Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.7.28] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

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ara1111

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Warphorror said:
I don't understand why people point to word counts as a universal kind of quality and seem to forget the saying "If I had more time I would have written a shorter letter." The number of time I read a scene, especially story one, and the same information is repeated so many time, ruining the flow of their writing.
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u sit down
"wow", you say
"that's a heckin' big penis"
"the biggest", she says. "my penis is the biggest. the last penis you saw was the biggest, but mine is biggerer. it is very big"
you are sitting down, marvelling at her very big penis (it is very big, maybe even the biggest) and you get an erection... an erect erection - which is erect.
your straining erect erection is straining against your pants, straining against your erection, which is very big, but not the biggest; her penis is the biggest, and its marvelous, so you marvel at her very big penis, which is bigger than your 1192 triple sporked wonder penis
you put her big penis in her mouth and it somehow fits with little to no issue. (you do not have the biggest mouth; the writer just only cares about his oc's penis)
immediately you cum from her penis's musk, and the feeling of it filling your throat. it feels big. it is a very big penis. maybe, even, the biggest
she strokes your face with her feminine masculine arms an you smell her musk from her penis and her arm and you try to cum again but you can't (that would be a power fantasy)
she grabs your head, currently impaled on her very big penis, which is very big and also smells, which is bigger than yours, even though yours is bigger than an entire town (i guess she has very long arms)
she rams you up and down, down and up, like a toy
she cums
she cums a river. no, not a river. 2 rivers. 3. many rivers. the river of semen is almost as big as her penis. her penis which is very big.
"just my precum", she says, as she rams faster and harder, masuline energy oozing off her feminine frame, before she explodes
the explanation of her cumming is 2 pages long and mostly just says "ayyo fam she came like a lot dude it was pretty hot"
random time skip to the next day
she cums 2 more times in the same hour
random time skip
she fucked you for 15 hours, even though you could only cum once

This is pretty much every scene in CoC2 with a futa (which is like 70% of them)

You walk 2 tiles to another woman, with a penis. it is the biggest. the last penis you saw was the biggest, but this is biggerer.
(if you walk between these 2 women forever, you create an infinitely large conceptual penis. it will still be less big than the next woman you talk to. hers is the biggest. )
 
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ara1111 said:
u sit down
"wow", you say
"that's a heckin' big penis"
"the biggest", she says. "my penis is the biggest. the last penis you saw was the biggest, but mine is biggerer. it is very big"
you are sitting down, marvelling at her very big penis (it is very big, maybe even the biggest) and you get an erection... an erect erection - which is erect.
your straining erect erection is straining against your pants, straining against your erection, which is very big, but not the biggest; her penis is the biggest, and its marvelous, so you marvel at her very big penis, which is bigger than your 1192 triple sporked wonder penis
you put her big penis in her mouth and it somehow fits with little to no issue. (you do not have the biggest mouth; the writer just only cares about his oc's penis)
immediately you cum from her penis's musk, and the feeling of it filling your throat. it feels big. it is a very big penis. maybe, even, the biggest
she strokes your face with her feminine masculine arms an you smell her musk from her penis and her arm and you try to cum again but you can't (that would be a power fantasy)
she grabs your head, currently impaled on her very big penis, which is very big and also smells, which is bigger than yours, even though yours is bigger than an entire town (i guess she has very long arms)
she rams you up and down, down and up, like a toy
she cums
she cums a river. no, not a river. 2 rivers. 3. many rivers. the river of semen is almost as big as her penis. her penis which is very big.
"just my precum", she says, as she rams faster and harder, masuline energy oozing off her feminine frame, before she explodes
the explanation of her cumming is 2 pages long and mostly just says "ayyo fam she came like a lot dude it was pretty hot"
random time skip to the next day
she cums 2 more times in the same hour
random time skip
she fucked you for 15 hours, even though you could only cum once

This is pretty much every scene in CoC2 with a futa (which is like 70% of them)

You walk 2 tiles to another woman, with a penis. it is the biggest. the last penis you saw was the biggest, but this is biggerer.
(if you walk between these 2 women forever, you create an infinitely large conceptual penis. it will still be less big than the next woman you talk to. hers is the biggest. )
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Well, shit, lads. Thread's over.
 
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Sewyoba said:
Well, there were choices within one character's future, either corrupt them or love them (or ignore them). There was even some dedicking! I'll agree that COC2 doesn't have this. Content-wise, though, COC1 doesn't have as much stuff as COC2.
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Well it comes done to if you like tons of shallow content or a small amount but it goes deep with the level of interaction. I know I prefer the later.
Sewyoba said:
That stuff is text description I almost always skip. Like, a typical encounter in COC1 ends with a sex scene 3-4 lines long, and in COC2 it takes 3-4 pages
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This is just a lie or you're not remembering right.
 
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Warphorror said:
I don't understand why people point to word counts as a universal kind of quality and seem to forget the saying "If I had more time I would have written a shorter letter." The number of time I read a scene, especially story one, and the same information is repeated so many time, ruining the flow of their writing.
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Like the other person joked that's why it's the qualifier for "quality". Cause we can have the structure of , "she began worshipping the penis, licking base to the tip. The musk from a long day's travel lingering on each inhale and the texture of the hardening cock providing a high no drug or alcohol could compare to."

