Just replayed the game from scratch since it's been a while and I would say those renders are still okayish but the early writing and intro are pretty rough and could use some work.What more could you want?
How about decent renders for days 1-3
(they do look poop as they were done on my old poopy PC)
What I mean is some kind of intro to put more context and some introductory gameplay to ease us in the mechanics of the game would be nice. ATM, the start feels a bit abrupt. Ripples by Jestur or Chasing Sunsets by Stone Fox Studios do it quite well if you want some comparison.
Anyway, thanks for your work, I love it and can't wait for the next update