I really liked this game earlier in development, but i feel like gloria turns me off. the dialogue with her is over the top to me, and I think that moving her into the "boss" location in the hallway menu would be much better, since that button is mostly useless.
as i play some of these games where it seems like the writing is done by a single person, often the same person that is doing the code, I am getting a certain impression over and over. The writer comes up with the script and then just... uses it. The revision process seems to mostly be copy edits at most. I think getting some feedback on the direction the writer is planning to take, and if it's just one person doing all the development entirely, getting some feedback from trusted sources on the plans may improve things a lot.
still digging the game, just my thoughts
ps,
@jackkane ... it's "money"