Alterism

Member
Feb 17, 2019
325
1,531
but Miko is an absolute upgrade.


You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.


Oh the evidence that Savin and Tobs are garbage humans is quite clear, I don't dispute that. The evidence that they intentionally fucked over Alder is what I don't have.
FoE could have died for any number of reasons and it's not like they were full time hired and paid staff. They were helping out a friend who was outside of the writing team and AFAIK they weren't contributing as some cohesive unit. Certainly not a SavIP type deal. Alder took breaks and took one break too many and diminished their desire to continue. Breaks when you're basically the only person keeping everything together have a tendency to hit you in the people who care to keep up to date.

And it's not just games like this, streamers and youtubers see their subscribers and general revenue absolutely decimated by any vacation they take.

Secondly we don't know these people.
Nobody interacts with these individuals to any real degree on a personal level and the only thing we really have is the (admittedly frequent) amount of times they wear their ass on their face. Even so, expanding that to vicious maliciousness to the extent of directly sabotaging the project of a supposed friend is a bit of a leap I can't get behind.

Though on the topic of wearing ass on face;
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

unfeeling ugly fox with graying hair that makes her look like a granny
She gets her emotions back if you choose her. Honestly I like that archetype a bit more when the cold exterior remains but the warm yet still reticent interior opens up. The ol "smile that's just for you" type of deal. But it's still good enough. She does somewhat of an approximations of cuddling after her scenes which is more than you get out of Miko.

Though it's not like many people pick her and fewer people have looked at all of her scenes. And I know nobody reads her scenes because the italicized bleed through and formatting error on her foot job is STILL there
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Censored to avoid inflicting it on people unawares.
Though it's possible people pick her and just don't read the footjob. Can't blame them.
 
Last edited:

MoneyMan181

Active Member
Sep 6, 2019
730
5,791
Secondly we don't know these people.
Nobody interacts with these individuals to any real degree on a personal level and the only thing we really have is the (admittedly frequent) amount of times they wear their ass on their face. Even so, expanding that to vicious maliciousness to the extent of directly sabotaging the project of a supposed friend is a bit of a leap I can't get behind.
See I would've agreed with you if you didn't just post those screenshots.

The fact that he could not be bothered to let someone down gently on their work getting rejected shows he can't even fucking be bothered to have empathy for someone on the other side of the screen. This person is offering to do UNPAID work for you to make YOUR product better. The submitter gets absolutely fucking nothing out of it. To be such an abrasive asshole to people who go out of their way to help prop up your shitty game is just awful form, even if the quality of said submission isn't good.

This man just killed someone's entire fucking interest in a hobby and damaged their probably already low self-esteem because he couldn't assed to be a little courteous. Fuck him. He's a prick. Not gonna call him a garbage human being, but I'd rather eat paint chips than interact with him.

Also fuck Khanivore for liking that prick's post. Absolute dickrider.
 

Mrbark1234

Member
Jun 3, 2022
143
851
So I haven't visited the OF in quite some time. I figured I'd see how submissions are going and if the writing crew are still abrasive. Turns out, that part hasn't changed
Jesus Savin could have showed that mastery of the english language in your response its not his fault the key off your chastity cage is gone you unwashed fanny
 
Last edited:

NODOGAN

Well-Known Member
Dec 11, 2017
1,397
2,182
Though it's not like many people pick her and fewer people have looked at all of her scenes. And I know nobody reads her scenes because the italicized bleed through and formatting error on her foot job is STILL there
You goddamn right, I didn't knew that, hell I have NEVER chosen her (nor done Kitsune pregnant content more than the first time) because:
A) Her default content with us fucking an unfeeling ass is not my kink (I didn't alchemy'd an 18 inches long horse cock with a knot for you to be reading woman!)
and
B) Is written by Tobs, the guy who writes porn so long my erection flags before I'm done with one of his sex scenes & this is a pregnancy progression with MULTIPLE sex scenes, screw-that-noise!...hell, I don't even remember the LAST TIME I rubbed one to Tobs' content! (is like trying to jerk off to the dictionary as you jump through paragraph after paragraph trying to get to the good stuff only to be jumpscared by the words CUMVEIN & BABY BATTER!)
 

zwere

Member
Mar 27, 2020
220
753
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Censored to avoid inflicting it on people unawares.
Though it's possible people pick her and just don't read the footjob. Can't blame them.
I haven't laid my eyes upon a shitsune scene in years and now I can safely say, it really wasn't due to bias or oversaturation, the way Tobs writes hick speak is absolutely atrocious and unreadable if'n ya know what i mean.
 

Meatshield236

Newbie
Feb 10, 2020
85
819
Tobs writes like a student trying to hit a word count. There's so much nothing that your eyes just slide over the words, and he always includes details that are already implied by his previous descriptors which clogs up the writing and leaves nothing to the imagination. The front half of second paragraph is just telling you that she takes special care of her feet doesn't do manual labor. That's it. It's first draft material, the kind of thing you spew out at first to get the ideas down which you then later refine into something actually good.
 

Deviton123

Active Member
Dec 9, 2021
969
2,442
See I would've agreed with you if you didn't just post those screenshots.

The fact that he could not be bothered to let someone down gently on their work getting rejected shows he can't even fucking be bothered to have empathy for someone on the other side of the screen. This person is offering to do UNPAID work for you to make YOUR product better. The submitter gets absolutely fucking nothing out of it. To be such an abrasive asshole to people who go out of their way to help prop up your shitty game is just awful form, even if the quality of said submission isn't good.

This man just killed someone's entire fucking interest in a hobby and damaged their probably already low self-esteem because he couldn't assed to be a little courteous. Fuck him. He's a prick. Not gonna call him a garbage human being, but I'd rather eat paint chips than interact with him.

Also fuck Khanivore for liking that prick's post. Absolute dickrider.
You know what's really funny? Savin spews all that bullshit, yet has TOBS as a writer. Whatever they wrote, I doubt it's worse than TOBS' 30k word obsession with "baby batter" and coins during a sex scene.
 

Noone202

Active Member
Jan 18, 2020
668
1,045
I see him in every Wuxia and Xianxia game community I look at so it wouldn't surprise me.
Is there any Wuxia or Xianxia game with sex, preferably pregnancy that you know of? Just want to see if Tobs is an outlier or they all write like him for sex scenes
 
2.90 star(s) 107 Votes