VN Ren'Py Abandoned Connected [v0.2.5] [ChainZero]

[FAP369ZONE]

Yes, Vanessa will be a LI. You'll begin to see her more soon, hopefully. She, like all my other characters, has a story to tell too but I haven't fully realized it as yet as I have with the others. For now, you'll just talk with her occasionally until I've fully grasped what I want to do with her character.

Well, I use characters from Daz, but they've all been fully morphed by me if that's what you mean by custom made. I didn't want my characters to look like anything I've played or anything I've seen before. The only one I morphed without any preset model whatsoever was Michelle. Michelle started as the default Genesis 8 model and I just went crazy from there.

Nice, very nice! Now that i know Vanessa will be a potential LI for MC i'm even more interested in your game

Yeah, ok... i see i was just curious. The main reason i asked this was because at certain angle Vanessa and Charlotte have kinda similar face which i found it interesting.

Anyway i think i bothered you long enough... i wish you all the best with your game, it really has potential. Good luck!

 

[Deleted member 444674]

Nice, very nice! Now that i know Vanessa will be a potential LI for MC i'm even more interested in your game

Yeah, ok... i see i was just curious. The main reason i asked this was because at certain angle Vanessa and Charlotte have kinda similar face which i found it interesting.

Anyway i think i bothered you long enough... i wish you all the best with your game, it really has potential. Good luck!

Vanessa, Charlotte and Ayana share different percentages of the same face model, but each are morphed very differently from the next. People have made the connection here in the thread as well, but none of them are exactly the same, (edit) e.g. Charlotte has bigger cheekbones than Ayana, Ayana has a more defined nose than Charlotte and Vanessa, so on and so forth.

And it's not a bother, trust me . I'm glad you and the others are so interested. Hopefully, I'm able to keep your interest going forward.

 

[des_0]

just loved It Great work

 

[spawn549]

good story so far IMO, looking forward to new releases

 

[-KC-]

ChainZero I Just wanted to point out that the use of Foster Parents and Foster Sister is incorrect, it should be "Adoptive".
Foster is for when you are a ward of the state and placed with a family. The family is also financially compensated for your care.

 

[Deleted member 1191611]

Does choice have any effect on story, seems there is teasing and so. But if choice have any effect is there a walkthrough ..?

 

[K18]

For Ayana's mother Gloria i see nothing wrong with her appearance. There are plenty of cases where a parent maintains an youthful appearance and be mistaken as a teen/young-adult or as a sibling to their children. Not every parent in these stories need to look weathered, full of wrinkles and grey hair. Unless you're toning her down so players don't ask you if she's a love interest for MC. (Wait... is she? )

Talking about appearances, nice looking MC and one of the light-brown skin persuasion, it's a rarity to find a decent looking MC who doesn't look like a douche-bag frat boy or a scrawny 12-year-old looking boy. Also, cheers for making the MC tall (6ft 3in - 4in), usually in other visual novel games you're stuck seeing an MC who's shorter than majority of the women. All the women designs look lovely, Nicole, Charlotte, Ayana, Gloria. There's Michelle with the Voss hair you often see used in games, i wonder how much of an outcry would there be if you changed it (Like in another game). I can see Nicole being a scene stealer/breakout character. Lola too.

That being said, don't you dare shave off Nicole's pretty bush.

Spoiler: I mean it

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I like the subtle eye movements, like Lola hearing MC at the door or Nicole checking out MC. With the mother, how hard are you gonna hit us with the feels? Because Fuck cancer.

 

[Deleted member 444674]

ChainZero I Just wanted to point out that the use of Foster Parents and Foster Sister is incorrect, it should be "Adoptive".
Foster is for when you are a ward of the state and placed with a family. The family is also financially compensated for your care.

Thanks for the correction, but did I make this mistake somewhere? Could've sworn I put "Adoptive" in the right places.
EDIT: Nvm, found the errors right away. Thanks for the correction.

 

[Ayhsel]

Very very nice to read. I love that it feels so real. Great job! Waiting for more of it.

Lola is definitely best girl.

