VN Ren'Py Abandoned Connected [v0.2.5] [ChainZero]

[Smarmint]

Michelle looks amazing. What a body. I am not a fan of the extreme tattooed look, though small ones can look nice. For the most part Michelle's tattoos work for her character, but I'd leave out the under-breast tattoo. Why mess with perfection?
But, that is a minor detail. She looks wonderful. Great job.

In that sense I would like to make just one remark: the new Ayana and Charlotte models are fantastic, but I think you overdid Ayana's stretch marks. IMHO they're too noticeable for such a young, non-obese girl.

I like them. It gives Ayana more character. Plus, it matches real life much closer than the flawless bodies we usually see in these games. Ayana is thin now, but what do we know about her past? Plus, many normal size women have stretch marks.

 

[bebiho]

I like michelles shape, hair, tattoos but I think her definition in the mid section is a little much

 

[89898hh]

God the models are A tier. Making me want the comeback even more.

 

[Uriel ☁]

New Michelle is fine af! But what about her glorious bush?

 

[Aristos]

I like them. It gives Ayana more character. Plus, it matches real life much closer than the flawless bodies we usually see in these games. Ayana is thin now, but what do we know about her past? Plus, many normal size women have stretch marks.

None of the other two girls has a single stretch mark in her butt.
I agree that a sexy but realistic body is much more attractive, but I must insist on what I said: those stretch marks are too long and numerous.
Now, if Ayana was previously obese and she lost like 30 kg (65 pounds more or less) I stand corrected, but in that case the weight loss should be noticeable in her belly and other parts of her body, not just in her ass

 

[Deleted member 444674]

None of the other two girls has a single stretch mark in her butt.
I agree that a sexy but realistic body is much more attractive, but I must insist on what I said: those stretch marks are too long and numerous.
Now, if Ayana was previously obese and she lost like 30 kg (65 pounds more or less) I stand corrected, but in that case the weight loss should be noticeable in her belly and other parts of her body, not just in her ass

Sup Aristos! If I may interject here, obesity isn't the only way to get stretch marks. The skin only needs to expand (or shrink) quickly in the effected area. This is the case in a lot of teenagers with fast growth spurts. A lot of the girls I've been with in the past, all of which have been Caribbean, haven't been obese but most had stretch marks around their ass. I think this is the case with most slim thicc girls, particularly brown skin/dark skinned.

Their bodies likely filled out quickly when they reached puberty. I used that same logic for Ayana's stretch marks. At no point was she obese, but she developed a woman's body fairly quickly.

 

[Coreless]

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Loving those thighs... Also the small details like small mole just above the upper lip. Really amazing job. Now really hoping that this VN be back on track!

 

[Coreless]

Will the dog get an update?

 

[Larry2000]

First of all, I'm glad you're back ChainZero. I've been watching your game for a while. I never jumped in because I figured it would be better to wait for a substantial chunk of content, but what kept me coming back to check on this game was the promise. The promise of a truly gripping and well told Incest game. That's my favorite fetish, but I don't see many games doing it the way I would like it to be done. Not to say some great games don't do it well, but there has always been this desire in me to see a realistic depiction of Romantic Incest.

There are games like Dreams of Desire that go hard on the sexiness. There are games like My New Family that lean in on the Harem and Love portions. There are even games like Dating My Daughter (at least at first) that leaned on the (slightly creepy) corruption aspect. These games do them right in my opinion, but not realistically. Not in a way that says "We are crossing a line that must never be crossed." DMD was the closest to acknowledge the taboo.

Connected has this great promise and it would be a shame if it didn't one day see the light shine through at the end of the tunnel.

Accept my well wishes and welcome back! Whether you update in the next month, or even in 2 years, I'm glad you're keeping the dream alive! <3

 

[Englen]

Here is updated Vanessa. She doesn't look much different because I was pretty much fine with her already. Updated her skin texture, got it as closed to it was before. Updated her to a Gen 8 figure as well. I wanted to experiment with some eyebrow assets because none of my characters have painted-on eyebrows, but I've been busy with real world shit. I'll try it later, but I already love how she looks. Doubt I'll change that small detail anytime soon, if at all.

- ChainZero

 

[FAP369ZONE]

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She looks lovely but tbh i liked the old model much more.

 

[MrFriendly]

Welcome back ChainZero, hope life treats you well. Connected was a great start to what could've been a great game. Whatever you end up doing just remember that a lot of the perverts on this site enjoyed your work. I understand the frustration that results from the pursuit of perfection, took me 30 years to actually write something with my "name" on it, I can only hope you are in a better place to tackle that particular demon.

 

[NoxLaw]

I'm gonna get a lot of shit for this because people seem to be into it but why do all these girls have such "monster" thighs? All of them seem to have same body type, average breasts, skinny waist and huge ass and legs. Obviously it's not that big of a deal, it's just putting me off a bit.

 

[fpsgamer]

I'm gonna get a lot of shit for this because people seem to be into it but why do all these girls have such "monster" thighs? All of them seem to have same body type, average breasts, skinny waist and huge ass and legs. Obviously it's not that big of a deal, it's just putting me off a bit.

Well i guess it's all preference, some are boob guys some are ass guys.
And I agree the new models through you off at first but thats only because previous model were perfect and hence were little unrealistic. Some people like realistic model with some flaw here and there, not a perfect body.
Have you played university of problem? Models in there have perfect body type but it makes them monotonous.
You can argue inbetween
if we should be incorparating flaws in model to keep them realistic
or
To keep 'em model flawless as it's a porn game at the end of day one use to fap we dont need realism.
Either way all we can do is follow Dev decision.

 

[Nulldev]

I think the problem is that the dev had a idea of the characters then he created 3d model what is not the 100% perfect copy of his idea. But the game came out so the players saw the characters, so to them the game version the real character. Now the dev makes a new model that closer to his ideal, it's an improvement for him, but the player only sees the difference from the original, which was the 100% version of the character in the player eyes.

 

[RobNorthman]

I was just thinking what a goddamned shame it was that this game was abandoned, it had such great potential. Imagine my surprise when I come back and find that there's still hope yet. Welcome back chainzero.

 

[D3xzalias]

Chainzero just posted an update on discord he is still busy with the game just irl and some other stuff kept him busy.

So he is still alive

Quick edit here is the message

quick update: I'm alive! And I didn't forget about Nicole! Just been very very busy with real world shit going back and forth, high and low trying to get some papers in order. Plus Nicole is a very weird character for me at the moment. She's exactly the same as she was in her debut chapter. Went back to her old ponytail and everything. Once I'm happy with her model I'll post her. Just haven't gotten to it yet. I wanna detail her skin a bit like I did to the others but I don't know the kind of effect that'll have on her texture. Part of the reason it's taken me forever to decide on a design for her.

 

[Antonie van Leeuwenhoek]

Chainzero just posted an update on discord he is still busy with the game just irl and some other stuff kept him busy.

So he is still alive

 

[OctoSky]

Hey Macarena!

 

[Dyonic]

Oh noo... nonono... don't change Nicole.