What we get is, "*1 paragraph about how she swoons you* - you unzipped her pants, the MASSIVE MEAT TOTEM breaking the underpants they were hiding into smack your face. A wet dollop as the ENORMOUS FUCK MEAT pulses like an angry dragon, waiting to claim the fair maiden in front. You take hold of the GINORMOUS JOHNSON, barely able to grab halfway around and it's only half-erect, you look up and see nothing but the PULSING COCK; it's owner breathing heavily behind the FUCK TOTEM in increasingly rapid breaths. You came here for a job and you're gonna earn your wet pay as you beging stroking in languid motions while tending to the THROBBING JEWELS below the MEAT PILLAR that's going to leave you sore for a week. The nuts are HUGE, THROBBING, like FLESHY MOTORS running overtime, churning MASSIVE amounts of sperm which you feel could use additional support. You stop the strokes, leaving the MASSIVE MEAT TOTEM throbbing overhead, seemingly angered at at the worship but you know what needs more attention at the moment as you dive face first into her HEAVY CROWN JEWELS slathering them with the tongue and cheek you held back on giving to their owner earlier. - *2 paragraphs about musk followed by 4 paragraphs of vague sex descriptions and how this was the best sex ever with the biggest dicked herm until the next one"

It's just chink phone game word fluff and thesaurus deepthroating. Like there's setting the mood for your writing for giving the viewer's more of a show but also we're playing a porn game and I want porn. CoC again never had the over fluff in sex scenes and even in more detailed ones I still just got some nice sex with light scene setting, this and tits are like 60% padding on sex scenes with 4 paragraphs describing how you licked their balls, 4 paragraphs how you liked it, 2 paragraphs on how the giver in the scene demeans you.
 
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chocolaterain96 said:
Like the other person joked that's why it's the qualifier for "quality". Cause we can have the structure of , "she began worshipping the penis, licking base to the tip. The musk from a long day's travel lingering on each inhale and the texture of the hardening cock providing a high no drug or alcohol could compare to."

What we get is, "*1 paragraph about how she swoons you* - you unzipped her pants, the MASSIVE MEAT TOTEM breaking the underpants they were hiding into smack your face. A wet dollop as the ENORMOUS FUCK MEAT pulses like an angry dragon, waiting to claim the fair maiden in front. You take hold of the GINORMOUS JOHNSON, barely able to grab halfway around and it's only half-erect, you look up and see nothing but the PULSING COCK; it's owner breathing heavily behind the FUCK TOTEM in increasingly rapid breaths. You came here for a job and you're gonna earn your wet pay as you beging stroking in languid motions while tending to the THROBBING JEWELS below the MEAT PILLAR that's going to leave you sore for a week. The nuts are HUGE, THROBBING, like FLESHY MOTORS running overtime, churning MASSIVE amounts of sperm which you feel could use additional support. You stop the strokes, leaving the MASSIVE MEAT TOTEM throbbing overhead, seemingly angered at at the worship but you know what needs more attention at the moment as you dive face first into her HEAVY CROWN JEWELS slathering them with the tongue and cheek you held back on giving to their owner earlier. - *2 paragraphs about musk followed by 4 paragraphs of vague sex descriptions and how this was the best sex ever with the biggest dicked herm until the next one"

It's just chink phone game word fluff and thesaurus deepthroating. Like there's setting the mood for your writing for giving the viewer's more of a show but also we're playing a porn game and I want porn. CoC again never had the over fluff in sex scenes and even in more detailed ones I still just got some nice sex with light scene setting, this and tits are like 60% padding on sex scenes with 4 paragraphs describing how you licked their balls, 4 paragraphs how you liked it, 2 paragraphs on how the giver in the scene demeans you.
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Yeah but there are people that unironically point to word counts like "wow 10.000 words" as if it really means something like comparing scene length between CoC and this.
 
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1000 words is enough.
Coc did have a lot of really short scenes that kinda sucked, but also a good number of long ones. The unofficial expansions like Xianxia, Anon, etc, would often have a lot of really bad scenes, short or long, which tended to veer to the shorter side, since they seemed to just accept anything contributed by anyone.
Dominika remains the best npc in either game and I think she was vanilla
Generally the scenes for winning fights were weaker in CoC1,
 
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YouShallNotLol said:
Literally who?
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npc from the vanilla game she has a cum addiction and a bunch of oral scenes to go with it, can be found in the tavern late evening
she had a lot more content planned but was never implemented so her story pretty much ends shortly after you get the spellblade from her
 
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1000 words is enough.
Coc did have a lot of really short scenes that kinda sucked, but also a good number of long ones. The unofficial expansions like Xianxia, Anon, etc, would often have a lot of really bad scenes, short or long, which tended to veer to the shorter side, since they seemed to just accept anything contributed by anyone.
Dominika remains the best npc in either game and I think she was vanilla
Generally the scenes for winning fights were weaker in CoC1,
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CoC1 characters as a whole are better than CoC2 characters.
Even, and may god forgive me for uttering this name, Helia is better than most CoC2 characters.
 
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Bro can someone please post the lattest update? I wanna see the new Charmer & Warrior Powers!
 
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