 

[Deleted member 444674]

Does choice have any effect on story, seems there is teasing and so. But if choice have any effect is there a walkthrough ..?

Currently, the only effect these choices have is mostly held within their respective chapters. I don't want to overextend myself on creating too many branches too early. But things will branch out in time. And you don't need a walkthrough right now. Just play freely, but I'd go back and visit some other choices just to see each dialogue between characters. Most of the choices so far each present some dialogue that might give a little more depth to the character than another choice. But currently, there are no "right" or "wrong" choices here.

 

[SpikeZg]

btw love all the feet detail, don't stop with that

 

[MoreLinks]

Damn this game is great. I think I said this after the first update, but it feels like it has heart. Really doing a good job of building up these characters. It has me hooked.

And holy crap the characters are all gorgeous. Even Ayana's mom is a hottie, though I don't know if this game will be one of those types of games that lets MC just fuck everybody.

 

[pmyourladyparts]

God this is so well written I don't even care that there's been basically no fap material yet. I just want to keep reading and see what happens next.

 

[Sin Eater]

Honestly I gotta say thank you for this game... This week past week has been tough on me and a lot of folks. This put a smile back on my face. So again, thank you. I'm very interested in where the story goes from here. Wasn't expecting the undertones of colorism to be explored in Lettie's family dynamics and I'm curious what role it plays in the toxic nature she feels from her sister. I've dealt with that with some of my own family and its a very strange thing to experience. Absolutely love Aya and Lettie. Gloria is... scrumptious . Seriously, the shot with her and Aya walking to the kitchen did way too much for me... Should be ashamed of myself. Chel, Vanessa and Nikki are really cute. Lola is adorable. Trying not to get too attached to Susan, her condition hits a little too close to home for me.

 

[Yuri L]

I just started this today and I'm really happy that dev took the time to tweak the character models. Not that they were bad before but they look much better and more natural now.

 

[Mr. Vargas]

Yes. It's not something you have to worry about right now cause more time will go into actually building them up as friends first. As the summary states, it will be your choice if you only see her as a friend/sibling or if there's something deeper. But again, that won't be for a while. I can't really gauge when it'll be a factor, but I can say for sure it's not now.

Everything beautifully done so far. Great renders, interesting characters, a good story and dialogs are not boring at all. Building up with other characters are really well done.

I was sad about not seeing Incest tag but after I saw your post I feel relieved. I was afraid we won't get a chance to be with Charlotte. Because right now I'm in love with her

Can't wait for more. Thank you for this great game. Keep up the good work.

 

[mmmonsterkill]

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Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.2.320
v0.2
Sun Feb 02 10:18:14 2020

Annoyed route seems broken

 

[Grelk]

ok..finished..generally speaking..the writing is top notch...although i'm not a fan of the MC's inability to go for the luscious dame...wuss..tsk..BUT..the use of the "n" word by white folks is fucked up and really needs to go..its more offensive than scatporn..the renders are good for the dames and environment..but..WTF is up with his massive areolas :O he gonna lactate?

its a porn game lmao who care

 

[Famescua]

I started playing this game and it has potential. The girls are freaking gorgeous, all of them. Only problem I had with this game was that they took it so calmly and didn't even bring up the reason as to why the mom put them up for adoption. I don't know about most people but if I was told that all of a sudden I had a twin I'd be a but upset at the parent who put me up for adoption for taking away my chance to know my twin. But other than that detail the game is great.

 

[Petro28]

Well this impressed me beyond my good expectations. The quality of the work done here is very high and impressive for a new VN. The renders are great and the story, well the story is super nice and sweet maybe the most sweet story I ever encountered in adult VN industry. The plot is somewhat reminiscing of telenovelas; twins find about each other, from a meeting at the hospital in theirs birth mother's room who is terminally sick. A love triangle is certainly blooming and with blinding power of love comes drama. Of course love won't be the only source for conflict between characters, secrets and deep scars will play the role as well in moving the plot forward. Classic. However, this soap opera themed plot is written so well and sweet that I felt like I ate a bunch of cotton candy and not spoons full with salty tears of stay home moms.
This one has a lot of potential and promise. Good luck.