for that. Or not.

Bad things happen to good people every day. Even if you can't imagine *why* people in power feel that way, they do. Look at the misogynist racists in Washington trying to make it a crime not to be a Wonder Bread-eating, Bible-thumping, Caucasian Male. I wonder why these "patriots" feel it's their right to tell me how to live my life if it doesn't infringe on theirs. Personally, I have had to endure a lot of prejudice, physical attacks, and bullying by those you might feel are ordinary, everyday people. That's the case if you're "one of them," but if you're not...

Unlike a "typical" AVN, where a male protagonist can make no mistakes and gets all the girls, I wanted Confusion to be grounded more in reality than fantasy. Sometimes, people make questionable decisions, like Alex's not reading in Brad before they'd been on a couple of dates. But think about it from her point of view. Everyone told her that she should see if the relationship was going anywhere before committing to telling the truth about her sexuality. It was the first time she'd been faced with that situation. Mistakes made, and lessons learned.

I understand that some people feel there are shortcomings in my story-telling skills. Or lack thereof. Like Alex, I’m trying. Constructive criticism is always appreciated.

Snax my friend, you know I love you but I must disagree with your opening here... giving any comparison between the superior, masterpiece quality of Confusion with that third rate 2D weird kink infested crap known as Summertime Saga is ridiculous. The story, rendering and overall game design are so much better in your title so as to defy any such comparison. It is like comparing a top of the line Mecedes or Lexus to a 70's Ford Pinto. Confusion requires the player to think about the experience and react. That other title is nothing more than mindless fap fodder. IMHO, it isn't even a good fap fodder title! You should seriously consider not making such a comparison again... People are sheep. Sheep are rather stupid animals... Hahaha

The reason no one talks about characters in that "other" title is because they are all one dimensional posing in overly cartoonish 2D renders. The reason that folks DO talk about your characters is because they have such elements of reality that they come alive! Since this story is told from Alex' POV the antagonists can be seen as more two dimensional, similar to how Shawshank Redemption is told from Andy's POV. Yet, the flashback sequences and the "what's going on at Kevin's house?" scene give us much more insight as to how these characters came to be as they are...

Bravo, Snax! Very well done indeed!

As for Zoey... I hope she is willing to make some changes in her behavior to allow her to be redeemed. However, if she is unwilling or unable to change then I must stand with Alex on not hanging with Zoey any more.

There's a word for folks who spend more time thumping their bible than reading it, just trying to push their own personal agenda rather than living the lessons taught in that book. That word is hypocrite! The God I know says, "Do not judge" and "Love one another." To me it is impossible to show anyone the love of God when you have a judgmental finger shoved in the other person's face! Love one another... Forgive to be forgiven... Do not judge... That is what I know and believe, not finger pointing. I have played the "anti-bully" for many of my dear friends over the years. Those who were different for one reason or another because of race, religion, nationality, physical attributes, sexual orientation or just being a bit weird.

Again, my philosophy is rather simple... There is no such thing as "normal." Normal is a figment of someone else's imagination and does NOT exist! There is only average. Average is extremely boring! We are each our own unique brand of weird so be different, be unique, be kind, be generous, be kinky, show love, share joy and be weird. But, most importantly, be you! There is only one you and it is up to you to be you. No one else can do that for you. Be a free thinking individual who loves and respects others as well as yourself! Peace

Honestly, my friend, I see no lack or absence of skill in your story telling, quite the opposite in fact. You are creating a one of a kind masterpiece of adult fiction here that transcends the AVN genre to go well beyond to be something much greater.

Adventure ever on, Phat

 

[Kind Nightmares]

It almost hurts to say that about Zo. I know she was off the deep end even before this update but to see her just dive right in like that and lose all chance of friendship never mind possible sexy time.

I see people asking for a Sam redemption arc but I don't see how that is possible. Let me put in perspective for you, if a guy attempts to rape a girl she would hate him for life. Everyone else would back her up in hating him. Just because Zo happens to be a fairly attractive girl people are happy to dismiss her attempted rape of someone vulnerable. Fuck that, she can burn with the rest.

The rest are just utter twats with no chance of a good outcome, especially the shitty sister.

I agree to this completely on all of this.

I may not have seen her obsession and it unsettled me, but her act ruined her character for me. Even if you imagine, for example, Brad in her place, who would go further in his groping (and I'm not even talking about how he behaved in the game), no one would give him a second chance. Just because she's been supportive in the past won't change anything. I mean, how can Alex even know if this support was sincere or just to get closer to her?

The same goes for Ellie. The more I learn about her, the less I want her and Alex to breathe the same air.

 

[FatGiant]

Oh, Oh, I've been busy with another title, haven't been able to get here yet... Reading the comments... oh boy it's going to be one of THOSE...

Me Aguarde (Wait for me)


Peace

 

[Avaron1974]

The same goes for Ellie. The more I learn about her, the less I want her and Alex to breathe the same air.

I hate that bitch.

She's a bitter, immature, vindictive, nasty, petty little slut that's going to side with people trying to ruin one of her siblings lives because she's jealous of a bit of attention and had her widdle feewings hurt because daddy stopped trying to play hide the sausage in her.

Now if the twins come out of this well on the other side, Sam is happy and the mother gets her divorce and the cockwomble brigade all get their downfall then all will be well.

I'd be questioning things if Zo gets her redemption but if it's done well I could live with it.

There is only one thing that could possibly ruin this game for me and that's if Ellie gets forgiven for all the shit she's pulled.

Being a sibling makes it worse than anyone else because she damn well sees and lives with the harm she's causing and just doesn't care.

If i'm forced to forgive her I will not be amused.

The only thing that could make the twins love any sweeter is if they let Sam in too. I think Sam deserves some love.

 

[Kind Nightmares]

There is only one thing that could possibly ruin this game for me and that's if Ellie gets forgiven for all the shit she's pulled.

Being a sibling makes it worse than anyone else because she damn well sees and lives with the harm she's causing and just doesn't care.

Moreover, she wishes this for Alex. Starting with the fact that she redirected bullying from herself to Alex in the past due to jealousy and now openly helps a man who almost raped a sister she didn't even hate initially.

The only thing that could make the twins love any sweeter is if they let Sam in too. I think Sam deserves some love.

Sam is another matter. She started out on the wrong side, sort of, but she certainly deserves the love of both sisters and possibly her mother and aunt, although it remains to be seen what kind of person she is.

 

[Canto Forte]

Summing up the woman hate brigade around this thread:
MC should somehow forget what it is like to be bullied and belittled,
something it/she/he has been seeing all about in the siblings,
and suddenly strive at becoming the vindictive bitch towards same siblings and wishing them ill.

Siblings, especially sisters, in this game tend to rely on one another,
because they could only help themselves outta being bullied by bringing
the other sisters in the hurt, to which the siters act all not knowing or caring of the hurt,
blaming the victim for asking for help and them all ending in the same predicament.

On top of that, it is suggested that the sisters accuse the victim too, because asking for help and the helpers
suddenly ending up in the same hole as the victim makes them more redeemable worth than the victim.