VN Ren'Py Abandoned Connected [v0.2.5] [ChainZero]

[oysterkeeper]

Anyone know all the nicknames that give you unique lines with Ayana? I'd love to see all the reactions. Thanks in advance.

 

[xBlackCaTx]

Loved the shower scene

 

[Valeck]

Thanks ChainZero for the update even if it is short was a very good one.
And Ayana is , every update she gets more lovable the other girls are amazing too, but Ayana and the MC are soo perfect together.

Spoiler: My favorite imgs

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[Mpkstroff]

They're black. Most characters in the game are except for a few. Confusing I know, that's mostly my fault for some conflicting design choices, but Ayana is black or Caribbean American and the MC is also black (along with his sister). MC and Charlotte are just very light-skinned (the blue eyes was probably a mistake but blue eyes made Charlotte pop out more to me, that's why I went with them.) The problem is it's causing more confusion than anything else. But it's too late to change honestly.

I'd say just think of Michael Ealy or the Hodgetwins lol. There are some exceptions to the norm for sure.

Well, it doesn't matter really in the end, no? I mean... the story will be the same. So, for me they are latinos hahaha xD
Good game dood!! Now a want mooarr!!

 

[throd33]

First time picking the game, it wasn't untill that moment that i realised that Ayana was 'black' (the renders at the end of the shower scene leave no doubt), maybe i need to check my screen settings lol

Spoiler: sudden realisation

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Story is original, MC's mindset is relatable, girls are gorgeous, Great work ChainZero

 

[Architect04]

This is good. Like real good. First play tonight and I am hooked. The characters mostly feel real and relatable. The sex scene felt like something that would really happen.

ChainZero Im a super excited to see were this goes keep up the amazing work.

 

[generic_username98]

It's a great game but gotta say though, it's hard to precive any characters introduced so far as persons of colour. They look more like people with mixed heritage to me.

 

[MoreLinks]

Always nice for a game to have shower scenes where the characters actually look wet, especially their hair. Instead of it rigidly staying in the same position. Those last shots of the BJ with her hair all slicked back? Hnnngh.

And I love the relationship between MC and Ayana. There are other VNs that have that playful banter type of relationship with another female character, but this one might be one of the best.

 

[paparas123]

Starring as the MC: Zach Lavine

 

[ShadowThrone]

So why the MC and Ayana aren't a thing already? They have been fuck buddies for some time plus they love each other, Why was she dating some halfwit when she clearly loves the MC?

have just started playing.

Why did she get angry with Derrick cheating on her? Wasn't she doing the same thing (or did you two go back to just friends while they were dating? from game : the two of you could doing anything with one another unless one of you found someone that we disrupt that). Not sure I would have accepted things if I was Derrick. (note : I am not commenting on the game itself, I am enjoying it so far, and from a game play perspective I am glad they are no longer together)

 

[Raeth]

Awesome narrative, the story has me hooked. The renders are gorgeous, and the animations are definitely good in my opinion. Well done, I look forward to more.

 

[ArturiousDesign]

Bumbaclaaaaat!!! Had me ROLLIN!!!!

 

[Deleted member 15555]

ChainZero dunno how people are not begging you to make her a LI yet

 

[mrmcfappen]

Good looking game. It contains the whitest blacks and the largest labrador, in the world.
The story felt a bit boring to me overall. It was sleep-inducing at times but luckily those times weren't many. Can't put my finger on why I feel like this, could be because I don't really enjoy slice of life kind of stories. Reading/watching an indecisive MC with little to no ambitions or goals, isn't really fun.

 

[eightypercent]

I'm struggling to find the right words... thanks ChainZero, for this rare pearl.

And I loved the part where you can choose a nickname for the MC to be used by Ayana... I found one that triggers a unique response from Ayana

Spoiler: MC's nickname

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[Bucketbot89]

ChainZero dunno how people are not begging you to make her a LI yet

Oh god please don't open that can of worms lol

 

[DrakoGhoul]

ChainZero dunno how people are not begging you to make her a LI yet

Lol, i joked about the possibility last update but i understand why that would be so wrong when you look at the plot.

 

[assman1337]

old saves not working :/

 

[pmyourladyparts]

Just thought I'd mention that if you choose not to give yourself a nickname with Ayana in certain scenes it seems to bug out and instead of your name being there the dialogue just ends up being [player_name] instead of your name. I kinda worked around it by just making the "nickname" the same as the default name.

 

[YoloCrayolo21]

Okay, so my old saves aren't working, do I have to start over again or is there a way to fix this? I wouldn't mind starting again but I'm kinda lazy so if I don't have to, better lmao