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I would add that cheating is an easy way to add drama to a story. I'm sure I'll get hate for saying this, but harem games where you know every girl in the game will happily fall on the MC's cock (and no others) gets a bit boring and repetitive in my view.
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not as popular as incest despite patreon
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that's why I think it's necessary for developers to release future tags
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"It's not repetitive": "a girl cheats and becomes addicted to any guy's dick" . So original!!! just every cheating game is like that
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You're correct, however the generally accepted way to do things is to put any future planned tags in the "Genre" spoiler box in the OP. You'll notice that in this case those are the same as the listed tags.
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Boring and repetitive can apply to any genre, it all depends on execution.
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Just turn on the TV and watch the news. That may give you some clues.
€: Ok, so I checked it out for 2 or 3 minutes. This seriously needs a proofreader, the engrish/typos are all over the place here.
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Update, apology in advance. Aberrantly Patreon does not allow incest. I will be tweaking the story and game scirpt for chapter1. Such a hot mess release. I will try to fix asap.
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Update, apology in advance. Aberrantly Patreon does not allow incest. I will be tweaking the story and game scirpt for chapter1. Such a hot mess release. I will try to fix asap.
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Cheating for devs: I am going to make a sex scene like countless others,
the likes of which anyone could find all over the internet,
gonna make it badly lit and short and totally unrelated to the plot,
to a point literally decades old porn clips look better and even have more story than my game,
then I will add sex tags for it and brag my game has sex scenes.
and no tension is ever found what so ever, we all know MC is a non variable in a game
we only get to play the one most uninteresting boring unimmaginative bad perspective ever,
because MC is a nobody with nothing worth telling even a joke about, let alone a novel or have a game about.
the likes of which anyone could find all over the internet,
gonna make it badly lit and short and totally unrelated to the plot,
to a point literally decades old porn clips look better and even have more story than my game,
then I will add sex tags for it and brag my game has sex scenes.
Cheating for tags: NTR - all girls are never interested in MC, so game is full of random bad sex clips of total strangers to the plot or any reason really, dialogues are incomprehensible
and no tension is ever found what so ever, we all know MC is a non variable in a game
we only get to play the one most uninteresting boring unimmaginative bad perspective ever,
because MC is a nobody with nothing worth telling even a joke about, let alone a novel or have a game about.
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Man, This one is getting a lot of attention from the start.
I made a corrected overview.
Overview:
Good luck and much success. Monlab1
Could a Mod Or Uploader post this on the OP? Thanks
Lunarmist
I made a corrected overview.
Overview:
In Critical Visit Meet Alex, the main character of this visual novel. Unlike teenagers his age,
he likes to spend his school breaks with his favorite Aunt Jane.
When he arrived, he soon discovered that Jane had divorced for the second time,
and many things had changed since his last visit.
As her relationship with her 4 daughters falls apart, Jane enlists Alex's help to figure out the issues and rejoin the family.
Immerse yourself in the story of Alex and his critical visit to help his aunt and discover her daughter's problems.
In the process, Alex also changes emotionally, physically, and sexually.
he likes to spend his school breaks with his favorite Aunt Jane.
When he arrived, he soon discovered that Jane had divorced for the second time,
and many things had changed since his last visit.
As her relationship with her 4 daughters falls apart, Jane enlists Alex's help to figure out the issues and rejoin the family.
Immerse yourself in the story of Alex and his critical visit to help his aunt and discover her daughter's problems.
In the process, Alex also changes emotionally, physically, and sexually.
Good luck and much success. Monlab1
Could a Mod Or Uploader post this on the OP? Thanks
Lunarmist
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Well FYI, there are two locations for dev's to add tags on this site. At the top of projects first page is where the present and future tags are usually located...and the Genre area is where the present only content tags go. Usually, …but some dev's also add below the present tags, future tags as well. Most know that more information posted at the start of a project, draws and keeps more people interest. (More people interested and following a project, a higher chance for potential revenues.)
But for me with the dev not posting any confirmed future tags, places this title on the watch only list for now. As I'm not interested in playing femdom, a wussy MC, MC jealous NTR, sharing content, or lesbian GG only content...without MC being any part of it. Though it's good to know NTR will be avoidable...I just hope that three letter term wont be constant factor, as a player has to continually try to prevent it from happening to MC's love interests. That makes for a game ending, boring and avoidable project for me to follow.
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Corrected correction for a summary anyone can read plainly:
main character PROTAGONIST in the OF THIS visual novel.
Unlike OTHER teenagersof his age,
he loves to spendthe break THIS VACATION with his favorite aunt Jane.
As he arrived, ARRIVING THERE, he WILL soon discovered that jane JANE had her second divorce,
DIVORCED A SECOND TIME and many thingshad HAVE changed from SINCE the last visit.
With Jane's relationshipbreaking apart from her 4 daughters,WITH HER FOUR DAUGHTERS FALLING APART, she asks Alex for TO help to HER figure out the problems and bond back to BUILD BACK UP THE RELATIONSHIPS IN the family.
Dive into the story of Alex and his critical visit to help his aunt and discovers her daughter's issues.
Throughoutit, Alex WILL also goes to UNDERGO changes himself:
emotionally, physically, and Sexually.
This game needs a perspective rewrite, the whole gibberish is lazy exposition.
Meet Alex, the
Unlike OTHER teenagers
he loves to spend
DIVORCED A SECOND TIME and many things
With Jane's relationship
Dive into the story of Alex and his critical visit to help his aunt and discover
Throughout
emotionally, physically, and Sexually.
This game needs a perspective rewrite, the whole gibberish is lazy exposition.